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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. sa pamamagitan ng no means am I forcing you to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless you truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before you start posting. It can be as little as a bio, or as big as an entire artikulo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no madami than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he or she is in, can pull out another trick out of his or her hat.
4. If you absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his or her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely walang tiyak na layunin and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when you have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the susunod araw you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own or is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the kamakailan outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, or claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If you must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, or so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if you do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot or stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull or flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to or dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to or dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created sa pamamagitan ng you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing or potential character is a Mary Sue, or if you suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, you can take link. If you want, you can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case you were curious, which you probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all you want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, sa pamamagitan ng no means do you have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Terpsichore Morison

Sex: Female

Age: 15

Appearance: Long kulay-rosas hair, blue eyes, fair skin, tall, skinny, wears pagbaba glasses when needed

Personality: Sweet as candy, very paranoid about people (cause she thinks they’ll kill her), a little spacey, and shy around new people

Civvies: A blue tank top, gray sweater, jeggings, sport sneakers, small backpack, and an assortment of bracelets and earrings

Weapons: A handheld gun (usually in bra or her bag)

Skills: None

Powers: None

Past: Terpsichore lived in a very harsh crime filled neighborhood in New York City. Everywhere she turned, there were guns,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
The lobo charged at full speed to the trio. They all looked at each other not knowing whether it was headed for them or was it just pasting through, but there was no time to figure that out. They separated making room for the monster. The lobo pasted but suddenly turned around. It howled and stood ground. The lobo was all black with grey eyes and a much madami fuzzy tail than other wolfs. It howled once madami moving from side to side, it stopped, stared of a bit then suddenly charged at Aisling. Aisling pulled out an palaso and drew her bow, running side ways she shot at the wolf. It dodged, jumping...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Time keeps running off with out her..
Time keeps running off with out her..
Woman eternal,
She cannot die,
And ever araw of her years,
She shall cry.
Woman out of time,
Who does not age,
Who harbors fear,
And harbors rage.
Angry daughter,
Along at last,
Time goes sa pamamagitan ng slow,
But people go sa pamamagitan ng fast.
Heavyhearted,
Wandering soul,
Awaiting death,
To take its toll.
A woman eternal,
May have no heart,
For it may end,
Before it may start.
Woman eternal,
Who cannot die,
Only one who calls on death,
And doesn't lie.

This is a poem about Babylon in case you wouldn't tell..and now i'm babbling because my artikulo needs to be longer..ugh. Anyway, I hope you liked it. So tell me what you think.
posted by khanna266
Name:Elliot Rodriguez
age:14
Alias:DemonStar
Species:Sky demon
Powers:controls the wind,flying,reads minds,and sorcery
civvies:nothing special
hero outfit:none
status:in a relationship(i'm goin to put him and Klei together)
Family:all dead
BG story:He ran away from his tahanan in mexico to find a new life that could be madami succesful. Where he met Klei and fell in pag-ibig with her in Gotham city.He's been with the young justice members since he got together with Klei.
Hobbies:Plays guitar,listens to music,does martial arts and kickboxing,

Hope you all like it.<3<3<3<3
please read madami artikulo sa pamamagitan ng me please
 Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
posted by Robin_Love
 Cat
Cat
Sorry for the bad ending


Her feet swung high above the floor from her upuan on the counter. He stood right beside her, mixing things in a bowl. The smell of cookies floated everywhere. She giggled when he put a dollop of frosting on her nose and he laughed when she tried to lick it off. He handed her a napkin, still laughing a little. She smiled and wiped it off as he pulled the now finished cookies from the oven.
“They smell yummy!”
“They have to cool before you can eat any.”
She pouted at him, her cat ears pinning back.
“How long?”
Scott smiled at her patiently.
“At least 15 minutes.”...
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posted by khanna266
name:Victor Sohma-Lee
age:17
alias:Cancer(the zodiac)
civvies:black short hair,grey eyes fair skin,doesn't have specific civvies
Hero outfit: Black tux and black hat
personality:mysterious but very sweet he's very quiet,and loves to cause a bit of mischief e very now and then.powers:calls for help of the spirits,black magic,shoots poison darts from wrists,and can speak to demons
BG story:Victor is very troubled and has a hard time concentrating on things,He was sent to Earth with his sister Rei to prevent the evil from spreading all over the Earth he would like to cause some mischief and find a tahanan on Earth and areason to stay.He becomes best mga kaibigan with Daniel Star'gei.
 Victor just arriving to earth
Victor just arriving to earth
Name:August robins
Age:14
looks like:long white hair,red eyes,6"4,girly
civvies:pink shirt,short jeans,gray ankle boots,black knee highs,black bracelets and belt
Haero outfit;red puso shaped mask,pink mini dress with red puso and a red cape that turns into a whip
Alias:Cupid girl
Powers:hypnotizesany boy villian to fall in pag-ibig with her and potions
weapons:cape that turns into a whip
family:unknown
friends:becomes best mga kaibigan with Klei
BG:One araw when August was 5 she woke up not remembering anything but her name at a train station and when she woke up she noticed she had gotten powers and had white hair and red eyesshe got her powers from a mysterious tornado while she was knocked out

btw when she was born she was born with red hair and blue eyes.

she has a massive crush on all the boys and doesn't want to decide who she likes most She even sinabi batman and superman were cute.
<3<3<3
please comment
 her civvies
her civvies
posted by GlitterPuff
 My Rene Drawing
My Rene Drawing
Rene sat on the edge of the buildings’ roof, looking down and the people below. In her hands, she held a white wire amerikana hanger. Slowly, she wrapped her fingers around the hook part, causing the whole hanger to glow a light yellow. The red head sighed as she let go of it, returning the hanger to its natural form. Rene stood up, walked off the building, landing on her feet at the bottom without a broken bone; and walked away.

As she came down a small alley way, a shadow passed over her. Quickly, she turned; but saw nothing but the brick wall. Shrugging, she turned and continued walking. Moments...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Mafia sat on the mesa at mount justice. No one had been there in ages, and she was unsure how this mesa survived, let alone manages to hold her weight. She sighed, running a hand through her hair. She had only been a few times, and the last time she was, she met Atticus. Her mind mind wandered. Atticus. He was nice, and treated her well. And she respected him, and he thought her powers were... cool. No one had ever thought so before. And she had scared him with the snake thing. She personally thought it was cute.
Mafia looked at where the sofa should have been when she sat susunod to him. She...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Arson in Civies
Arson in Civies
Name: Arson
Alias: Hatter
Occupation: Hero..
Powers: He has the telepathic ability to make people believe they are insane or to do anything he wants them to; expert with blades and weapons; plays on people's fear; flexibility
History: Arson is the son of Blade and Terror. He was raised with both parents, but with his father's ability to know fear. While Arson can not display someone's fear, he can make them go crazy in a world he creates in their minds. Arson was trained to fight and madala weapons. He was taught never to fear the dark but befriend it. While he understands the world humans live in,...
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OOC: this will be a short part, and afther this there will be one madami small part in this teme.

Twan sat in his room cleaning his gun as his celphone rang, he awserd it and heard a slitly panict voice on the other end.
Twan ?
Yes it is me Babs, somting wrong? Your voice soundes worryd.
It is pinguin he got Batman and robing capterd at the docks.
Thad fat bird never learns his lesson. He sinabi whit a angry voice, but he soon callemd himself agien.
Oke stai were you are i will be there in a sec.
Oke but pleas hurry i got no idee wat pinuin will do to them.

Babs was waiting in the kalye as a motercykel...
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posted by Robin_Love
Hands moved the hair out of her face and a smile came to her lips. She opened her eyes and the smile died from her face when she saw who it was. He just gave a little smile as he watched her sit up in bed. She ignored his presence and moved into the spacious closet to change.
“Well good morning to you too.”
“What do you want?”
“You already know.”
“I'll have your head on a platter.”
He laughed slightly and moved the hair out of his dark eyes.
“Would you like me to say it?”
“No. Not that you care.”
“True. What I want is you. Your power. That thing inside of you that keeps you...
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"Or what, sissy? You gonna stop me and the gang from messin' up the kid's face here?" The three other boys smirked as they knew they had the number advantage. But the girl also gave a tiny smirk. "Yeah, I think I will."

The pack laughed.

"You-you've got to be kidding! Hahaha!" Billy managed to get out as he laughed. "You and what army? Ahahahaha!" But she continued to give them a smirk. "Well..."

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As if on cue, a blur rushed out from behind a bush, its target Billy. Before he could even register what the blur was, the boy slammed his elbow into Billy's face, sending him to the dirt. The...
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If you missed out..and I know the last one was "part 4" but I meant "part 3"

"Ahem.." A voice broke the vampire from his feeding and he turned with a annoyed look. "Damian, would you please stop harassing my sister..?"
~~~

I felt my breath hitch, and a huge lump of razors stuck in my throat, and I fought forcefully to fight back tears. "D..ante..?"
"Blade.." He narrowed his gaze and gave a me soft smile.
"Yo..di..d.." I couldn't push it out. My brother made his way between me and Damian and gave a me a hug.

Was he this strong.. .before.. he di..left?

"It's a long story, Kiddo, but I'm back now,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Eachen Story ( ee-kin ) (( i changed his name shhhh))

Villian Name: Vile

Age: 19

Appearance: dirty blonde hair and green eyes.

Relations: Lucas Story is his younger brother.

Powers/Skills: he has viles that he keeps with him that give him strength and power. Depending on his intake of the substance the madami power he gains. Combat skills.

Personality: he is very self centered and only benefits himself, though he secretley has a puso he tries to take over that feeling sa pamamagitan ng greed and power.

Villian suit: he wears army paint on his cheeks and has a black hooded jacket, with black pants and combat...
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posted by SilverWings13
The sun had set and the lights replaced its rays. Yellow, red, blue, green lit up the night, causing the twinkling stars the young man was so acquainted with to sink away. Along with them went the average civilians of the city, and out came the nocturnal creatures of the night.
Declan ducked into an alley as a police car sped past, sirens wailing. He sighed as it passed and disappeared around the corner, the siren fading away. He laid his head back against the brick pader and closed his tired eyes. The click of approaching heels made him snap back to attention and instinctively turned invisible....
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Tyler looked up, from the sleeping Becca in his arms, to a blonde boy with peircing blue eyes. A quick glance around the room reviled that everyone-Aryess, Willow, Lyss, and Vaxley -was asleep. "Shit.." Ty muttered gazing back at the the monster, who's stare made him shiver.

"Hey, Ter-" the firecaster started.
"I need Becca." Terror stated sternly. Defince struck Ty.
"Sorry, b-"
"Now." Blue eyes were narrowed and his lips were pursed in a small frown.
"Do you ever smile, Terror?"
The remark left the blonde unphased; a small curve pulled at his lips but quickly vanished as he took a step forward...
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posted by Blitz359
Yeah, I wrote part of this at 2 AM. Sue me. :P

"Hit the deck!"

The 4 teens leap behind a fallen puno as the pader of the factory blew apart to smithereens. Rubble flies all over, but as the dust clears, the group dash into the newly created entrance and head for the nearest flight of stairs.

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Peering through the leaves of the bush, Richi could see a part of the factory's large amount of security patrolling around the perimeter. Watchtowers with spotlights circled around the darkness surrounding the factory, and the beeps of sentries echoed into the blonde's ears.

"What, is this...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
"I'll be fine you guys can go now." Ashley told the girls, as they walked into the kitchen.
"Actually Canary told us to keep an eye on you till your brother comes home." Aryess said, taking a upuan at the counter. Ashley open the refrigerator and took out a bowl of ice cream.
"You guys want any?" Ashley asked, waving a spoon at them both with a smirk on her face.
"Sure."
Ashley returned to the refrigerator and took out two madami bowls of ice cream. She give both girls a spoon each and handed them the ice cream when she hear someone call Akash's name.
Melody walked in the kusina with a shoulder bag...
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posted by Blitz359
 Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
So yeah, I'm not dead. Been really busy.

The phone rang for what seemed like the millionth time. Its ringtone sang out in the darkness of the room, and the phone clattered against the dusty wooden tabletop as it vibrated.
Hey, it's Richi. The phone sounded out as the call went to voicemail. I'm not available right now, but leave a message and I'll get back to you ASAP.

"Rich!" the voice yelled as the message was recorded. "I know you can hear me! Where are you?! Why haven't you called back?! Please, the three of us are worried. Come back already. We're sorry."

Message recorded. You have 30...
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