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Blue Bolt- The new resident of Ponyville

posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, the newest resident of Ponyville

Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town or the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised sa pamamagitan ng some parang buriko who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!

Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...

It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.

Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!

Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed sa pamamagitan ng several drawing utensils. She is amazed sa pamamagitan ng this.

Pinkie: Whoa! This guy or girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!

Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a sinag from his horn.

Bolt: How do they control these things?

Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he or she is a unicorn! Would you like a cupcake? You're a shy one...

Bolt: Yes...I would like one....

Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?

Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.

Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! You like parties?

Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.

Pinkie: You need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See you later, Bolt!

Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.

Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help you with something....Aren't you that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's susunod door to mine.

Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...

Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can ipakita you around.

Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!

Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of you to notice. You should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great mga kaibigan with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!

Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with bahaghari hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was bahaghari Dash. Uh-oh...

Bolt: Excuse me....

Rainbow: Hey! Do you mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are you that unicorn who lives in the house susunod to Rarity's?

Bolt: Um....

Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't you talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)

Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!

Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like bahaghari Dash or not.

Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...

Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?

Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....

Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.

Bolt: No way! That's awesome! sa pamamagitan ng the way, you know the parang buriko with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?

Fluttershy: Applejack?

Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.

Fluttershy: So you like her?

Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.

applejack walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.

AJ: What the hay? Are you that unicorn who was lookin' at me? You ran off without sayin' anything!

Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...

AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?

Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)

Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.

AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)

Fluttershy is stunned.

AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!

Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?

Bolt: pag-ibig happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.

Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed sa pamamagitan ng a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.

Twilight: Spike! I told you to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten tahanan to start cooking....

Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....

Bolt: Hello....

Twilight: Hi! I've never seen you before. You new here?

Bolt: Yes, and so far only bahaghari has me at a distance.

Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help you with spells.

Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie sa pamamagitan ng accident!

Spike: Can I try on your glasses?

Bolt: I need them to see.

Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed sa pamamagitan ng Spike. Meanwhile, bahaghari is flying and sees Bolt.

Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!

Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are you going to yell at me again?

Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm bahaghari Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see you have quite a unique cutie mark. You fast?

Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.

Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. You got yourself a friend.

Bolt: segundo friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.

Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.

Bolt is now becoming madami confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in pag-ibig with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with bahaghari Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm, it was much better. It felt more "real" than last time. Yeah, I just realized I'm speaking of reality in the world of technicolor pastel ponies... haha! Anyways, nice job! :) Just one thing: it felt to me like you've rewritten the story in a way to show what I had in mind. It is always a good thing to try to fulfill the desires of your readers, but it is also important to keep your own writing style at the same time. But most importantly: enjoy yourself while writing something. Oh that reminds me. Do you consider a sequel? Cos now that you've established your character, the possibilities are limitless. :)

Dragon-88 Good idea! I'l make a sequel! I just don't know how to fulfill the desires of those who read my articles. Do they want the sequel to be more awesome? More Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie? Princess Celesia spending time with Blue Bolt? What more ideas could they want? Maybe in the sequel, Applejack and Blue Bolt will take their relationship to the next level! Or Pinkie will show him how to party!

NocturnalMirage Two things... 1. write what you wish to write, the ideas you said above can all be the foot-stone of your story. 2. I can understand it is hard to know what your readers think when most of the people don't reflect to the story. Only a few people here take the time to make a comment. But that doesn't have to be a reason to become discouraged. I don't know about you, but for me, writing is a hobby... gratification. It's a good way to enter the magical world of ponies and get away from the complexities and ugliness of life for a while. If people like your work, that's a good extra. One pretty basic tip I always find useful. One of my teachers said in Creative Writing class: "Don't tell the reader, show it to them!" It means you manage to create a certain atmosphere to the story. There are different writing styles and each writer has to find their own way to convey their thoughts to the reader. In your case, the dialogues move the plot forward. You've done a pretty good job on that already, so I'm looking forward to read form you in the future. Oh and if you need any help, you can almost always find me here on fanpop. :)

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Gran Turismo Episode 10 Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Stargazer's car

Song: link

The sun was rising in Gran Turismo, and the sky was a wonderful shade of orange.

Stargazer: *Driving his car at 65 miles an hour*
Black Tuesday: You're gonna get the cops after us before we even meet up with the others.
Stargazer: Don't worry. The cops won't catch us in this fine machine.

A brand new 300 turned onto the road behind them.

Stargazer: Either that's the parang buriko racing us, or it's an undercover cop.
Black Tuesday: Undercover?
Stargazer: Oh yes. The police here have plenty of undercover police cars. Both 300's, and Impalas, and they're all brand new. However, as I sinabi earlier, they...

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Gran Turismo Episode 10 Part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

What to expect in this episode.

Tim: Those two keep getting away from us Captain. We need to expand our jurisdiction to Canterlot.
Captain Jefferson: Do you know how difficult that is?
Tim: I understand, but when the suspects get out of Gran Turismo, neither the State Troopers, or CHP can get prepared in time.

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Stargazer: *Holding $500 in front of Black Tuesday* Look at all of this money.
Black Tuesday: That's not a lot.
Stargazer: Maybe so, but if we keep doing what we just did, we'll get madami of this.

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Toby: The stallions know where to go, and when.
Tim: Why don't we use that to our advantage?...

Ponies On The Rails Episode 115 Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Date: February 17, 1963
Location: Cheyenne Wyoming
Time: 10:09 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Orion was on his way back to Cheyenne from Denver, after delivering the Iron Ore, and steel. Now the freight cars on his train are empty.

Orion: The adventure never seems to end for those freight cars. They just keep going all over the place, and.. What the fuck am I talking about?
Audience: *Laughing*
Orion: *Going down Sherman Hill* Okay, time for my plan.
Mirage: *Backing three diesels onto a freight train*
Dan: *Walking to Mirage's train*
Mike: Where are you two heading?
Dan: Westbound, to Greeley.
Mirage:...

Gran Turismo Episode 9 Part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Song (Start at 1:39): link

Blue: *Enters Gran Turismo*
State Trooper Pony: All units, State Troopers, and Gran Turismo Police Department, Blue Fedora, and Aqua Marine are at it again. Southbound, black Pontiac, Ida, 2, 4, Edward, King, Sam.
Two Undercover Police Ponies: *Driving Impalas*
Undercover Police Pony: Ten-4, we're joining the pursuit.
Tim: *Next to Julia as she drives the M4* GT24 to units chasing Blue, and Aqua, what's your location?
State Trooper Pony: Main Street.
Julia: *Drives*
Tim: Ten-4, joining pursuit from Local Consideration.
Aqua: *Holding a Glock pistol* Turn left at that intersection....

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Gran Turismo Episode 9 Part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Julia was driving the M4 Police car, patrolling the Round Freeway, with Tim sitting susunod to her.

Tim: Did Dan tell you the bad news?
Julia: Dan hasn't spoken to me in two days. What happened?
Tim: He, and his partners were pulled out of the Blue Fedora, and Aqua Marine case.
Julia: They must be upset about it.
Tim: Yeah. It was because of something Andy did. He shot a parang buriko when he wasn't supposed to.
Julia: Why? What was the other parang buriko doing?
Tim: He was just visiting a friend, and was taking some things with him. Some apples, a carrot, and he borrowed a PS2 controller, because his wasn't working....

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Project GATE Episode 4

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Void - You wanted to meet me.
Dan - Yes. Do you know what holds Valkyries core?
Void - Same as old PCS is SLS.
Dan - Saftey Lock System... So ligtas that it can be open. We called it overlock.
Void - So?
Dan - Use it too long and you simply die.

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???
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Nyx - Hmmm... You smell it. The storm is coming.
Blaze - Yes *looks over him* Butyful.
Nyx - So my dear. *looks in he eyes* It's time to interrupt their fun event.

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operation shadow raid
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Dan - Phase 3 end. Phase 4.
Void - Let-
Blaze - Well well well.
-Blaze shows in same Valkyrie but black and red colored-
Blaze - *shoots something to the ground as it...

Ponies On The Rails Episode 114 Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Date: February 14, 1963
Location: Cheyenne Wyoming
Time: 9:46 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Ponies: *Listening to the loudspeaker at the station*
Loudspeaker Pony: Attention all passengers, happy Valentines Day. The susunod train arriving is The City Of Denver. It's really big, so make sure it doesn't hit you.
Audience: *Laughing*
Hawkeye: *Kissing Metal Gloss as he drives a freight train out of the yard*
Metal Gloss: I feel so warm.
Hawkeye: Your face is red. Perhaps it's something I did.
Metal Gloss: Oh, no the heater is too high. *Lowers the temperature on the heater*
Audience: *Laughing*

Snowflake...

Ponies On The Rails Episode 114 Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Date: February 9, 1963
Location: Cheyenne Wyoming
Time: 8:16 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Pete: *In his office* Why, are we back here? Go follow Stylo, I know what he's doing.
Audience: *Laughing*
Pete: I wish him good luck too.

Song: link

Two days later at a bar

Stylo: *Drunk, resting his head on the counter in front of him* Oh fuck!!!
Pony 85: *Arrives* Hey.
Stylo: *Picks up his head, and looks at the parang buriko to his right*
Pony 85: I've heard of you.
Stylo: I'm sure you have, now if you don't mind, I'm trying to have a hangover.
Audience: *Laughing*
Pony 85: Somepony named Pierce Hawkins told me about you....

My Little Pony: Zombies Part 16

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Round 17 is beginning

Rainbow Dash: Okay, here's what we're going to do. *Loses connection*

Rainbow Dash has left the game

Pinkie Pie: I like that idea. Let's do nothing.
Twilight: She rost connection. It's up to us.
Pinkie Pie: Right you are Twilight. Let's go use the teleporter.

As they were running, twelve zombies started to chase them.

Twilight: *Throws a monkey*
Monkey: That tickles. *Lands between the horde of zombies*
Zombies: *Staying around the monkey*
Monkey: *Kills the zombies* Better luck susunod time zombies.
Twilight: You give me great honor.
Pinkie Pie: *Turns on the teleporter, and plants...

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Project GATE Episode 1

posted by SomeoneButNoone

"They sinabi to colonise the orther world. Noone knew it would end with millions of dead. Officials say that they can be heated as new generation of PCS come out under new name : Valkyries. These one are bigger, in size of typical Ponyville building and are created on look of human. Ponies enlist to army to take on monsters on orther side of gate, where -60 C cold wildness meet them."

Dan - You will not fall back from battlefield!

SomeoneButNoone presents.

Dan - Squadron V-2 are present :

The newest project.

Dan - V-1.1 Captain-Liberator Void V-1.2 segundo Lieutenant Snowflake.

And the main project...

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My Little Pony: Zombies Part 7

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Round 8 is beginning

Rainbow Dash: *Sees a green light on the map* The mystery box is on the bottom left portion of this map.
Applejack: What are we waitin' for? Let's buy some guns.

Lead sa pamamagitan ng bahaghari Dash, the ponies ran up the aisle, heading towards the room they started in, and turned right, to buy the susunod room.

Pinkie Pie: Okay, time for one of you to buy the door now.
Applejack: No Pinkie, you do it. You have enough points to buy both this door, and a gun from the mystery box.
Pinkie Pie: Do not argue with your leader, and buy the door! One of you!
Rainbow Dash: I'll be the mature pony, and buy...

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Project VOID Episode 6

posted by SomeoneButNoone

>>>rebooting system
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>>>>Error<<<<<

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Equestrian Labs.
00:05
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Steven - *reads papers* Mhm... I see... Alright *drops paper* Alright... Dan left you unfinished. Time to polish you.

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1 oras later*
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Steven - OK
Scientist #1 - *gives half mechanic puso to Steven*
Steven - *puts puso inside* You will feel great... And be allowed to use over-trance.
Scientist #2 - We are ready for additional repairments.
Steven - Splendid! Let's start right away!

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4 hours later
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Void - *wakes up* where.. I am?
Steven - Welcome! You were dead for one year.
Void - Dead......

Awesome parang buriko pics

added by NocturnalMirage

Source: EQD, joyreactor

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The Heist : Episode 9

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Joel - You guys know there is way to clear my account. Pilot!
Pilot - Aye?
Joel - To FBI HQ!
Pilot - Yes sir.
Joel - *wears Kevlar* Those prison clothes are uncomfortable.
Steven - What's the plan?
Damien - Yeah...
Joel - Arson. We burn the hall and take server with my data and break it.
Damien - Sounds easy.
Joel - Oi... Nothing is easy...

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After action - safehouse
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Joel - Woo good to be free.
Damien - You talk like you were there for ages but it wasn't even 12 hours.
Steven - Heh...
Joel - Give me a break..

Dimitri - Good job boys. Your debts were paid... Good luck in your life!
FI - Well guys first...

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The Heist : Episode 6

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Dimitri - Do you liked the mares I sender to you? They didn't wanted it but with some money... You guys live like kings in the penthouse I bought for you. But it's action time. Time to work on the work. I left you some heavy armor to wear. You gonna go with truck as watch dogs. If anyone will try to steal it kill them. If police gonna check the truck kill them. Money need some laundry so you know. Anyway that's pretty much this.
FI - Heard the old pony. Sit there and don't ilipat an inch and everything will be OKAY.

Damien - Eh it takes long to get there.
Steven - Yeah...
Joel - uy new how is it...

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The Heist : Episode 5

posted by SomeoneButNoone

FI - Gentelmans we will ilipat onto bigger shit from now.

Hour : 06:28

FI - My old informator need help, his name is Dimitri, he have Russian Mob on territories of Ponyville and Canterlot, we are doing job for him.

Location : Canterlot

FI - Some Ponies started stealing his cocaine and use it in their little ghetto. Dimitri want you to "pay them a visit" and take what his. He will reward us with money. He trusts us so don't screw it up. No police - only you and junkies. Easy right? And it gives us enterance into Canterlot affairs.

Action Start

*Van appears at ghetto*
Junkie - What the hell.. Cops or...

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Gran Turismo Episode 7 Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

It was 8:57 PM when Tim arrived at the green house susunod to the train station. There, he would visit Brielle.

Tim: *Walks to the front door* I wonder how she's able to answer the door. *Rings the door bell*

The whole house vibrated from the kampanilya being rung.

Tim: Guess that sagot my question.
Brielle: *Opens the door while holding a piece of paper that says hello*

Song (Start at 0:15): link

Meanwhile on Malpaso Avenue, disaster struck

Pony: *Driving a Mitsubishi in the dark*
Deer: *Runs into the road*
Pony: *Brakes, but hits the deer*
Honda Pony: *Hits the Mitsubishi*
Volkswagen Pony: *Crashes...

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Saten Twist adventures S3E4 PART 3

posted by Canada24

Saten and Spike: Starlight Glimmer?

Twilight: I was sure I saw her, boys. But when I looked again, she was gone! I'm just worried what she could be up

Spike: Nothing good, I bet. I heard she wasn't very happy the last time you saw.

Saten: (sarcastically) You don't say.

Twilight: Look, forcing everybody in her village to have the same cutie mark wasn't right. We had to do something!

Saten: madami like you had to do something.. I loved her town.

Twilight: (annoyed) No you didn't.. You just thought she was hot.

Saten: ... Still do.

Twilight: Well, you won't be thinking that after she tries to kill you.

Saten:...

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Darkness - Ode to Destruction Ep. 2

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Episode 2

"The battle aginst fool"

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Darkness - Really...
Gatekeeper - Only one parang buriko to pass this point.
Lightning - Why?
Gatekeeper - Or else another Ponies will die.......
Whiteheart - I'll go!
Darkness - Let me... I have power of creation...
Gatekeeper - Everypony else should follow me *walks*
Lightning - Watch out there... OK...
Darkness - Alright... *walks to Golden Hall*
Dan - *stands in middle of hall slightly smiling* You couldn't play sa pamamagitan ng my rules....
Darkness - ...
Dan - Its a butyful araw isn't it...
Darkness - ...
Dan - You know what is special in this Hall, if someone dies he come back. Well...

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Saten Twisst Adventures S3E4 Part 2

posted by Canada24

Meanwhile, Saten Twist catches up to an unnamed stallion, near an empty building.

Saten: (angrily) Hey, buddy.. Give back Lemon's purse.

Stallion: (holding serbesa bottle) And why would I do tha- (Saten steals the guys bottle) Hey!

Saten: (looking at the bottle) this must of been expensive.

Stallion: Not really.. It was on sale.

Saten: Oh.. Good.. Than the only thing this will damage is your head, not to bank account.

Stallion: What you mean my he-

Saten: Last chance to give back to purse.

Stallion: Fuck you.

Saten: I figured your say that.. (suddenly he breaks the bottle on the guys head, causing the...