Hello MJ family, remember me? R.I.P CollageQueen(also known as powertothefoxes) What do you fellow fans think about my classic, original, story?

WARNING: this might contain some parts you may not like, if you disagree with it, you can tell me. one araw in the future I'm going to make a mini clip or movie out of this. you could give me some suggestions or something to tweek the story a little if you ever dislike my creativity. anyway, hope you enjoy the mini story:)P.S: Peterdaddy,MJpixy, I'm sorry I was offline because it was like an emotional rollercoaster for me. P.S: you might want to look closely.