please comment this is my first story
Bella’s POV
It was a cold araw in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only pag-ibig Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.
Alice’s POV
“Alice what did you see” Jasper asked
“Edward got a girlfriend.” I sinabi
“Eddy got a girl.” Emmett sinabi “When were you going to tell us?”
“I don’t have a girlfriend.” Edward sinabi
“Alice what are you talking about?” Rose asked
“Maybe I should have sinabi he’s going to have a girlfriend” I sinabi to them
Then suddenly Edward sinabi “I can’t have a girlfriend because the only person I loved ever is trying to get rid of the stupid Volturi”
“What” we all sinabi to him at once
“They wanted her to sumali because she is the most powerful vampire ever and they would not take no for an answer” he answered.
“Did you just say the most powerful vampire” Emmett sinabi with a smile
“Yes. Why” Edward sinabi “Emmett you would lose that fight after maybe a minute”
“How do you know” Emmett asked.
“She has every power that you know and more. She could beat me and Alice.” Edward sinabi
‘No she can’t. Can she?’ I thought
“Yes she can Alice. She can put a barrier around her decisions. So if she wanted to give you something you would never know.” Edward sinabi and he started to laugh
“What is that suppose to mean Edward.” I asked while Esme walked in and sinabi “Edward that is not funny.”
I guess that Esme knew what Edward was laughing because Edward sinabi “I think it is because she knows what we are talking about and shows me and you surprise for Alice”
“Maybe it is a little” Esme sinabi back
“You’ll see. She can also ipakita someone anything her thoughts even if that person is miles away.” Edward sinabi “Alice give me the phone” After I gave him the phone it started to ring. He answered it and sinabi I do too. Then Esme sinabi “tell her yes, she’ll know what I’m talking about.” Then I heard a thank you from the phone.
Then I asked Esme “what is her name”
“EDWARD YOU DIDN’T TELL THEM MY NAME BUT YOU TELL THEM EVERYTHING ELSE EXCEPT THE OTHER REASON I LEFT YOU GUYS” I heard the girl yell through the phone
“Bella use your power to kabibe down cause I don’t think you can’t do it sa pamamagitan ng your self” Edward sinabi to Bella
Bella’s POV
It was a cold araw in Alaska but I didn’t care I was starting to read Wuthering Heights again when I remembered who gave it to me. I started to think of Carlisle, Esme, and my one and only pag-ibig Edward when I suddenly had a vision of me living in Forks with them and Alice, Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett. I decided that I would go and visit them. First I should call them because I have no idea how I will be able to get all of my stuff there. I wasn't planning to ride three times to get it all there.
Alice’s POV
“Alice what did you see” Jasper asked
“Edward got a girlfriend.” I sinabi
“Eddy got a girl.” Emmett sinabi “When were you going to tell us?”
“I don’t have a girlfriend.” Edward sinabi
“Alice what are you talking about?” Rose asked
“Maybe I should have sinabi he’s going to have a girlfriend” I sinabi to them
Then suddenly Edward sinabi “I can’t have a girlfriend because the only person I loved ever is trying to get rid of the stupid Volturi”
“What” we all sinabi to him at once
“They wanted her to sumali because she is the most powerful vampire ever and they would not take no for an answer” he answered.
“Did you just say the most powerful vampire” Emmett sinabi with a smile
“Yes. Why” Edward sinabi “Emmett you would lose that fight after maybe a minute”
“How do you know” Emmett asked.
“She has every power that you know and more. She could beat me and Alice.” Edward sinabi
‘No she can’t. Can she?’ I thought
“Yes she can Alice. She can put a barrier around her decisions. So if she wanted to give you something you would never know.” Edward sinabi and he started to laugh
“What is that suppose to mean Edward.” I asked while Esme walked in and sinabi “Edward that is not funny.”
I guess that Esme knew what Edward was laughing because Edward sinabi “I think it is because she knows what we are talking about and shows me and you surprise for Alice”
“Maybe it is a little” Esme sinabi back
“You’ll see. She can also ipakita someone anything her thoughts even if that person is miles away.” Edward sinabi “Alice give me the phone” After I gave him the phone it started to ring. He answered it and sinabi I do too. Then Esme sinabi “tell her yes, she’ll know what I’m talking about.” Then I heard a thank you from the phone.
Then I asked Esme “what is her name”
“EDWARD YOU DIDN’T TELL THEM MY NAME BUT YOU TELL THEM EVERYTHING ELSE EXCEPT THE OTHER REASON I LEFT YOU GUYS” I heard the girl yell through the phone
“Bella use your power to kabibe down cause I don’t think you can’t do it sa pamamagitan ng your self” Edward sinabi to Bella