The men surround me and I am getting ready to scream with all I've got when I see the headlights approaching. I'm thankful that whoever it is may help me. The car spins around its a rather new Volvo. It's Edward Cullen's. The door swings open and he orders me to get inside. But he had turned the vehicle so fast that it was still moving. Moving towards my frail body. The open door hit my head and the crack of my scull breaking fills the air. Blood pours into my eyes and mouth. I fall over and slam onto the cement. The Volvo continues its movement, crushing my legs beyond repair and the smell of blood fills the air, making me wretch blood and stomach acid all over my dieing body. As the life leaks out of me Edward leans over me pain and regret in his eyes and bends down to halik me but before he does I say thank you (because he tried to save me and I am always grateful) in a pained voice. The pain of speech makes me wretch again and his teeth clench down on my neck. I writhe and scream and feel him take me in his arms i am carried who knows were and placed on a cold table. "You saved her" says a familiar voice oh i get it now he is Carlisle, Edwards father. He took care of me after Edward kept Tyler's van for crushing me. How ironic he kept Tylers van from crushing me but it was his car that almost killed me and causes a great deal of pain and damage.. Wait . . . saved me? What? Im hardly saved my whole body feels as if it is on apoy and an endless scream comes from my mouth. "Yes" Edward answer "the transformation will soon be done. Bella will soon be one of us."
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Why is Rosalie so unpopular in the Twilight fandom?
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal mga kaibigan who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up sa pamamagitan ng someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after pagbaba a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
She seems anything but a Mary Sue, and believe me when I say that. She's vain, shallow, and kind of hostile towards Bella at first. She's not perfect. She's no Disney princess who sings to chipmunks and has little animal mga kaibigan who cater to her every whim. She has a temper that puts a lion with a bad case of PMS to shame on that count.
Remember that the way she acted to Bella was only because she felt threatened. She thought Bella was going to reveal their secret. That just shows that she cares about the safety of her family, right?
Can you imagine being shown up sa pamamagitan ng someone clearly inferior to you? That might sting.
Rosalie really isn't that bad. Just that after pagbaba a few hundred pages of limited insight about Rosalie, when all of a sudden she goes all soft, the damage done might not be reversible.
So please hear me when I say that Rosalie isn't such a horrible character. She really isn't.
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant sinag office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant sinag quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant sinag on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulansya arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant sinag was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant sinag office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant sinag quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant sinag on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
mesa and called 911. When the police and ambulansya arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant sinag was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after pagbaba all four books I feel in pag-ibig with them. I wasn't a tagahanga of the Pagsulat style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in pag-ibig with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I pag-ibig the ending to Breaking Dawn. And pag-ibig New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my paborito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to pag-ibig HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before pagbaba Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Pagsulat was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Pagsulat a vampire novel that I hope to ilathala in the near future.
But after pagbaba all four books I feel in pag-ibig with them. I wasn't a tagahanga of the Pagsulat style or the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in pag-ibig with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I pag-ibig the ending to Breaking Dawn. And pag-ibig New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my paborito author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to pag-ibig HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before pagbaba Twilight...and just suddenly realized my Pagsulat was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm Pagsulat a vampire novel that I hope to ilathala in the near future.