Young Justice OC'S!!! Article: My Total OCD Moment About All The OC's

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posted by KatRox1

Okay, I'm having one of those moments again. The kind where I get all depressed about Mercy becoming evil (because I really didn't want her to!) and about how there are WAY to many OC's! Not pointing fingers at anyone, because I'm doing it too, but seriously! If you want to make an OC, could you PLEASE just write an artikulo about them first? We need some idea about them first!
That's why I won't be RP-ing at all until I can actually WRITE a story for Casey! I suggest a lot of you guys do that, saying that some people don't even put up a bio for their character!
One madami point, PLEASE refrain from making madami OC's than you need! I mean, I get it if you need to make them for like, one night to make sense of something in your fanfic. I've already deleted a few of my RP accounts, I suggest some of you do also! But please, don't overcrowd!
And I also learned this term from one of my friends: God modding. That's a big no-no also! So that means, don't make yourself "so powerful that you can take over the world with the snap of my fingers"; it also means don't be able to just dodge everything that comes at you and don't be so invincible that you can be stabbed in the puso and be completely fine! (I know, that happened to Mercy, but I will explain that later)
One madami thing (probably not) DON'T control other people's OC's! I know in real life, we don't control other people! So, don't put them in those kind of situations!
Okay! I promise, almost done! I just wanted to give a round of applause to those people who ipakita that their OC's are imperfect. They are able to ipakita that they go through what a bunch of us go through on an everyday basis! Not being perfect, second-guessing ourselves, and being who REAL people are!
And one last idea! What if: Because there are SO many OC heroes, and not that many villains (That doesn't mean you need to create one!!) Once you see that about 2 or 3 OC's have gotten themselves into a fight, don't swoop in and join... 3 or 4 OC's only, to make it madami fun and interesting!
**But don't forget to interact and not always be the lone wolf!**
Haha! You thought I was done! Nope! Just also wanted to say, IF Mercy does come back as a normal hero, NEVER tanong what she does... E.V.E.R.... Unless you want to repeat the "I'm a mentally and emotionally unstable villain who hates my life" thing!

Sorry if you guys don't like any of the things I have stated, but thats life! Deal with it! This has been bothering me for far to long and I thought SOMEONE needed to say it! pag-ibig you guys!
-KatRox1

The_Writer, SilverWings13 and 6 others like this

BentleyYJ OOC: YOU READ MY MIND!!! OMG DO YOU KNOW WHAT IM THINKING??/ 0_0 XD people listen to this brilliant person

EclipseYJ OOC: I think i can live with that ;) and i think i might change eclipse to being deaths apprentise instead of gods daughter cuz i'm going a little over bored <3 LOV U TOO

SilverWingsYJ OOC: I luv this! Thank you so much for posting it!!!

Devin_Grayson OOC: heh. The last point refers to me. Heheh. Sorry!

66Dragons I completely agree. I believe I have pointed out enough that Red is NOT the perfect hero. In fact, he sorta fails a lot more than his cocky attitude lets on... Damn. Now I sound egotistical...

KatRox1 Heh. You know when I said I wouldn't be RP-ing as Casey? I kinda lied, saying I have nothing better to do in my free time!

AislingYJ OOC: You are my life now. No seriously. This is amazing. Of course, I face the extremely uncommon problem (at least I think it's uncommon) of my OC not being able to do ANYTHING, and me getting completely bored of that. Like I was tempted to kill Aisling, but ya kinda get attached to your first OC, so she probably will just get an upgrade, like some actual fighting skills or something. Now I'm rambling. Amazing article though!

ShadowYJ Great article. Even though none of this applies to me 'cause my OC doesn't have any powers. But yet all the same: great article.

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The Blue Rose part 9

posted by SilverWings13

Titanium’s form was rigid as he stood of the deck of the speed-boat. But the freezing ocean water soaking his ivory hair, dripping from the bleach-white wetsuit, may not have been the pinagmulan of the quiver in his form, his back turned to the leading squad members. Jace and Ivara had been ordered bellow deck to change and conduct injuries checks so that the “adults could have a chat”.
“What are you doing here, Ti?” Blaze asked once the elder boys were alone.
“I took a visit to headquarters,” the Russian answered without turning, an unusual tightness in his voice. “I took notice...

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Final (maybe) Outsider OC. Atticus!

posted by BladeYJ

<3~

Name: Atticus Unknown

Relations: Unknown

Alias: Atti

Occupation: Unknown

Race: Human.. most believe. Some say he's a ghost.

Age: Most suspect he's 17.

Personality: He is very quiet and often ang sumagot in grunts and usually doesn't take too well to people. Atticus, prefers being alone and isolated, and unbothered sa pamamagitan ng pesky fledglings,

Appearance: Many don't know what he looks like, for he always wears a mask. Though it is believed he has icy blue eyes, that can freeze you from the inside. The only thing they do know is his white hair and pale skin.

Powers: His powers are Ice, and invisibility.

Weapons:...

The Blue Rose part 7.5

posted by SilverWings13

Knowing she should be helpful in the sense the Superiors had had in tasking her with her particular task, Ivara activated her ability. It only took a blink of her cream-orange eyes to switch on the Sight. The dark around her became illuminated in a collage of colors. The life force of the invading plant in a green glow, the fiery red of the male at her side, a hint of inanimate yellow where the aluminum walls still remained untouched combined to create the image of an artist’s paint pallet. The only negative was the steel grey haze in the air that alerted of a dark event that had taken place,...

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Ivic

posted by Robin_Love

Wolf form

Just bare with me. He may not be staying, but I need madami guys. So...ta-da

Name: Ivic
Alias: Fury
Occupation: vigilante; team mate
Powers: fire, healing, super-senses, were-wolf
Skills: fangs, speed, agility, stealth, kalye fighting, boxing, claws
History: Ivic is the result of a now-lost serum. He was a test tube baby, the serum affecting him in some way no one thought possible. While the others died, Ivic remained healthy. He was a quick study from the time he could walk. He has been taught about his abilities but not how to control them. His temper ignited one araw sa pamamagitan ng mysterious reasons, Ivic...

Griffin BIO

posted by KatRox1

------ Basics------

Full Name: Robert Hess

Nick Name: Griffin, Griff

Race: Human, Caucasian

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Occupation: Vigilante, Leader of Reborn

Blood Type: O

Traits of Blood Type: Responsible, decisive, organized, objective, practical, leader, stubborn

------Appearance------

Height/Weight: 6' 2" Tall, 187 lbs

Hair: Light brown/ dirty blonde

Eyes: Hazel

Skin Tone: Pale, lightly tanned

General Build: Muscular

Distinguishing Features: Bullet wound scar on left shoulder, slight tremor in hands.

Preferred Clothing: White button down dress shirt, dark grey waistcoat, dark dress pants

------Accessories:------...

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The Blue Rose part 7

posted by SilverWings13

Under the sky of gentle waves, the sun was but a sparkling desk-lamp bulb, its fingers of warmth barely brushing a hair on the dark-depth’s head. The easy lull of the marine heavens were momentarily disrupted sa pamamagitan ng the splash of one, two, three, four seal-like creators. Dressed from head to toe in foamed neoprene suits, black flippers, and glass masks, burdened sa pamamagitan ng the cylinder tanks containing their pinagmulan of air, the quartet descended from their surface world to the mysterious depths below.
As the sandy bottom neared and the sun’s alluring influence fell behind, they engaged their helmet-lamps....

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Father, Savior, Lover One-Shot

posted by SilverWings13

He readjusted the microscopic device and looked over at the mesa were his laptop lay open, ipinapakita a perfectly clear image of the living room. For the final test, he clicked a button on the side of his Rolex, then waved his hand in front of the camera lens. His wristwatch vibrated and flashed the image of the living room, then either bedroom, kitchen, fire-escape, and the foyer; the same clear live video feeds streaming on the six-way-split-screen of his laptop.
"Perfect," the young man muttered with satisfaction, clicked the button again, and climbed down from the step-ladder.
"Daddy!" the...

Beetles part 1

posted by Kurls_Basd

this first part maybe boring but up coming will be madami intresting.

She pant, she ran, trying her best to out run the red head. She parted the wet bushes, the dewy leaves grazed her pale skin and pierced her in the eye, but she continued. She can hear her drawing near, she looked up at the moon and suddenly,Crashed!!!!
She hit the ground, she gasped heavily as she got on her hands and knees. She hears giggling, and she looks up, there Lelisa stood with a devious look and a sword in her hand.
"You have no where else to go." She says to Aquapoint, as she looks at her, Lelisa continues,"You certainly...

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Gone Away 2

posted by Robin_Love

He stepped out of the shadows, looking her over.
“You didn't tell him.”
It was a statement, but she still nodded.
“I told him what we agreed upon.”
“So when will we tell him?”
“When we know where she is. He can't help. I don't want him to worry.”
“Since when?”
She glared at him.
“Since I saw how much Tara loves him. Besides, it won't help us if he's chasing false leads.”
“Yeah. Okay. So what next?”
“We need to find her.”
“No kidding.”
“We have a week.”
“This will be fun. Where do we look first?”
“Scene of the crime. But I've gone over it four times. There are...

Gone Away

posted by Robin_Love

He walked down the hall to her bedroom, passing his own in his wanting to get to her. The door was open when he walked in, but the girl on the kama was not the one he was looking for. She looked up when he entered, an apologetic smile on her face.
“Is something wrong?!” he asked.
“No. Not exactly.”
“Where is she?”
“She's fine. She just had to get out for a bit.”
“Where is she?”
“California, I think.”
He blinked, the words catching him for the first time.
“Wait you mean she's not here at all?”
“That's right. She wanted to wait for you, but sinabi she was getting too restless....

In the Future, Life Begins Again 1 of 2

posted by SilverWings13

"Get your men back!" Blaze yelled as he trotted out the gateway of the abandoned maximum-security prison. The captain of the squad signaled the 50-or-so men of his betalian to retreat from the entrance. The heavily-armed soldiers positioned themselves behind the barricade of cars as the earth began to shake beneath their boots. A howl derived from Hell erupted from the dark, a first of anger and bloodlust. Blaze leapt onto the hood of an SUV just as the creature charged from the exit tunnel of the prison.
The monster could have been mistaken for a rhino, accept it was 11 feet long and shrouded...

Fangs~Part 2~

posted by BladeYJ

Boo~

I TOLD YOU I WOULD CONTINUE!

Part 1 ~ link

~*~*~

"Would you like to sumali the shadows, to walk with me in the night, to feed upon humans and they're succulent blood, would you like to be a vampire?"
"..."
"I understand it is odd, and you don't know me, but make a decision."
"..."
"Yes or no? But know now, if you say yes my bullet will pierce your lung giving you a short amount of time to live, in which I will then transform you. So make your choice."

*^*^*

Blade's eyes widened, for she realized she was taking a big leap..

Of faith.

She gave a quick nod, to the strange boy. Softness filled his eyes as...

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Knight

posted by AislingYJ

Vaxley

Yeah, I know. But since I basically deleted everyone and I only really RP with Aisling, I really wanted to make a new guy. I’ll probably RP as him (and I’ll try to not abandon him) and hopefully he’ll even get his own artikulo series, probably after Chasing Shadows is finished.
Name: Vaxley Knight
Alias: Knight
Age: 15
Occupation: Spy; Hero; Vigilante/Freelancer
Appearance: Vaxley is of average height, about 5’9” or 5’10”, and average build. He has lightly tanned skin and faint freckles on and around his nose. His hair is copper-brown, thick and with a slight wave, and cut at an average...

Nawawala Cause~One-Shot.

posted by KaliYJ

Emmerson and his darkself

Oh, dig my shallow grave
It's not me you'll save
Cos' I'm a Nawawala cause
I'm a Nawawala cause
A lost, Nawawala cause

"None of them get it do they?"

A mutter, he could only hear, broke the silence as the dark haired boy sat there, on his bed, staring in the mirror at his dark-self mocking him.

Wait, all this time that I have spent away
Makes me think that I might be okay,
For this, the deaf will have to wait
My head, is holding on to all those things you said
You taught me to be strong and get through it, the mist of darkness
In my head

"No one will ever feel what you feel; you're so pathetic.."

The boys face screwed...

Prisoner of War 22

posted by Robin_Love

Red eyes

“How did it work out?”
“Just as you predicted.”
“Good. Just keep her away from the nosy crew. Before long, it will be time.”
“Don't order me around!”
“Of course not. It was merely a suggestion.”
“Keep your patronizing for your master.”
“Testy, aren't we?”
“Keep your end and I'll keep mine. It would be a shame if uy found her so soon. After all your hard work that is. To keep her hidden.”
His face turned to a frown.
“Yes it would.”
The knock at the door brought them to look at the solid wood. He turned back to his guest.
“You better leave.”
“Of course.”
He turned...

WHEEEE

posted by InfinityYJ

GUYS.

GUYS I MADE A THING..

I WANT YOU GUYS TO READ IT FOR ME

OKAY

GUYS CAN YOU COMMENT TOO CUZ THAT'D BE GREAT.
KAYTHNXBYE

Frail bones, frail mind
Slip away from peace and time
Falling, falling, slow and fast
Loved one’s name is shouted last

Child, child, all alone
Sitting here without a home
Stolen from your only friend
The true beginning of the end

Burning fire, burning blood
Lifting higher than you should
Raised in darkness part of hell
Part of your sweet soul to sell

Years will pass and dreams will reap
Till they save you in your sleep
Once you’ve left your tortured life
Now you start a silent strife

‘Family...

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Prisoner of War 21

posted by Robin_Love

“Heads up!”
She turned just in time to block the on-coming sword.
“Hey!”
“What?”
The metal screeched together before pulling away.
“That wasn't at all fair!”
“You think your other opponents will play fair?”
He came at her again, but she dodged and made a jab at his chest. He hopped backwards and blocked.
“You're still doing it wrong.”
“Shut up!”
He lunged for another attack, this time catching her shoulder. She hissed at the pain before attempting to hit him again. He just blocked before sending another matulin mark. No matter how many times she came at him, he was better. Frustration...

Bio, and a bit of crappy writingggg~

posted by WingsOfDeath

Name: Hope Ludmilla Adams.

Alias: Ptolema.

Appearance:
-Short black hair, blue eyes, fair skin.

Civvies: Piiicctttuurreee.

'Stume: Picture!

Skills:
-Very creative
-Trained in most weapons

Powers:
-Can bring illustrations to life
-Can summon a magic paintbrush(see, I'm original)
-Immortal

Paintbrush's powers(see, s/he get's it's own powers section)
-Can change color of anything(anything, anything)
-Has a mind of it's own

History: Switched with Mary at birth, Hope grew up very sophisticated. She ran away once her parents discovered her wings, and tried using her as advertisement. She ended up...

Bad to Good ~one shot~

posted by GlitterPuff

Dark D'ia

If you forgot, since I don't use this OC very often, D'ia is DiamondShadow, which is the dark angel.

Sunlight glistened of her black wings as she flew to her new boyfriends temple, her soul somewhat coming back to her as she became happy from the thought of seeing him. Her white hair flew up into the air as she came down to the ground, wings coming back into her body, walking into the somewhat Aztec temple. The girls grey eyes looked around as she went to his throne, looking at all the blood incorporated tributes and statues. Once she reached the trono room, she saw Ez sitting on the throne,...

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MCL INSPIRED

posted by Robin_Love

Wally and Willow

His lips trailed a line of apoy down her neck. His kisses forced a small moan out of her. Her fingers Gusot up in his fiery hair as he moved down her shoulder. He whispered her name several times between kisses. Her body trembled and she closed her eyes in pleasure. His lips were suddenly on hers in a passionate embrace that set her puso aflame.
She gave as much as she took, hands roaming as all thoughts fled from her love-induced brain. He pulled back, took a deep breath and kissed her again. She took him up on his offer, opening her mouth for him. After playing in her mouth, his tongue...