(Again some characters might be OOC)
Naruto: Okay this place is SOOO much weirder than the last!! What is this place a theme park or something?!
Sasuke: WTF!! That guy has a freakin' ice-cream for a head!!!*points over to soften*
Sakura: And that guy is made from blue jelly!!*points over to halaya Jiggler*
Kankuro: What the hell is that weird kahel thing with the spikes!?*points over to Don Patch*
Gaara: uy i found someone normal....i think.Look at that guy with the blonde afro!*points over to Bobobo*
Bobobo: *Goes up to them* uy there! u guys seem Nawawala can we help u?
Naruto: Ummm yeah we could use some help
*A girl with short kulay-rosas hair walked up to them*
Beauty: U guys aren't from around here r u?
Sasuke: What gave it away.
*A boy with white hair walked up to them*
Gasser: U can come with us with u want?!
All: Okay!
Don Patch: uy can we go on the ferriswheel?
Bobobo: I see why not!
*A bald man appeared*
Hair Hunter: There u r Bobobo!!! Now prepare to be shaved!!!!
Naruto: WHAT THE HECK!!!!!
Kankuro: Looks like this guy's looking for a fight!!!
Sasuke: About time we get some action!
Bobobo: Stay out of this kidz! This is a mans job!! *battle pose* AHHHH super fist of the nose hair!!!*giant nose hairs come out of his nose*
Sakura: O.O WTF!!!!!!!
Gaara: R those nose hairs!!!!
Naruto: This ain't like any jutsu i've seen!!!
Don Patch: *Doing some weird dance* Wig out!! wig out!! wig out!!
All: 0_o...........
*The portal appears infront of Sasuke*
Sasuke: The portal it's back!!!
Kankuro: Thank god lets get out of here!
All but Kankuro: Agreed!!
*All run into the portal. Portal disappears*
Bobobo: Thatz what u get when u try to shave my afro Hair Hunter!!*looks around* Hey? where did they go?!
End of chapter 2
Naruto: Okay this place is SOOO much weirder than the last!! What is this place a theme park or something?!
Sasuke: WTF!! That guy has a freakin' ice-cream for a head!!!*points over to soften*
Sakura: And that guy is made from blue jelly!!*points over to halaya Jiggler*
Kankuro: What the hell is that weird kahel thing with the spikes!?*points over to Don Patch*
Gaara: uy i found someone normal....i think.Look at that guy with the blonde afro!*points over to Bobobo*
Bobobo: *Goes up to them* uy there! u guys seem Nawawala can we help u?
Naruto: Ummm yeah we could use some help
*A girl with short kulay-rosas hair walked up to them*
Beauty: U guys aren't from around here r u?
Sasuke: What gave it away.
*A boy with white hair walked up to them*
Gasser: U can come with us with u want?!
All: Okay!
Don Patch: uy can we go on the ferriswheel?
Bobobo: I see why not!
*A bald man appeared*
Hair Hunter: There u r Bobobo!!! Now prepare to be shaved!!!!
Naruto: WHAT THE HECK!!!!!
Kankuro: Looks like this guy's looking for a fight!!!
Sasuke: About time we get some action!
Bobobo: Stay out of this kidz! This is a mans job!! *battle pose* AHHHH super fist of the nose hair!!!*giant nose hairs come out of his nose*
Sakura: O.O WTF!!!!!!!
Gaara: R those nose hairs!!!!
Naruto: This ain't like any jutsu i've seen!!!
Don Patch: *Doing some weird dance* Wig out!! wig out!! wig out!!
All: 0_o...........
*The portal appears infront of Sasuke*
Sasuke: The portal it's back!!!
Kankuro: Thank god lets get out of here!
All but Kankuro: Agreed!!
*All run into the portal. Portal disappears*
Bobobo: Thatz what u get when u try to shave my afro Hair Hunter!!*looks around* Hey? where did they go?!
End of chapter 2
with ZABAZA demon of the mist
KAKSHI was in kama after using most
of his power SAKURA and both
SASKUE and there SENSI were bin mean
to Naruto first SAKURA shout at poor Naruto
my poor SASUKE got HIRT becomes of your
you all ways in the way why don't you
DISSAPER you loser and don't come back
sinabi a very angry SAKURA
you Naruto it wood be best if you were
never on this team to get in the way
sinabi KAKSHI yeah loser sinabi SASUKE
oh how sorry they were at that minuto
looking shock at Naruto with blood
coming out his body not red but ice blue
with that Naruto cry sniff in pain
I new from araw one you 3 hate me
like the rest of the VILLAGE
GESS there all right I am a demon a monster
don't worry you not going to see me ever again
I am going to end it sinabi Naruto as he run
fast he can to the forest
end of part 1