You're just to good to be true || Edward & Bella

I woke up this mourning feeling rather odd. Perhaps I thought to myself it was just some bad human pagkain I ate. Yet, most human foods are bad and smell foul. And why do people eat that foul stuff they call food? I decided to myself I would need to leave my calm, yet stuffy room and head off to vist my mother as I had promised her weeks ago.
"Hello, mother I'm back Jacobs out hunting so I decided to come here as promised.", I sinabi before I got a smallwhiff of animal blood and threw up something I had never done before.
"Renesmee, you must have the flu humans get it sometimes. Please come here...

I am a budding screenplay writer and wanted to write a script for New Moon. For lots of reasons. Mainly, to satisfy myself in case the real movie is not what I think it should be

I post frequently over in livejournal at the lion_lamb community and have posted it over there too.

here are iugnay to my screenplay
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This screenplay has some things different from New Moon. You will recognize many scenes I kept. You will notice some things that I have combined. You will also notice stuff of my own. This is all typical with any adaptation.

There are also hints of Eclipse in here and set ups for...

*I know it may confuse you that Alice can see Renesmee, but in my version Alice has always been able to*




Renesmee’s Point Of View


    My mind was conjuring up so many possibilities as a bounded up the front porch steps to my house. I had been at Jacob’s the whole araw and then my mom called and told me to come over with Jacob as soon as possible.        I was reaching for the door handle, but the door flew open before I had the chance to open the door.
    “Surprise!” A chorus of voices shouted around me. Everyone...

Renesmee Cullen’s Story, Chapter 9

9
(Jacob)

Renesmee was outside, waiting to surprise me for a reason I don’t know. I watched tv to kill the time, not really paying attention to the flashing mga kulay that should be The Simpsons. I wish she was still in my arms, right now. Hard to believe she was yelling at me last night. She was excited this morning, which made me a little suspicious. But all she did was halik me with a lot of force, as though she will cease to exist if she didn’t, and whisper, “Not now. Later.” When I asked. Now I’m just sitting here.
“Oh, Jacob!” came Renesmee’s...

-Renesmee-

Renee almost touched me, then seemed to think better of it.

"Sit down," Renee whispered again, gesturing towards the porch swing. I sat, she sat.

"But Bella... died... " Renee whispered.

Lovely. So THAT was what this woman believed.

"She died. I saw her. Dead. Almost eighteen years ago. She was a victim of hit and run," Renee said, sounding panicked, as if she were only trying to convince herself.

I decided to play along, it was convenient. For my family.

"I was born a few months before that. She didn't want you to know," I lied easily.

"And the rest of the Cullens?" Renee whispered,...