What do you think of this?

Okay so I wrote a poem a couple of months nakaraan but when I came across it today I was like "OMG this so reminds me of Michael" which wasn't what it was about in the first place but it so reminds me of him and it made me cry :'(
So my poem is called "Who Am I" and I just wanted to hear your thoughts on it.
So here it is:

Who Am I?

Who Am I
Don't I have a right to be free
Why do I have to be torn apart just because I'm me
I'm human
I feel and I see
Exactly what you do to me

Who Am I
Separated because I'm different
All you are is ignorant
I'm strange
That's how you treat me you don't listen
Many know me but I feel hidden

Who Am I
I'm no different to you
I should stand up to what you do
I'm a prisoner
Why do we have to live in vain
You make people go insane

Who Am I
I am here asking why
Why so many have to die
I'm invisable
It's like no one hears my voice
It's time for us to make a chose

Who Am I?
I am me
You are you
We are we