hello people

Remember when i asked for help with lyrics? well i came up with a song and i want your opinion on it please!
Ready? here it is:

My bloods pouring to the ground
And you dont even care.
I look at you pleading
And you just walk away.
You ripped out my puso and soul
burned them to ash.
Now you say your sorry?
You say you want me back?

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
You were the best thing in my life
Then you turned and walked away
You sinabi you loved me,
And still you walked away

You made me hate my life
Made me hate myself.
Youve driven me to all the things
I swore i wouldnt touch.
Im not some punching bag
For you to pound.
Im my own person
Not just someone in the crowd.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
You were the best thing in my life
Then you turned and walked away
You sinabi you loved me,
And still you walked away

Im not afraid or you anymore.
Im gonna make my stand
Stick up for myself.
Im gonna make my stand
You cant hurt me anymore.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
You were the best thing in my life
Then you turned and walked away
You sinabi you loved me,
And still you walked away

You sinabi you loved me,
And still you walked away