A\N: this is my first FanFiction so could you all please rate it and review so i can decide whether i should continue or not and please suggest things that i should add or stuff that should happen etc.P.S sorry for this really long Author's Note.
I was walking along my street; it was 10’o clock at night.
My dog Max had run out the gate again when I came tahanan from babysitting the Greene’s kids. Just great! This couldn’t get any better but wait it just did.
Max ran into the park, Fantastic! Walking through bushes in a dark freaky looking park in the freezing cold
Life just can’t get any better.
“Max! Max! Come here boy”. I called for hours and still no sign of him. I finally gave up and decided to walk tahanan when somebody tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around and looked up. Standing in front of me was a man. He looked to be about 6 foot 3. He was extremely pale and he had blonde hair and then that’s when I saw his eyes his irises were burgundy coloured.
“Well, well you are promising Emmeline.” sinabi the beautiful stranger.
“Who are you? And how do you know my name?” “My name is Jasper. And as I sinabi before you are promising aren’t you” Jasper replied.
He leaned down like he was going to halik me and then that’s when he bit my neck. At first everything was black and empty then I started to feel hot and uncomfortable, I felt this searing pain across my whole body it felt like I was in a apoy just lying there too helpless to get out of it.
I wanted to grab my puso and rip it out of my chest the pain was so bad.
The pain was scorching, I felt like I should be a pile of ashes now in that raging apoy that had consumed me. The apoy started to slowly vanish, it inched away from my fingers and toes it felt like it was travelling through my body to my heart. In the final moments of the apoy it started to blaze in my chest like it was stabbing my puso a hundred times over and then it vanished from my body.
I didn’t want to open my eyes because the fear overwhelmed me, I didn’t want to see what I had become.
I was walking along my street; it was 10’o clock at night.
My dog Max had run out the gate again when I came tahanan from babysitting the Greene’s kids. Just great! This couldn’t get any better but wait it just did.
Max ran into the park, Fantastic! Walking through bushes in a dark freaky looking park in the freezing cold
Life just can’t get any better.
“Max! Max! Come here boy”. I called for hours and still no sign of him. I finally gave up and decided to walk tahanan when somebody tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around and looked up. Standing in front of me was a man. He looked to be about 6 foot 3. He was extremely pale and he had blonde hair and then that’s when I saw his eyes his irises were burgundy coloured.
“Well, well you are promising Emmeline.” sinabi the beautiful stranger.
“Who are you? And how do you know my name?” “My name is Jasper. And as I sinabi before you are promising aren’t you” Jasper replied.
He leaned down like he was going to halik me and then that’s when he bit my neck. At first everything was black and empty then I started to feel hot and uncomfortable, I felt this searing pain across my whole body it felt like I was in a apoy just lying there too helpless to get out of it.
I wanted to grab my puso and rip it out of my chest the pain was so bad.
The pain was scorching, I felt like I should be a pile of ashes now in that raging apoy that had consumed me. The apoy started to slowly vanish, it inched away from my fingers and toes it felt like it was travelling through my body to my heart. In the final moments of the apoy it started to blaze in my chest like it was stabbing my puso a hundred times over and then it vanished from my body.
I didn’t want to open my eyes because the fear overwhelmed me, I didn’t want to see what I had become.
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