Well,here's my first attempt to a short story :)
“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the tindahan he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell susunod to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man sinabi looking at the tindahan owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar voice asked. Hermione came in. One look at the glass and at Ron’s hand gave her the answer. “Did you try to steal?” she asked shocked. “Not steal. Just paying afterwards” Ron corrected her “Why?” Hermione asked “I wanted to give you something special” Ron sheepishly said. “Something special? Why?”Hermione repeated. “Well, it’s your birthday soon” “My birthday is not until a month, Ron” Hermione reminded him. Ron didn’t know what to say and Hermione took him outside. “So, basically you tried to steal a ring and give it for my birthday even though it’s ages from now?” she synthesized. Ron looked up. “Pretty much” he said, while his ears turned red. “That is just so sweet. Criminal, but sweet” Hermione smiled. Ron sighed in relief, because Hermione didn’t hate him. “I could think of a better present, though. It’s even free, lucky you” she continued. Ron frowned and looked at her. “ What do mean?”he asked confused. A present was never free. “ Hermione smiled mischievously, making Ron feeling uneasy. Than she decided to redeem him from his suffering. She leaned pasulong and kissed him. At first Ron was surprised, but than he replied sa pamamagitan ng halik back.
I hope you like it
“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the tindahan he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell susunod to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man sinabi looking at the tindahan owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar voice asked. Hermione came in. One look at the glass and at Ron’s hand gave her the answer. “Did you try to steal?” she asked shocked. “Not steal. Just paying afterwards” Ron corrected her “Why?” Hermione asked “I wanted to give you something special” Ron sheepishly said. “Something special? Why?”Hermione repeated. “Well, it’s your birthday soon” “My birthday is not until a month, Ron” Hermione reminded him. Ron didn’t know what to say and Hermione took him outside. “So, basically you tried to steal a ring and give it for my birthday even though it’s ages from now?” she synthesized. Ron looked up. “Pretty much” he said, while his ears turned red. “That is just so sweet. Criminal, but sweet” Hermione smiled. Ron sighed in relief, because Hermione didn’t hate him. “I could think of a better present, though. It’s even free, lucky you” she continued. Ron frowned and looked at her. “ What do mean?”he asked confused. A present was never free. “ Hermione smiled mischievously, making Ron feeling uneasy. Than she decided to redeem him from his suffering. She leaned pasulong and kissed him. At first Ron was surprised, but than he replied sa pamamagitan ng halik back.
I hope you like it
Okay guys, I know everyone's got their own opinion and not everyone has the RIGHT opinion, but as a Twilight fan, can one of you Potter fans explain what you guys see in Harry Potter? Honestly, I haven't read all the books, but I've seen all the pelikula and they just don't make any sense. And another thing, the plot is bland and there's no real depth to it, like in Twilight. Harry Potter, also has no pag-ibig in it, which makes for a boring story. Anyways, I just wanted to know what you crazies see in those books and stuff...
Okay...
See ya :D
Mariella
xxx
Okay...
See ya :D
Mariella
xxx
1. its just all thrown together and the pelikula leave out way to much.
2. it has no meaning just a girl falls in pag-ibig then is a vampire the end.
3. is just plain stupid.simple as that
4. theres nothing to figure out. its to predictable.
5. it dosent have enough back story which goes back to # 1
6.and stephine myer wants to keep all the good players while j.k. isnt afraid to for the sake of the book
7.why doesnt she mentention why bellas parent got seperated which geos back to #4
8. it has no plot
9. the problem is the same all the way throughout the sires as h.p. faces many problems.
10.its down right boring hmm lets read the same boring thing over and over! yea! NOT!
TEN REASONS TWILIGHT IS HORRIBLE!!!!
2. it has no meaning just a girl falls in pag-ibig then is a vampire the end.
3. is just plain stupid.simple as that
4. theres nothing to figure out. its to predictable.
5. it dosent have enough back story which goes back to # 1
6.and stephine myer wants to keep all the good players while j.k. isnt afraid to for the sake of the book
7.why doesnt she mentention why bellas parent got seperated which geos back to #4
8. it has no plot
9. the problem is the same all the way throughout the sires as h.p. faces many problems.
10.its down right boring hmm lets read the same boring thing over and over! yea! NOT!
TEN REASONS TWILIGHT IS HORRIBLE!!!!
"This halik between Hermione and Ron is highly anticipated, it's been building up for eight films now. And Harry Potter is not Twilight, you know; we're not selling sex." - Emma Watson
If you think Emma Watson is stupid for quoting this, you are outta your mind. You think Twilight's not selling sex? Irony. Irony how some twi-hards reason out "BECAUSE EDWARD CULLEN IS SO SEXY!!!" if asked why Twilight is better than Harry Potter.
For me, Twilight is just popular 'cause it has sex appeal. Wait for several years, no one will be talking about Twilight anymore.. Harry Potter won't be talked about that much but it will never be forgotten.In my case, I know Harry Potter will be a future classic.
Twilight fans go ahead and attack me, whenever you're ready.
If you think Emma Watson is stupid for quoting this, you are outta your mind. You think Twilight's not selling sex? Irony. Irony how some twi-hards reason out "BECAUSE EDWARD CULLEN IS SO SEXY!!!" if asked why Twilight is better than Harry Potter.
For me, Twilight is just popular 'cause it has sex appeal. Wait for several years, no one will be talking about Twilight anymore.. Harry Potter won't be talked about that much but it will never be forgotten.In my case, I know Harry Potter will be a future classic.
Twilight fans go ahead and attack me, whenever you're ready.