I for got to say that this happend befor breaking dawn and that I'll name the chapters ^^!
so chapter 1 was called: the first sight and bite of a girl name victoria...
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chapter 2: Meetings
She finally let me go, letting me fall to the floor. "you are such a pure little girl, your blood is like sweet honey." she said. I knew I was dying, I was about to black out, the last thing I saw was someone or something pushed her out of my way and someone picking me up. And then...total blackout.
>>>>3 hours later
When I woke up, I saw a boy looking at me with a wide smile. I closed my eyes and flinched thinking he would hurt me but when I opend them, he just kept smiling. the boy had curly dark brown hair and grayish eyes."hi there cutie! What's your name."
"I'm danni. Danni Nowicki, and you are?" I said. "emmett. Emmett Cullen." he sinabi holding out his hand. I looked at it for a few minutos and shook it. "um, how long have I been out? Am I dead? Is this heaven or hell?" I asked. "you're not dead, but you could say your in heaven," he sinabi looking around the room. "I lived here all my life."
"you were born here?" I asked.
"you could say that," he sinabi smiling. "excuse me, would you like to see the rest of my family?" he asked. "sure, you think they'll like me?" I asked. "ya, I'm sure of it!" he sinabi taking my hand and liftting me up. "hey guys, come meet danni!" he sinabi shouted from what I guess was his room. And one sa pamamagitan ng one, 7 people came in. One of them jumped at me and hugged me, the one with spiky pixie hair. I didn't know what to do, so I just hugged back. "I'm Alice Cullen." she sinabi releasing me. "hello."
a beautiful blond girl walked up to me. She wasn't smiling, but her eyes were. "hi I'm rosealie, but you can call me rose." she held out her hand. I reached for it and shook it.
A small girl with brown hair came next. And all of a sudden, a name poped in my head. 'Bella Swan'.
"hey, I'm---"
"Bella Swan." I said. They all went quiet. "di-did I say something wrong? Was that not your name?" I asked. Bella came to sit susunod to me, "yes,but how did you know that?"
"never mind that Bella, hi I'm Esmeralda, but you could call me esme." A dirty-blond haired woman came and welcomed me with a warm hug.
Emmett got up and pushed two men closer to me.
"danni, these are my brothers Edward and Jasper." they held out their hands and shook. And finally, a man with blond hair came and shook my hand.
"hello danni, I'm doctor carlisle Cullen." he said.
"hello..." I said. "um may I ask a qustion?"
"ask away."
"why did that woman bite my neck so hard that a bleed?"
so chapter 1 was called: the first sight and bite of a girl name victoria...
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chapter 2: Meetings
She finally let me go, letting me fall to the floor. "you are such a pure little girl, your blood is like sweet honey." she said. I knew I was dying, I was about to black out, the last thing I saw was someone or something pushed her out of my way and someone picking me up. And then...total blackout.
>>>>3 hours later
When I woke up, I saw a boy looking at me with a wide smile. I closed my eyes and flinched thinking he would hurt me but when I opend them, he just kept smiling. the boy had curly dark brown hair and grayish eyes."hi there cutie! What's your name."
"I'm danni. Danni Nowicki, and you are?" I said. "emmett. Emmett Cullen." he sinabi holding out his hand. I looked at it for a few minutos and shook it. "um, how long have I been out? Am I dead? Is this heaven or hell?" I asked. "you're not dead, but you could say your in heaven," he sinabi looking around the room. "I lived here all my life."
"you were born here?" I asked.
"you could say that," he sinabi smiling. "excuse me, would you like to see the rest of my family?" he asked. "sure, you think they'll like me?" I asked. "ya, I'm sure of it!" he sinabi taking my hand and liftting me up. "hey guys, come meet danni!" he sinabi shouted from what I guess was his room. And one sa pamamagitan ng one, 7 people came in. One of them jumped at me and hugged me, the one with spiky pixie hair. I didn't know what to do, so I just hugged back. "I'm Alice Cullen." she sinabi releasing me. "hello."
a beautiful blond girl walked up to me. She wasn't smiling, but her eyes were. "hi I'm rosealie, but you can call me rose." she held out her hand. I reached for it and shook it.
A small girl with brown hair came next. And all of a sudden, a name poped in my head. 'Bella Swan'.
"hey, I'm---"
"Bella Swan." I said. They all went quiet. "di-did I say something wrong? Was that not your name?" I asked. Bella came to sit susunod to me, "yes,but how did you know that?"
"never mind that Bella, hi I'm Esmeralda, but you could call me esme." A dirty-blond haired woman came and welcomed me with a warm hug.
Emmett got up and pushed two men closer to me.
"danni, these are my brothers Edward and Jasper." they held out their hands and shook. And finally, a man with blond hair came and shook my hand.
"hello danni, I'm doctor carlisle Cullen." he said.
"hello..." I said. "um may I ask a qustion?"
"ask away."
"why did that woman bite my neck so hard that a bleed?"
Hi! I had a hard time getting this chapter out because I had to edit it. I made it a teen rated chapter instead of an x rated chapter so, enjoy!
Chapter 13
Bella's POV
I blushed when James asked me the question. "Really"?, I asked. "Really. Will you sleep with me"? I thought for a moment. "Yes". James picked me up. He walked me over to the kama and deposited me on it. He crawled on tuktok of me. "You're beautiful Bella. Any man would be lucky to have you"., he whispered in my ear. He nibbled on the shell of my ear after he was done talking. I shuddered. "I've never done this before"., I said. James stopped. "What"? "I've never had sex before. I'm a virgin". "Really"? "Really". "Wow. I don't care". He kissed me hard. Then he trailed his lips down my body. He ripped my clothes off. "Damn it Bella, you're beautiful".
Sorry that it was so short. As I said, I had to edit. In my copy, its four pages long. Review please!
Chapter 13
Bella's POV
I blushed when James asked me the question. "Really"?, I asked. "Really. Will you sleep with me"? I thought for a moment. "Yes". James picked me up. He walked me over to the kama and deposited me on it. He crawled on tuktok of me. "You're beautiful Bella. Any man would be lucky to have you"., he whispered in my ear. He nibbled on the shell of my ear after he was done talking. I shuddered. "I've never done this before"., I said. James stopped. "What"? "I've never had sex before. I'm a virgin". "Really"? "Really". "Wow. I don't care". He kissed me hard. Then he trailed his lips down my body. He ripped my clothes off. "Damn it Bella, you're beautiful".
Sorry that it was so short. As I said, I had to edit. In my copy, its four pages long. Review please!