Kyoya Tategami Article: Could it be??? Kyoya Tategami pag-ibig story chapter 1- Rivals

Could it be??? Kyoya Tategami pag-ibig story chapter 1- Rivals

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Kyoya Tategami layed down on his crates in his warehouse and sipped on his soda laughing at benkei and the other members of the face hunters.He couldnt help but laugh. When an angry girl came through the door."Kyoya Tategami!!!!" she yelled and the looks of it she wasnt happy. Kyoya got up from the crates and smirked while walking to her.He sighed and took out his leone.He put it on his launcher and smirked evilshly."Is this what you want?" he asked. she chuckled and took out her bey and laucher and sinabi yes.they both were fighting against each other as their beys spinned and after a while there was smoke everywhere.It revealed to kyoya was the winner."There you go!" "I told you you would never beat me! Never will you bet me! noone bets kyoya tategami!" he sinabi chuckling.She got mad. "kyoya...... you will pay!! and thats my vow!!" Ill like to see you try. he sinabi chuckling and smirking at the same time.She takes her bey and puts it in her pocket and returns home. Kyoya and the face hunters continue to have their own fun cause its the begging of a new rivalry.

KattyOst lame

AlmostInsane Why is Luka at the bottom?

AlmostInsane Oooooh. That makes sense. I was confused because it was Luka xD >is a big Luka fan< ^^" Sorry if I upset you.

Kyouyasama Hey! Who's that girl??? Hikaru??

kyoyatategami2 No....the girl is my girl in beyblade

amu_hinamori9 i dont get it

FukamiKun This is good

kyoyatategami2 Thank you im still in proccess!

Julie-alice a great story writer that is what you call a story grammer mistakes, imagination, inspiration, the feeling you think others will admire these are the things that a storywriter needs.when you write a story you have to make sure the reader admires it you have to think at the readers point of view. there should be fun,excietment, explanation. try to explain the battle or people won't get it. if it is chapter one then write an introduction no introdudction what is Kyoya tategami laughing about, Why did Luka battle him .Why was she angry who is she anyway description atleast describe Luka.You even made grammer mistakes like Kyoya tategami should be written in capital letters.I really agree with KattyOst lame ofcourse. you guys better have an idea in you're minds while writing an article, imagination always help and when you write the battle its gives the reader the image of how it was and when you write the matter why it happened it give the reader a good expression and interest. i don't say you are not a writer you have the characterstics of a good writer just improve yourself. if someone finds a fault in you accept it and try to improve. I'm want everyone to be frank with me if someone says you're story is lame then accoring to them it must be at some point ask them your mistake an correct it this is how you become a great writer.

rowena3215 Is that Luka????-__-

kyoyatategami2 Julie i know i made grammer mistakes but now i changed....and rowena luka is nazumi