Happy birthday Tressa!! :D

Yes, everyone knew him, well, that is, everyone who was in the rebellion against Dr. Damion. Everyone called him a great leader, and he rules one of the five countries in Earth, The Midlands, a large chain of islands in the Atlantic ocean, from the tuktok of the hills, all the way to the city limits were vineyards of grapes, due to it's vast volcanic activity fertilizing the soil. It was often reffered to as "Big Italy". It was also a busy shipping area, due to the fact that ships stop here on their way across the Atlantic ocean to refuel or stock up on supplies. Back to the subject though, Hannah...

"Jett, how's the pagkain coming?" asked a female penguin, putting a block of wood into a fireplace. "Oh, Ummmm.... It's... Doing good," sinabi Jett. "I sure hope it is," sinabi the female, heading down to a small kitchen. She knew it, the kusina was a mess. Pots strewn about on the ground, the tsauder was burnt, the pasta too soft, and the ham was charred to blackened ash. "I got it Hannah," sinabi Jett. "Uh, no, you don't have it, this place is a dump, I think I should take it from here," sinabi Hannah. "No!! I have a plan!!" sinabi Jett. "Oh, is that plan to go out and order take out from some fancy...

After it had been announced that Dr. Damion was now dead, the rebels celebrated, all soldiers soon dropped their weapons and put on hard hats and hammers, they needed to rebuild society. The double agents got whatever prisoners left in Dr. Damion's fortress out before the initial blast. So now, an empty Earth, and only 27 species of animal left. All that was left were Penguins, Roadrunners, Rattlesnakes, and several other species. "I'm the last of my kind," sinabi Domingo, looking out into the sunset. "Ah Domingo, relax, it's not like you need to be in a pack again, you've got me right?" asked...

uy guys. I have good news. If you want the better version of Broken Daydreams here: link

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Chapter 9

The boys had finally caught up with the girls.

"Wheres Private?" Greyson asked.

"We don't know. He was with us." Skipper said.

"Oh dear!" Emma said.

"Someone ambushed us and took him." Kowalski said. "A shadow figure in the shape of a lemur."

"It's them again." Bandit said.

"You're ran into them?" Kowalski asked.

"Yes and I'm very scared." Emma hugged Kowalski trying not to release her tears.

"I'll...

Chapter 8

"Skipper, where do you think they took Private to?" Kowalski asked.
"Usually my gut would have a feeling, but it isn't doing anything." Skipper said. "We have to find the girls, and private fast!"
"We do." Kowalski agreed.


About a little ahead the girls were sitting down thinking about what might happen next.
"All we know is now Kiva is missing. It is possible that Rinn is dead, and Tressa has gone nutzo." Emma sinabi twirling her flipper gesting that she thinks Tressa is crazy.

"Yeah." Greyson said. "I wish I could of caught Dina before the took her!" She made her flipper into a fist and...

"Wait a second." Emma said. "Where in the world is Kiva?"

"Yeah your right." Greyson said. "Wasn't she here awhile ago?"

"You don't think do you!" Amber was frightened.

"She might of been captured sa pamamagitan ng those shawdow lemur things." Bandit said.

"Y-Yeah." Emma and Amber both held onto each other.

"How many madami soilders are we gonna lose? First Rinn, then Dina, now Kiva. This is just to terrible for words." Greyson said. "We don't have a clue where they are, and not even a tiny little idea where they are."

"Well for one thing we know they're in the sewers." Bandit said. "But where is the question."

"Exactly."...

I might post a chapter about 3 times a day, maybe 2 times. So guys just be on the look out for them.
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"Skipper, my radar says that life passed through her just a short while ago." Kowalski sinabi checking his radar, which was made from a isda can.

"Excellent." The leader said. "Keep going until we find the girls.

The boys kept on walking, until Rico picked up the scent of fresh blood. He started to alarm Skipper, and Skipper had also picked it up.

"It's faint, put blood was spilled here, and lots of it." Skipper kept on walking....

Oh I am sooo sorry for the delay guys! I've been to busy with Striaton City (Another story) and my Wishfulshipping fanfics. I promise I'll update sooner!
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"Where is everyone?" Skipper asked the blunette as she popped through the hatch.

"Flushed away." she crossed her flippers and sighed. "No one ever listens to me."

"What do you mean Flushed away soldier?" Skipper asked taking another sip of his isda cofee.

"I mean the drain in the pool! She sinabi screaming in his face. "They went searching for a crazy thing that attacked me while...

As the sky broke into fragments, I found myself covered in chains. I looked through my blind fold to see two shawdowy figures in the shape of someone firmilar. Red eyes glared at me as I aimlessly strugle to get undone.

"There is a hole in her blind fold." A firmilar voice danced around in my head. A memory of a lemur who looked a bit similar to Rinn, but as a guy.

I tried to loosen, but a voice brought me back to my own reality, one that I could just touch.

"Mya wake up!" A worried voice of pain and ageny awoke the blunette girl. She was being shaked sa pamamagitan ng someone.

"Come on don't die on me!" Another...