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posted by Cheesiecorn
A/N: Hi everyone. This is the first Hetalia fanfiction I've written. It's actually is a very long one shot, but I've decided to post it into parts. So here is the first part of "Die Blume aus Papier" (It's German for ''the paper flower''). The story takes place during the cold war, It's rather sad, but I hope you like it!
Part 2:link Part 3:link

It was very cold in the segundo buwan of the taon 1959. All the people in Berlin stayed inside to warm themselves up behind the cozy fireplace. But there still was a little boy somewhere in the east of Berlin who stayed outside. His sad blue eyes stared at the white kalye while the wind made his short blonde hair dance. A tall woman opened the door behind the boy ‘’Ludwig would you please come inside? You might catch a cold.’’ Ludwig stood up, walked to the living room and sat down susunod to the old sofa where a ten-year-old boy was coughing heavily.
The boy had blonde hair just like Ludwig. His eyes were also similar to Ludwig’s, the only difference was the brown color. It was not hard to see that the two boys were brothers. The boy's mother sat down to check his temperature ‘’Oh dear you’re so warm.’’ She sinabi and she looked at her other son ‘’Mutti is Gilbert going to die?’’ asked the eight-year old boy while he looked at his mother with worried eyes. His mother nodded and started to cry. ‘’No! That can't be true.’’ Ludwig cried out. ‘’I’m afraid it is.’’ sinabi his mother. Ludwig cried while he held his brothers hand tightly.
Gilbert reached out his other hand and wiped one of Ludwig’s tears away. ‘’Ludwig?’’ he sinabi weakly ‘’Will you promise me something?’’ Ludwig wiped the rest of his tears away ‘’What is it, brother?’’ Gilbert coughed a bit ‘’Promise to never forget about me.’’ ‘’I’ll never forget about you brother. ’’ Ludwig sinabi while he tried not to cry ‘’I promise’’ Gilbert started to smile ‘’Thank you, I’m so glad’’ he sinabi and he gave his little brother a hug.
‘’What’s in your bag?’’ he asked curiously? Ludwig took a box of tsokolate out of his bag ‘’Here our neighbor gave this to me but you can have it.’’ ‘’Thanks’’ Gilbert sinabi while he opened the box After he ate a few bonbons, he picked up the paper in the box and started to fold it. Ludwig watched him with all his attention. His brother could create beautiful things with just a simple piece of paper. ‘’Done’’ Gilbert said, and he gave the bulaklak he fold to his little brother. ‘’This will help you think about me.’’ Ludwig accepted the bulaklak and walked to his room. A paper bulaklak he fold a few weeks nakaraan laid susunod to his bed. He picked up the flower, walked back to living room and gave it to his older brother. ‘’Now you can also think about me.’’ Ludwig said. Gilbert smiled and started to yawn. ‘’Are you tired dear?’’ his mother asked. Gilbert nodded. ‘’Shall I leave you alone then?’’ Ludwig asked. Gilbert shook his head ‘’No! I want you and Mutti to stay with me.’’
Ludwig walked to the sopa and sat susunod to his brother. His mother did the same and started to stroke both of her boys’ hair. Suddenly Gilbert accidently dropped the bulaklak his brother gave him. He desperately tried to pick it up, but he knew that he didn’t even had enough strength for that. Ludwig saw how his brother was fighting for the flower. He picked it up and put it on his brother’s chest. With a feeling of relief Gilbert smiled at his brother and sinabi ‘’Thank…. you…. Ludwig’’ The dying boy closed his eyes after he sinabi his last words.
Ludwig felt sad, he knew that his brother would never wake up again. He hold his hand and remembered how they played games together, How Gilbert always saved him from the bullies that were taunting him, the warm summers they spend in the lake and the cold winters where they gave each other warmth.
Ludwig’s mother felt the pulse of her little boy. She embraced her youngest son and sinabi ‘’He just turned into an angel.’’ Ludwig had never felt so sad in his life. His one and only brother whom he loved and respected so much was gone. Ludwig burst into tears and ran to his room. He just wanted to be alone.
After a while his mother came in. ‘’How are you feeling Ludwig?’’ she asked. Ludwig sighed ‘’I miss Gilbert.’’ Ludwig’s mother sat down susunod to her son ‘’I also miss him.’’ she sinabi ‘’But, he’s still with us you know.’’ ‘’Really?’’ Ludwig asked surprised. ‘’Yes, in here’’ his mother sinabi as she pointed her finger to Ludwig’s chest ‘’Gilbert is an angel, he can watch the earth from heaven. It doesn’t matter where we’ll go or what we do, Gilbert will always be with us.’’ Ludwig dried his eyes ‘’Yes, that’s true.’’
posted by Tinekraut
There are how many of my mga kaibigan over here have already went away from fp. The fellows I’ve talked to in my early days here and many of the familiar faces are nowhere to be seen now too. I have to take a break from online community as well from time to time and it may take madami and madami longer for me to return every time. But then again, it’s not unusual for me to be absent for long and I’m not really sure when I could get back (It might take me a month, 3 months, half a taon or so, or, who knows, maybe susunod week I might ipakita up. I just don’t know.) and I’m not sure when and if I’ll be able to get the chance or not to check you up guys whenever I’m in a period of being too preoccupied. So I’ll no longer leave notice as always if I’m going to go missing. Sorry if I can’t always be here to sumali you guys *bows apologetically*. My account stays here though while my mga kaibigan remain in my heart. ^^d So you take care of yourselves then. ~
posted by Cheesiecorn
A/N Here's the third and last part of my fanfiction. I hope you've enjoyed the story
Part 1: link Part 2:link

By the time it was 1989 Ludwig and Maria were the proud parents of two children. The seven-year-old Fabio and the five-year-old Bella. One araw Ludwig was having a snowball fight with his son when Maria came outside. ‘’Ludwig’’ she sinabi ‘’You’ve got a call. It’s your mother’’ Ludwig was surprised calling someone abroad was expansive so he was sure that his mother got some very important news. He ran inside and answered the phone
‘’Hello Mutter’’ he said. ‘’Ludwig’’...
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posted by Cheesiecorn
A/N, Here's the segundo part of my fanfiction. There susunod part will be the last one. Have fun reading.
Part 1: link Part 3:link


Slowly days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months. One araw in April Ludwig came tahanan from school, and saw that the suitcases were packed . ‘’Mutti what is this?’’ he confusedly asked. His mother looked at him while she closed a suitcase ‘’Honey I found a job in a bakery in the west.’’ ‘’The west?’’ Ludwig asked surprised ‘’But that’s far away right?’’ ‘’That’s why we’re going to live with grandma.’’ She said. Ludwig...
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