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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:
“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push tabing-dagat were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. madami water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised the deep, barking voice. Jacob. My eyes flew open, desperate to see my best friend, but also out of guilt. I had not thought about him in what I thought were to be my last moments on this Earth.
Black and red spots dominated my sight, leaving me with only a few glimpses of Jacob’s face. I expected his eyes to be filled with hate and anger, to him it must have seemed like I just committed suicide. Instead of fury, I saw desperation and tears. I had never seen Jacob so child-like and vulnerable, not even when he was sprawled across his far too small bed, sleeping.
The rock struck me again.
The rock was not as cold as I expected. The rocks in the water had been like ice against my skin. Everything around me had been dead cold. Nothing was warm. Although, now, I could feel heat pulsing towards me, reminding me of Jake’s skin ever since he had become a…a wolf. My skin was burning from where the rock grazed any exposed flesh of mine.
Even though the heat reminded me of Jacob, the burning reminded me of whenever he would touch me. The tingling on my skin whenever our bodies touched in any way. My brain was working a lot slower than usual, due to the lack of oxygen, but I then realised, it was no rock. It was Jacob’s hand. He was saving my life and, once again, I was thinking about Edward. I mentally kicked myself, Jake deserved better than the way I was treating him.
An ear splitting crash of thunder and spark of lightning caused my vision to become even madami impaired. One thought made me loose consciousness again, one thought brought me back to reality, and that one thought caused my body to weaken even madami and smash back into the needle sharp stones beneath me.
Baseball.
(A/N: If you don't get the baseball thing, it's because the thunder reminded her of when she played baseball with the Cullen’s. Only further torturing her with thoughts of Edward.)
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:
“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push tabing-dagat were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. madami water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised the deep, barking voice. Jacob. My eyes flew open, desperate to see my best friend, but also out of guilt. I had not thought about him in what I thought were to be my last moments on this Earth.
Black and red spots dominated my sight, leaving me with only a few glimpses of Jacob’s face. I expected his eyes to be filled with hate and anger, to him it must have seemed like I just committed suicide. Instead of fury, I saw desperation and tears. I had never seen Jacob so child-like and vulnerable, not even when he was sprawled across his far too small bed, sleeping.
The rock struck me again.
The rock was not as cold as I expected. The rocks in the water had been like ice against my skin. Everything around me had been dead cold. Nothing was warm. Although, now, I could feel heat pulsing towards me, reminding me of Jake’s skin ever since he had become a…a wolf. My skin was burning from where the rock grazed any exposed flesh of mine.
Even though the heat reminded me of Jacob, the burning reminded me of whenever he would touch me. The tingling on my skin whenever our bodies touched in any way. My brain was working a lot slower than usual, due to the lack of oxygen, but I then realised, it was no rock. It was Jacob’s hand. He was saving my life and, once again, I was thinking about Edward. I mentally kicked myself, Jake deserved better than the way I was treating him.
An ear splitting crash of thunder and spark of lightning caused my vision to become even madami impaired. One thought made me loose consciousness again, one thought brought me back to reality, and that one thought caused my body to weaken even madami and smash back into the needle sharp stones beneath me.
Baseball.
(A/N: If you don't get the baseball thing, it's because the thunder reminded her of when she played baseball with the Cullen’s. Only further torturing her with thoughts of Edward.)
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9: Send him pag-ibig letters and sign them “You dearest Victoria”.
8: Constantly think about halik Bella. Run!
7: Lock him in a room with Mike, Tyler, Eric, and Jacob. Give everyone except him a picture of Bella.
6: Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
5: Whenever he leaves a room or says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
4: Make him go out with you to a fancy restrant for his Birthday when it isn’t his Birthday. Get all offended when he won’t eat anything. Start crying.
3: Whenever he complains or argues, reply with “What are you gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
2: Buy him a dog. Name it Jacob.
1: Don’t think.
Oh... one madami thing.... RUN!!!
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I felt bad for leaving without one word to Nathen, but I knew I couldn't leave without one word so I said;
Look, I'm sorry I made you mad, but... I couldn't even finish my sentence.
No, I shouldn't have gotten so mad it was stupid of me anyways to know if you cared where I lived. Nathen said.
Its ok. I sinabi with a yawn.
I think someone needs to go to bed. Nathen sinabi with his oh so perfect grin that I loved.
Nathen carried me up to my room, like he usually did. I fell asleep against his warm chest. It was great to know that me and Nathen had made up. I didn't like to be mad at anyone. It is hard sometimes for me to forgive people but its usually not that long till I do forgive them.
I told Nathen goodnight and that I loved him and he sinabi the same back to me.
I felt bad for leaving without one word to Nathen, but I knew I couldn't leave without one word so I said;
Look, I'm sorry I made you mad, but... I couldn't even finish my sentence.
No, I shouldn't have gotten so mad it was stupid of me anyways to know if you cared where I lived. Nathen said.
Its ok. I sinabi with a yawn.
I think someone needs to go to bed. Nathen sinabi with his oh so perfect grin that I loved.
Nathen carried me up to my room, like he usually did. I fell asleep against his warm chest. It was great to know that me and Nathen had made up. I didn't like to be mad at anyone. It is hard sometimes for me to forgive people but its usually not that long till I do forgive them.
I told Nathen goodnight and that I loved him and he sinabi the same back to me.
