This is my own story which was inspired sa pamamagitan ng the twilight series and I had an idea to write my own story about Bampira but I only managed to write the preface only so I would appreciate some comments on it and perhaps some ideas to make my story interesting but to any future writer please do not copy this as this is my idea and i hope to get it published if I do finish this story. Thanks everyone!
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my dyaket around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby puno and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my puso was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and mapait November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These tanong filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the comments coming in.Thanks for your comments..
Preface
I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my dyaket around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby puno and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my puso was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and mapait November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These tanong filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.
That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the comments coming in.Thanks for your comments..
I personal would like to just speak my mind. To all of you don't want her to be Jane, I guess I understand. But, I like Dakota Fanning. She's a great actress and I think she'd be great. Here are some reasons why I want he to be Jane.
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. She's been in TONS of movies, so she has experience.
2. She looks the role (In my opinion.)
3. She in "Push" so I would think she has some experience with things like New Moon (and the rest).
4. She's always the good-girl. For once she should be bad.
Those are only some that I can think of at the moment.
If you don't want her to be, I respect that. Also, if you think that, leave a comment saying why or why not please!
Also, if you actually read this:
Thanks!
1. He tells her to stay away from him.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his sando and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in pag-ibig with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He kalapati her tahanan when she felt sick.
2. She says shes not afraid of him.
3. He lets her cry on his sando and ruin it.
4. He just wants her to be happy.
5. She trusts him.
6. He didn't kill her
7. When the car threatened to crush her all he could think was "Not her"
8. The lion fell in pag-ibig with the lamb.
9. He left her only for her protection.
10. He won't end her life for her.
11. He took her to the prom because he did't want her to miss anything.
12. He feels very protective of her.
13. He risked blowing the family secret to save her.
14. He is her "Prisoner".
15. He dazzles her.
16. She doesn't care that he is a "Killer".
17. He sayed with her in the Hospital
18. He watches her sleep.
19. She always forgives him.
20. He kalapati her tahanan when she felt sick.
Distributor: Summit Entertainment Release Date: November 21, 2008
Genre: Romance Running Time: 2 hrs. 0 min.
MPAA Rating: PG-13 Production Budget: $37 million
TOTAL LIFETIME GROSSES
Domestic: $138,552,000 86.7%
+ Foreign: $21,325,749 13.3%
= Worldwide: $159,877,749
DOMESTIC SUMMARY
Opening Weekend: $69,637,740
(3,419 theaters, $20,368 average)
% of Total Gross: 50.3%
Widest Release: 3,620 theaters
In Release: 17 days / 2.4 weeks
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I got into the house.I knew that it was worse than james I held my Drink.
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my tumawid bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
madami avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and apoy filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was pagbaba "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Edward We need to be prepared.I could train with Jasper he wasin the army before he was turned. He could train us both me and Buffy .I held my tumawid bow "Hmm"I oiled it .
I saw that my tojo blades were getting rusty
I decided to Grab all my slaying stuff.
madami avanced Sliver stakes but doesn't work as well as holy water and apoy filled Cross.
I ran down to the basement.I felt pain from another.It was Jazz.He was pagbaba "gone With The Wind".
Oh god why "jazz please stop i can feel your hurt."
huh?
It's one of my abilities now stop felling sorry for your self and help us didn't you hear from edward theres a new evil in town!
Okay, this might be a big-old pointless rant, but i absolutely hate when people BASH on other character (i'm not saying any names) and i'm not just talking about Jacob-hating. If you want to bash on Jacob or any other character for that matter go the Jacob-Hating Spot, and if their isn't one, create one then!!!! I don't mind people sharing well-though out and intelligent opinions, it's just that i'm absolutley sick of all this hating on Jacob and Jacob lovers! I hate completely and utter idiocy comments done on this spot for Twilight mga manliligaw IN GENERAL like "Jacob f*** sucks!" and we've all seen it and heard of it, and i doubt this artikulo will make any difference but i needed to get it out of my system. You don't see me going aroung saying things like "Edward sucks, and Bella will ALWAYS belong to Jacob." because it would seriously piss of ALOT of people. My thoughts. That's all. Don't care if someone comments on this just to somehow piss me off.
(End of pointless-rant)
(End of pointless-rant)
Kristen, 18, recently sat down with MSNBC and dished about the book series that has everyone talking. “(I) lived with the first book. For like three months or however long that was, and I haven’t been able to ilipat on.”
She says of co-star and on-screen pag-ibig Robert Pattinson who plays Edward Cullen, “He was so different from everybody else that came in (to audition). He’s very responsive, he sees and he listens. And that’s very important, that you’re not pagganap in a scene sa pamamagitan ng yourself.”
