Well,here's my first attempt to a short story :)
“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the tindahan he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell susunod to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man sinabi looking at the tindahan owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar voice asked. Hermione came in. One look at the glass and at Ron’s hand gave her the answer. “Did you try to steal?” she asked shocked. “Not steal. Just paying afterwards” Ron corrected her “Why?” Hermione asked “I wanted to give you something special” Ron sheepishly said. “Something special? Why?”Hermione repeated. “Well, it’s your birthday soon” “My birthday is not until a month, Ron” Hermione reminded him. Ron didn’t know what to say and Hermione took him outside. “So, basically you tried to steal a ring and give it for my birthday even though it’s ages from now?” she synthesized. Ron looked up. “Pretty much” he said, while his ears turned red. “That is just so sweet. Criminal, but sweet” Hermione smiled. Ron sighed in relief, because Hermione didn’t hate him. “I could think of a better present, though. It’s even free, lucky you” she continued. Ron frowned and looked at her. “ What do mean?”he asked confused. A present was never free. “ Hermione smiled mischievously, making Ron feeling uneasy. Than she decided to redeem him from his suffering. She leaned pasulong and kissed him. At first Ron was surprised, but than he replied sa pamamagitan ng halik back.
I hope you like it
“Hey! Stop him! He’s stealing!!!!” the owner shouted. Ron ran as fast as he could, but he didn’t get far. Only a few yards from the tindahan he collapsed to a large person and fell on the ground. The ring fell susunod to him and the man understood what was going on. He picked Ron and the ring off the floor and dragged him back to the jewelry shop. “I think this boy has something that’s yours” the man sinabi looking at the tindahan owner and he gave back the ring. “Thanks” the owner accepted in relief.
“What’s going on?” a familiar voice asked. Hermione came in. One look at the glass and at Ron’s hand gave her the answer. “Did you try to steal?” she asked shocked. “Not steal. Just paying afterwards” Ron corrected her “Why?” Hermione asked “I wanted to give you something special” Ron sheepishly said. “Something special? Why?”Hermione repeated. “Well, it’s your birthday soon” “My birthday is not until a month, Ron” Hermione reminded him. Ron didn’t know what to say and Hermione took him outside. “So, basically you tried to steal a ring and give it for my birthday even though it’s ages from now?” she synthesized. Ron looked up. “Pretty much” he said, while his ears turned red. “That is just so sweet. Criminal, but sweet” Hermione smiled. Ron sighed in relief, because Hermione didn’t hate him. “I could think of a better present, though. It’s even free, lucky you” she continued. Ron frowned and looked at her. “ What do mean?”he asked confused. A present was never free. “ Hermione smiled mischievously, making Ron feeling uneasy. Than she decided to redeem him from his suffering. She leaned pasulong and kissed him. At first Ron was surprised, but than he replied sa pamamagitan ng halik back.
I hope you like it
I don't want to hear about Harry Potter or any other book right now. I'm not setting this up for a pagtatalo about which is better. I just want to know seriously and honestly why you Twilight fans enjoy pagbaba Twilight. I want to see an actual reason that Twilight is a good book.
If you don't like Twilight, I don't want to hear you saying anything bad about it. I just want to know why people like it. Because all the debate's I've seen have no actual reasons. They have HP fans and Twihards going on about which book is better, but not why they like it.
I do actually want respectful pagtatalo though. I want to discuss the reasons you give, but nicely.
If you can't be respectful of each other's opinions then just don't comment.
And I'm not trying to hate on Twilight, but if I disagree with you I will pagtatalo with you.
I don't know if there are other debate's about this, so I'm sorry if there are, but I didn't look.
I'm just rambling now so let's get onto it!
If you don't like Twilight, I don't want to hear you saying anything bad about it. I just want to know why people like it. Because all the debate's I've seen have no actual reasons. They have HP fans and Twihards going on about which book is better, but not why they like it.
I do actually want respectful pagtatalo though. I want to discuss the reasons you give, but nicely.
If you can't be respectful of each other's opinions then just don't comment.
And I'm not trying to hate on Twilight, but if I disagree with you I will pagtatalo with you.
I don't know if there are other debate's about this, so I'm sorry if there are, but I didn't look.
I'm just rambling now so let's get onto it!
(I didn't include plot, good characters, etc. because those are automatically included)
1. POTATO.
2. pirates
3. ninjas
4. An awesome pirate/ninja fight
5. Swords (preferably celestial bronze)
6. Closets (for Edward to hide deep inside)
7. giraffes
8. YOUR FACE
9. YOUR MOM
10. YOUR MOM'S FACE
11. Butterflies
12. Chuck Norris
13. Jet-packs
14. kittens
15. strip poker :D
16. hand lotion
17. Sue Sylvester
18. sherbet
19. 20 bahon players :D
20. SNICKERS
21. Jedis
22. Druids :D
23. FREE ICE CREAM
24. A monkey called Jeeves who occasionally slaps Bella
25. YOU.
1. POTATO.
2. pirates
3. ninjas
4. An awesome pirate/ninja fight
5. Swords (preferably celestial bronze)
6. Closets (for Edward to hide deep inside)
7. giraffes
8. YOUR FACE
9. YOUR MOM
10. YOUR MOM'S FACE
11. Butterflies
12. Chuck Norris
13. Jet-packs
14. kittens
15. strip poker :D
16. hand lotion
17. Sue Sylvester
18. sherbet
19. 20 bahon players :D
20. SNICKERS
21. Jedis
22. Druids :D
23. FREE ICE CREAM
24. A monkey called Jeeves who occasionally slaps Bella
25. YOU.
Is it just me, or does it seem like most of the Twilight fans feel that they have to write in capitol letters to get their points across? Personally i find it really annoying.
It's also a fact that if you write in capitol letters IT TAKES LONGER FOR THE BRAIN TO PROCESS THE INFORMATION and therefore takes longer to read. Originally all the road signs (In England anyway) were written in capitol letters, until they were redone and someone found that smaller case letters were quicker to read. So they changed it.
So susunod time you feel like shouting because your book sucks, don't write in capitols, but put...
*shouting*... at the begining of your speech.
Thank you. That is all.
It's also a fact that if you write in capitol letters IT TAKES LONGER FOR THE BRAIN TO PROCESS THE INFORMATION and therefore takes longer to read. Originally all the road signs (In England anyway) were written in capitol letters, until they were redone and someone found that smaller case letters were quicker to read. So they changed it.
So susunod time you feel like shouting because your book sucks, don't write in capitols, but put...
*shouting*... at the begining of your speech.
Thank you. That is all.