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posted by alicia386
Crime: Dectetive Story




Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

      Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling or at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful and delighted. Maybe a little anxious about Marco but he was a grown man, he is okay. He could take care of himself. All that mattered right now was to walk inside that church looking amazing. So what if Faye was upset, she'll get over it. Faye should stop worrying about her missing gun.
      Simone sat in the very front of the church. It had to be the best view of the new and young pastor. Paster Carter was unbelievably hot. His stunning blue eyes and wavy dirty blonde hair that always fell in the right place. His chiseled features were only complements of his silky white skin. Could it be impossible for one man to look so much like a god? He may be 23 but she was 16 which means they were only 7 years apart. They could make it work. It wasn't like it was illegal, was it? Besides her father was madami wrapped up in his work then to see her drooling over the new pastor. She would corner him after church and see if he would talk about whatever they talk about in church. Someday she will have him. He will be hers.
      Immediately after church, she did what she promised she would do. She caught up to him right before he went inside his truck. "Um, Pastor Carter," Simone began. The ugly green color of the truck and the rust almost made her feel discourage but still continued.
      "Please, call me Shawn," He smiled. The rumor was true, his teeth were extremely shiny. They could blind anyone within a mile.
      She giggles, "Okay Shawn. Do you think we could have some coffee. I need help on this ulat for school. They gave us a winter assignment. The topic is, My paborito Person and I chosen God." That was a major lie. Simone wasn't religious like that. She barely attended church.
      "I'm so joyful to see that you are interested in the workings of god. I'd be honored to guide you towards the lord." He pulled out his iPhone and began typing. "Lets meet at McDonalds say 1pm?" She nodded and he finished typing. They sinabi their goodbyes and he drove off. 
      She was twirling on her heels. Right in that moment, she wasn't caring about how she looked or if her heels would be ruined. She cared about the wonderful things her and Shawn would do together once they started dating. She wasn't thinking about the stress her mga kaibigan were going through.
      The susunod thing she new was that a brown sack was being placed over her body. She was brutally thrown inside a van while some guys were talking.
      "Hey boss, are you sure this Martinez guy was right?" asked a rough voice.
      "If he wasn't, he's dead!" answered an even rougher, deeper voice. Simone held her breathe as they began the rocky journey on the road.
Chapter (15):
Abbie stared at the spot where Lily had just vanished, and wondering wether she might actually ipakita up to talk to her, she turned away walking behind her parents and her brother Noah, Leo walking susunod to her "I saw him, that boy" she said, "What boy?" asked Leo, "The boy in the gernie" sinabi Abbie, "The one who almost died?" asked Leo again, "Yes and he did die sa pamamagitan ng the way they just brought him back" replied Abbie, "Did Lily see him?" he asked curios madami than ever, "Yes, and he almost gave up if it weren't for her I would have been dealing with two ghosts not one" answered Abbie,...
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THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT madami THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 1

Kikikyo stared straight ahead as he flew. Clutched in one foreclaw was a book of centaurian poetry. His father, King Parthurnax, disapproved of the centaurian pag-ibig poems contained within the book.

"Love? Bah! In my day, we didn't have anything called love. You modern dragons aren't tough," his father had sinabi the week before. Kikikyo could remember thinking, <Here we go again. Another speech on how the ancient dragons were better.> Between his young son (at the tender age of ten-and-seven) and...
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posted by rory2011
the last paper from Mary's life fall down ,she know why she will die ,it's not just because the money ,it's because she's a woman in a poor family in this terrible world ,but she can't do anything now
Mary put her sons in their beds wishing for them a good dreams ,her tear was in her green eyes ,her tear give her eyes sparkle

Mary and David thought that the kids are in a deep sleep ,so they took their chance to change their clothes and get ready to go when the sun will start to rise
Mary was looking at the sky from the window ,David were sitting susunod to her ,but his eyes were on the floor...
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posted by sawfan13
The tiny ballerina figurine
As unique as an owl in winter
As beautiful as pasko morning joy
It stands alone, looking at the other toys in the girl's room.
She remembers when she first got her.
Her birthday.
Will never forget her reaction.
Other mga manika came and went
But not the little figurine.
She dances slowly as the girl falls asleep
Her porcelin skin cold and shiny
Pretty white tutu dress
Always ready to dance and bring happiness
One araw she was ignored
Weeks and days went by
Her owner, forgetting her presence.
The girl grew more, and her nightlight went
Making the ballerina feel scared and alone.
The...
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One dark and cloudy night, a couple of mga asong lobo howled, awakening madami and madami werewolves. They set a curse upon the world that would destroy all humans. The people of the world had hunted millions of wolves, a great number of them werewolves, and as a result, had killed millions of werewolves. Now, the mga asong lobo were seeking revenge.

As Byron woke up on a foggy morning, he was alarmed sa pamamagitan ng the sound of wind rushing by, followed sa pamamagitan ng loud howls. But as he looked out his bedroom window, he saw nothing. Byron raced downstairs, and seeing his parents were asleep, he went outside. Byron was ten,...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Three years later
    Beep! Beep! Beep!
    I moved my hand and turned off my alarm clock, wow, it’s six o` clock already. I groan as I rub my eyes and slowly get our of bed. I took a shower, the warm water wakes me up a bit. After I finish drying off, I put some clothes on.
    As I walk to the mirror, I feel compelled to look at myself again, I’ve felt compelled too ever since Dorothy died. We’ve always had this connection,...
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Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" sinabi Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" sinabi Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted you like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...
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posted by alicia386
This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a segundo father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to ilipat from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from susunod door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing you can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the bituin of David. He was a Jew.
 bituin of David
Star of David
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and you found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...
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posted by alicia386
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Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy or sadness? He couldn't tell. When you think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came sa pamamagitan ng this morning. She asked him out on a petsa and he sinabi sure. He couldn't believe he sinabi that. 

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...
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posted by Problematic129
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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. You see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother ilipat back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...
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Prologue


Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital kama were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.


It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, you may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...
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posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a taon and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a buwan before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane pagkain is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First araw of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer or Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read books and she thought that maybe I could meet some new mga kaibigan that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is sa pamamagitan ng tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at Pagsulat a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm Pagsulat is in the in the section below. If you like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen taon old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my dyaket with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. uy watch where you’re going! “Sorry you Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle sinabi for you to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right you will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing madami then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger puwang and tons madami gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different nakakita of the outside building. One monitor was ipinapakita a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed sa pamamagitan ng my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
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Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are you bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris or Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy or anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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