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"Tear drops on my balance beam" Chapter 4

-What's next?-

.. Groggy...

 ..Headache...

..Sick to the stomach...

This is how Manitoba felt when he woke up in his room the susunod day. He was in his pajamas, and under the thick covers of his bed, but he felt terrible. His head was spinning and throbbing with each movement, and his stomach twisted with discomfort.

The rays blinded him, but the adventurer couldn't ilipat away. So, Manitoba just got up anyway. He walked down to the kusina to see his brother. Who was surprisingly drinking water, and looking jut as tired as Manitoba did.

"Hey, Vito." The other twin asked. "Where's mum and dad?"

"They're at some swamp meet thing to look for antiques an crap." Vito replied irritably as he sat at the table. "Man, that party was crazy last night." he rubbed his head.

"No kiddin'." Manitoba grabbed a glass of water and sat near his brother. "What happened? The whole night was a blur! All I remember is drinking something."

Vito got a smirk on his face and started laughing. He was so close to gagging as his banged his fists on the mesa hysterically.

Manitoba looked confused. Looking at his brother as if he took a few crazy pills before he woke up. He finally mustered up the strength to ask..
"Whats so funny?"

"Y-You didn't see the pictures?" Vito snickered while wiping a tear from his eye.

"Pictures?"

"Check this out!" the shirtless young adult pulled out his laptop. He opened up a tab and typed until Facebook came up. "Tasha uploaded pics of her party online! You wouldn't believe how many dudes saw it!"

Manitoba's eyes nearly popped out of his head when he saw many pictures of himself doing stuff at the party. One of him dancing with a bunch of cute girls. Another one potraying him drinking many shots, and another halik Tasha.

There were about 10 madami pictures of him and his brother dancing with Tasha and Anne Maria and doing other crazy stuff. They were all put under one caption: The Smith Twins party hard at my graduation party.

The twin boys had gotten many good comments and compliments from other graduates.

"She face booked it, googled it, twittered it, my spaced it, and put it on tumblr." Vito was still trying not to laugh. "I musta' rubbed off on you."

"whoah. Look at all the comments! I don't even remember doin' any of that!"

"You drank madami shots than me! So, I had to drag your lazy asno home."

"wait." Manitoba ran into the bedroom, dug in his pocket, and took out the crumbled piece of paper that had Tasha's number printed on it. He ran back to the kusina looking excited. "I for got sheila gave me her number! I gotta call her."

"I don't think that'll be a good idea, bro." Vito through his glass in the sink and slouched on the couch. "She sinabi she's packing today. She's moving out of her parents place to some condo  called , 'Red Valley'. It's some apartment complex for graduates."

An apartment complex?, Manitoba thought. So that's it. He could never see Tasha again. Unless he talks to her in Facebook and twitter, she's too far away to see everyday..Unless.

"I gotta idea!" The adventurer snapped. "You wanted to ilipat out as soon as possible right?"

"True dat." His brother lazily replied.

"Why don't we ilipat to 'Red Valleys'? You can get Anne Maria to ilipat in with you, and I can get a room near Tasha."

"You want to ilipat an oras away from here just to see this girl?" 

"Um, yeah?" His brother was unsure now.

"Hah! Didn't know you had it in you, bro!" Vito gave his brother a pat on the back. "Why not? Let's Go!"

Maniotba sighed in releif, then waited for their parents to come tahanan to tell them. After telling them, they gave the okay. It didn't take time to call the complex, Vito manage to get a good room with his girl. While Manitoba was just getting his.

"Red Valleys office, Mr.Clause, may I help you?"

"I'd like a luxury room." he asked. " 'Just graduated from college."

"Your in luck! We have one left! Your the last one! Your room will be ready in a week!" Mr.Clause finished.

"Thanks!" Manitoba replied as he hung up the phone.

Manitoba and Vito managed to get their rooms, when at the same time Svetlana and Dakota were trying to find a place to stay.

"Hey Svet!" Dakota greeted her best friend at the door. 

"Hello Dakota!" The dyimnasta let her friend in and shut the door. "Mother! Dakota is here! We're going in my room!"

"Okay!" Penelope replied while in the kitchen.

The two mga kaibigan enter the large room and shut the door.

"The party last night was very fun!" Svetlana complimented her BFF.

"I know! I loved it too! And I also noticed thy you had a thing for Reginald!" 

"Oh ,No! We're just friends!" sinabi a shy Svetlana.

"Yeah, sure!" Dakota joked. "I don't think he wanted to be friends."

"Dakota, you know I don't want to be in a relationship yet!" her friend said. "Besides, I don't even know much about him!"

"I know! But you need some romance!" The blonde rolled her eyes. "Anyway, have you thought of moving out of your moms place?"

"I have, but I don't know where to go! I have no clue which apartment place I want to live in."

" How about 'Red Valleys'? It's a cool apartment complex for graduates! It's only an oras away!"

"An oras away!?" Svetlana thought out loud. That's too far! She wanted to stay as close to her mother as possible. The brunnete wasn't sure if she wanted to ilipat that far. "I don't know, Dakota.."

"I know Reginald will be there.." She gave a sly smile.

Svetlana was instantly convinced, but she didn't want to admit it.

"It wouldn't hurt to try!" She rubbed her shoulder bashfully.

"I knew it!" Retorted her friend.

The brunnete went to her mother after  her blonde friend left.

"Mother, what do you think of me moving out?"

Penelope was a little uneasy about the idea. She wanted to be near her daughter so she wouldn't risk losing her. After Arnold died, Penelope's main priority was Svetlana. She really wanted to make sure her daughter was safe.
    Svetlana did explain that all of her fellow class mates will be there. Also that she knew everyone and their are land lords and security to keep them safe. 

   After giving the okay, the dyimnasta wanted to call in to order a room.

When the phone was answered, Mr.Clause wasn't the one to pick up, but actually Mrs.Clause. His sweet, innocent, wife.

"Red Valleys, Mrs.Clause speaking, how may I help you?"

"Yes, I wanted to order one room. I just graduated from college."

Mrs.Clause looked at the ordering papers, seeing only one room left. 

"Your lucky, Sweet heart. There's only one room left!" 

"Oh, thank goodness! I'll be moving in soon! And thank you!" The dyimnasta hung up the phone.

Sadly, Mrs.Clause hadn't read the papers right. Her husband had marked that spare room as 'taken', for which she could see it very well. So Svetlana accidentally has the same room as Manitoba does!

Let the drama begin....

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Done another chapter! I haven't updated in a while because of school starting and stuff, so review and tell me what you think! I'll need your (The readers) help soon, but I'll explain that in the susunod chapter.
 Mike
Mike
susunod chapter. I have a headache and I'm tired, but yet I still write my story. Why? Someone answer why I continue to write. JK. See what happens when Mike find out about his MPD. Now......on this story.......right now....................BANANA!!!
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"What is it, doctor? I want my little boy to be OK," sinabi Mike's mom. "I'm not sure. I need Mike to stay over night for further testing. I will need you back around 2:30 tomorrow," replied Emma. "OK," sinabi Mike's mom. She kneeled susunod to her son and hugged him hard, "It'll be OK, Mike. Emma here will...
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posted by emmab13
I just decided to write this because it's almost Halloween. Also in this artikulo Mike doesn't have MPD. I'm sorry if you wanted him to have it, but he doesn't and I think you'll really enjoy this article.
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It was a windy, fall day. Halloween was in a couple days. Five teens walked through the halls of the school. Their names were Mike, Zoey, Vito, Svetlana, and Manitoba. Of course these teens had friends, but they had no idea who each other were. They barley paid attention to each other. It was time for lunch, and...
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 TDROTI
TDROTI
I realized that I have at least one thing in common with every TDROTI character. So i decided to share them with you.
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Zoey- I'm sweet and I really hate jocks.

Mike- I'm crazy, but I'm also really cool and a nice person.

Dawn- I really connect with nature and animals.

Cameron- I'm kinda a nerd.

Brick- I'm tough, but i have a good heart.

Dakota- I like having my picture taken.

B(Beverly)- I don't talk a lot.

Sam- I play a lot of video games.

Jo- I like exercising and to beat boys.

Lightning- I'm a sports person. I like to be captain.

Anne Maria- I like fashion and messing with my hair.

Staci- I lie to make my life better.

Scott- I can be mean when I want to.
 Teams
Teams
added by jaylatyler
Source: total drama revenge of the island ibon ng dyey Bird
TDBB14

"Tear drops on my balance beam"
         Chapter 14

14 chapters already?! Dang! Anyway, I pag-ibig doing these! And I pag-ibig all of the people who continuously review and give me confidence (you know who you are :D) now I only have 9 oneshots left until we get to the good parts! If you think that's too much, then just tell me and I'll cut it down! On with the story!

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-Babies-

Svetlana loved babies.

It was an unspeakable love. She loved their chubby cheeks. Their toothless smiles, and the way they squeak and coo is just too cute to pass by.

Whenever her an Manitoba watched TV,...
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 Thanksgiving
Thanksgiving
Hey. I thought it would be cool if I wrote my first Thanksgiving article. This one has all the characters and there's a twist. The twist is Mike and all of his personalities are, wait for it................ related. OK, now to the artikulo
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"Hurry up. I don't want to be late," exclaimed Mike. "OK, OK. I'm coming," replied Zoey. Mike And Zoey were headed off to Mike's parent's house for Thanksgiving this year. Mike was excited to see all of his relatives. "Ready?" asked Mike. "Yeah, I'm ready,". The two of them were headed off to the house...
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posted by SvetXMani
 Svetlana
Svetlana
I wanted to write a classic story in Total Drama Revenge of the Island style. The story is The Nutcracker. I hope you enjoy it.
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It is pasko Eve at the Peterson's house. A large and grand house with the most beautiful puno imaginable. The Peterson's are hosting their annual pasko party, welcoming the arrival of their family and friends. The children, Svetlana and Mike, are dancing and playing as they welcome their mga kaibigan too." I'm so excited to see all of my friends," sinabi Svetlana excitedly. "Yeah. Yeah. Yeah. I'm just excited...
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TDBB12

Tear drops on my balance beam
       Chapter 12

One shot 5: thunderstorms

Crack!

Snap!

Boom! 

The weather rages outside of Red Valley like a soon to be hurricane. The college grads are ligtas in their beds. None even exposed to a drop of rain. Everyone seemed in peace, all except for one person.

Svetlana.

She was supposed to be sleeping susunod to her roommate when the thunder and lighting had scared her. She was trembling in her kama and shaking with anxiety. Which manitoba was startled sa pamamagitan ng her weeping.

Tears were streaking down her face. Sobs were escaping her lips.

Svetlana hated to cry, but sometimes,...
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 Mike
Mike
Chapter number 5. This one's going to be cool because Mike finds madami about his MPD. My Pagsulat process is a lot harder than it looks. First, I have to write it. Then, I have to reread and check it on a different computer. Also, I have to find pictures. It takes me about 2-3 days, maybe longer. I'm off topic. Let's see what happens in the story next.
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Mike's mom rushed to the phone while his dad spoke to Mike. "We think you have a something wrong with you". "What do you mean, daddy?" asked the worried boy. "You have just told us that you were...
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 Mike
Mike
Here's the susunod chapter. Hope you like it. : )
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Headache

Tired

Groggy

This is how Mike felt when he woke up. He was in the nurse's office. And there was someone susunod to him. That's right, Zoey. She looked and him smiled then sinabi " Hey, Mike. How you feeling?". "I don't know. I'm tired and groggy. Also, I have a headache. What happened?"asked Mike, tiredly. The nurse came over to Mike. "Here, take this". The nurse handed Mike an aspirin and a glass of water. He took it then looked back at Zoey. "Well, you were about to climb the rope and sa pamamagitan ng the way you looked...
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JO
JO : oh you guys don't you see when I was alittle kiddy and the sun was going dooowwwnnnn ....
annemaria ; tell me she not
jo ;the darkness and the shadows would always make me frooowwwnnnn
camron; she is
jo ; id hide under my unan from what I though I saw but granny may sinabi that wasn't the way to deal with fears at all
brick ; THEN WHAT IS ????
jo; she sinabi : " joey , you gotta stand up tall learn to face your fears you'll see that they wont hurt you just laugh and make them disappear " "HA HA HA " ( mutan disappears )
brick,anne,zoey,mike,and Cameron ; (gasp)
jo and mike ; SOOOOO !!!! , giggle at the ghostly guffaw at the grossly crack up at the creepy whoop it up with the funly chortle at the kooky snortle at the spooky
and tell that big dumb creepy face to take a hike and leave you alone and if it think it can scare ou its got something else coming and the very though of such a thing makes you wanna .... HAHA HAHA ... HEH ....LLLLAAAAAUUUUGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
posted by cannibalZoey
AnneMaria :
Type unicorn mane : puffy and purple coat: kulay-lila cutiemark : hairspray can eyes : purple
B :
Type : unicorn mane : black amerikana : green cutiemark : a rinch eyes: blue
Brick (prince ) :
Type : anticorn mane black amerikana : green cutiemark : dog pananda eyes : red
Cameron :
Type earth mane red amerikana yellow cutiemark a book eyes glasses with brown
Dakota :
Type unicorn mane kulay-rosas amerikana kulay-rosas cutiemark camera eyes green
Dawn (1 of princess Jo's faithful students )
Type peagus mane blonde amerikana green cutiemark a leaf eyes blue
Jo ( princess ) :
Type anticorn/ sebra mane looks like Luna's amerikana dark...
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added by cannibalZoey
TDBB9

Early birds

So sorry I haven't updated all week! I usually do it frequently, but evidently, I  lost it. So here it is!
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Sun shining.

Birds chirping

It was morning. The best time of the day. The sun was rising in a shield of gold, the morning dew was just starting to set, and certain alarm clocks were chirping on other floors. But this morning was a little madami early than planned.

It was about 2am. The teens in Red Valley were still asleep. The dew hasn't even set, and the sun wouldn't dare to come out on this hour.

Manitoba was fast asleep in bed. Snoring and laying limply in his sheets....
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TDBB8

One-Shot 2: Make up

Manitoba always wondered why Svetlana wore make-up. 

"Because it makes us women look better." She would reply. "It adds tone and volume to our skin."

The male still didn't understand why his roommate wore the sloppy stuff. To him, it was just basically a jar full of color that made you look like clown. It made you look like a fool.

Manitoba was sitting in the living room with his roommate one araw when he was just itching to ask her;

"Why do you where make-up?"

Svetlana turned and gave him a look.

"I already told you." She stated. "It makes girls looks cleaner in facial appearance....
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TDBB13

Tear drops on my balance beam
       Chapter 13


One shot 6: Sick day


It's flu season once again. Everyone was getting sick, one way or another. Vito had gotten a cold a few days ago,  And Svetlana's friend, Dakota had just gotten over a cold.

Svetlana was mostly immune to colds. She always lived in cold weather, so she always bundled up to make sure she wouldn't get sick, but this time, she caught something.

Achoo! Achoo! Aaaaaaachooooo!

The young girl sneezed repeatedly as she looked at her muffled reflection in the mirror. She groaned and rubbed her red eyes.

Svetlana had woken up feeling...
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TDBB16

Tear drops on my balance beam chapter 16

-Thanksgiving-

"Come on, Manitoba!! We're going to be late!" Svetlana called in a rather irritating voice. She crosse her arms and tapped her foot.

"Why are you rushing? We're only going to my house for thanksgiving, not a banquet!"

"I want to  present myself, you know that!" The girl exclaims as she puts a kulay-rosas sweater and scarf over her white tank top.

Manitoba rolled his eyes and sighed."Fine, let's go."

Manitoba was at least nice enough to invite Svetlana over to his tahanan for this cool Holiday. Thanksgiving was a big thing in his house. All of the...
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 Mike and Zoey
Mike and Zoey
Here's my first pasko story. I hope you enjoy it. It's the Night before Christmas. Total Drama Revenge Of The Island style. In this story there will be no dialogue.
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Twas the araw before pasko and all through the house, everyone was stirring, even a mouse. Everyone was getting ready for pasko Eve night. Cooking goodies and wrapping gifts. The Roger's family was exited for pasko night. There was Mike, Zoey, Emma, and Peter. Zoey and Emma were cooking there special dinner, cheese and tsokolate fondue. While they...
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added by jaylatyler
Source: total drama revenge of the island ibon ng dyey Bird