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All was quiet. Embelline stood in back of Laurent crouched sa pamamagitan ng the ground.
“You always want to attack from the position that they least expect it.” She demonstrated sa pamamagitan ng pinning Laurent to the ground and biting his neck. “See, Laurent expected nothing.” She started laughing. Laurent got of the floor and brushed the dirt of his knee. “You got it Vic?” I looked once madami at the hole on the ground, the one Embelline had just tackled Laurent through.
“Yeah. Seems simple enough. “ She stood up as well, towering over me, her blonde hair sticking out in every position possible. There was something off about her, something she was hiding, not to good sa pamamagitan ng the look on her face. She looked up at the moment the thought crossed my mind. She then looked down and walked towards Laurent in a rush. There was something seriously off about Embelline.
The room was nosily in cautious. James was on the other side of the bar, gambling with a few men. Embelline was at the bar, flirting away with the bartender. Laurent was at the door, standing watch, looking around until he finally closed the doors with a loud smack. Everyone turned around to look at Laurent, and then screamed when they realized that he wasn’t human. Embelline got on the table, and kicked all the alcohol out of the way, the bottles crashed to the floor in a huge bang. James flipped the mesa he was sitting at over, taking a few men with him. There were screams everywhere. James had already explained everything to me. The people at this bar were bad people, they deserved to die. They were going to die. James, Embelline, Laurent and now me, were doing this for they’re own good. This was the first time I would officially drink human blood. The past few days I had survived on animal blood. Now I was being put to the real test: human blood. James sinabi that human blood was almost exactly like animal blood. Only human blood tasted better and filled you up madami than animal blood. The thought of killing another living thing was down setting, but knowing that James was there, and that I was killing someone who had done wrong made it all better.
“Ready?” James asked me from across the room, his eyes on a fat man screaming. I looked around the room, there were about twenty people in this bar. I looked back at James.
“Yeah, I think so.” He smiled.
“Pick your bet. They all seem tasty.” madami screams. He jumped of the mesa he was standing on, and leaped onto the stomach of the fat man. James turned the mans head to the side, and dug in.
All was quiet. Embelline stood in back of Laurent crouched sa pamamagitan ng the ground.
“You always want to attack from the position that they least expect it.” She demonstrated sa pamamagitan ng pinning Laurent to the ground and biting his neck. “See, Laurent expected nothing.” She started laughing. Laurent got of the floor and brushed the dirt of his knee. “You got it Vic?” I looked once madami at the hole on the ground, the one Embelline had just tackled Laurent through.
“Yeah. Seems simple enough. “ She stood up as well, towering over me, her blonde hair sticking out in every position possible. There was something off about her, something she was hiding, not to good sa pamamagitan ng the look on her face. She looked up at the moment the thought crossed my mind. She then looked down and walked towards Laurent in a rush. There was something seriously off about Embelline.
The room was nosily in cautious. James was on the other side of the bar, gambling with a few men. Embelline was at the bar, flirting away with the bartender. Laurent was at the door, standing watch, looking around until he finally closed the doors with a loud smack. Everyone turned around to look at Laurent, and then screamed when they realized that he wasn’t human. Embelline got on the table, and kicked all the alcohol out of the way, the bottles crashed to the floor in a huge bang. James flipped the mesa he was sitting at over, taking a few men with him. There were screams everywhere. James had already explained everything to me. The people at this bar were bad people, they deserved to die. They were going to die. James, Embelline, Laurent and now me, were doing this for they’re own good. This was the first time I would officially drink human blood. The past few days I had survived on animal blood. Now I was being put to the real test: human blood. James sinabi that human blood was almost exactly like animal blood. Only human blood tasted better and filled you up madami than animal blood. The thought of killing another living thing was down setting, but knowing that James was there, and that I was killing someone who had done wrong made it all better.
“Ready?” James asked me from across the room, his eyes on a fat man screaming. I looked around the room, there were about twenty people in this bar. I looked back at James.
“Yeah, I think so.” He smiled.
“Pick your bet. They all seem tasty.” madami screams. He jumped of the mesa he was standing on, and leaped onto the stomach of the fat man. James turned the mans head to the side, and dug in.
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Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? Or later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now they don't say where they went they don't really exclain why they went AND people say pagbaba can't hurt you! I got a huge head ach and i am a little dizzy. LIVING PROOF! I now know how brittanie spears felt when she didn't know what to do.I can't really think about anything madami for this- see ya tomoorow! You think i ended it bad ? well least it isn't like sapranos where they stop in the midlle of a sent- .....
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(ps. don't worry i am nothing like the sapranos! and my susunod artikulo will be longer!)