ang pakikipagkaibigan munting parang buriko ay mahika Article: Moon Dust's Back Story

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posted by Moon-Dust12

Moon Dust

Hello people

I have decided to give you all Moon Dust's back story so enjoy and comment!

Moon Dust was born on Hearths Warming Eve. Her father was a pegasus named puno Whisper. Nopony knew who her mother was. Moon Dust was delivered onto her father's house the night she was born sa pamamagitan ng Princess Luna.
Luna sinabi she found Moon Dust in the snow sa pamamagitan ng the kastilyo with a note telling the princesses he was her father. Luna sinabi she sensed great power from this filly. puno Whisper asked her to name the filly because naming the filly was not his job.
Moon Dust was named Moon Snowy Dust Moon Dust for short. puno Whisper raised Moon Dust until another filly with a bahaghari mane was delivered to his house with a name and note saying she was named bahaghari Wing. sa pamamagitan ng then Moon Dust was 2.
When Moon Dust was 10 she was accepted to Celestia's School for gifted mga kabayong may sungay and when she turned 12 she was made Luna's apprentice.
So that is most of Moon Dust's back story

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tailsfan111, AquaMarine6663 and 1 other like this

alinah_09 not bad,but i think its a bit rushed...

AquaMarine6663 Kinda... sorta, needs punctuation. something that really bugs me for some reason...

jordy_dash Meh.... *eyes explode* I cant hold it in! TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SHORT!!!M!!!!!! I CREATED AN ENTIRE ARTICLE SERIES EXPLAINING MY OC's BACKSTORY! Wanna know why? BECAUSE MY POWER LEVEL IS.......... OVER 9000!!!!!!!! And I have the look of TAMAKI SUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

Moon-Dust12 Hey jordy_dash at least they were nice about it STOP COMMENTING ON MY STUFF!!!!! I'm going to rewrite it but not because of your comment! Because I know i was rushed it was my sister's turn on the computer and i needed to finish

SkyheartPegasus Jeez, Jordy, don't just come here and criticize it just because it's short. Anywho, onto the actual article, yes, it is short. I understand why. But his father was a pegasus, and Moon Dust was a unicorn? I'm gonna guess her unknown mom is a unicorn. Very well, though.

Sikaurai Jordy, stop comparing this person's stuff to your own. Stop seeking attention to your stuff on someone else's page. This isn't your page. And since I've already educated you on the process of CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, then you're just flaming, now. And if you feel like you're entitled to that, have fun over on deviartART.com where they would eat you alive, troll.

SkyheartPegasus ^ God.. the dA trolls. ;-;

jordy_dash ... *claps slowly and laughs* yes! Give me your hate! Maybe if you do it enough Jesus or who ever you believe in with might me down! Haha! I am a veteran of this website and when I get ate alive im ok, I don't go asdfghjkl, i just go meh, nice OPINION but oh wait! Idiots don't believe in the world OPINION, it's why there's wars! Deaths from fighting and shit like that, do you think i care?

NocturnalMirage All right, everybody just calm the fuck down, okay? This kind of behavior has to stop. This is not the place to act like this.

Sikaurai Jordy, I don't think you're a significant enough part of my daily life that I would have an emotional response like hate toward you. I THINK, however, that you should go back and read your last comment. Not really sure how it became about religion, unless you had a really bad day arguing with someone in your church, and now you're taking it out on the intardnetz. Now get off my cousin's page before I report you for being an emotional train-wreck on a public forum. Once again, my cousin's page is not about you.

Sikaurai @Skyheart: devART has wonderful artists. But the younger crowd has some AWESOME trolls. They're fun to watch.

Sikaurai @Aquamarine and Alinah_9: Yeah, she's always rushed. That's what stinks, because she IS creative. Moondust doesn't have internet at her house, so sometimes she and her sister come over to my family's place to use the laptop. But they can never stay long, and they're always fighting each other for internet time. It's a little frustrating, since it's my laptop they're fighting over, lol. But I DO agree about the punctuation. That's a pet peeve of mine, too.

Windwakerguy430 I think this was interesting. I won't criticise it for being short, because like you said, you had a limited time to talk, so there is no reason for me to criticise your wor. Great story :) Just ignore Jordy, he has a tendancy to be a little... overdramatic

SkyheartPegasus @Sikaurai I know, I've been there for 7 months now. I've seen many awesome artists over there. Oh, and you should join the analysis community if you haven't already. XD

Sikaurai Analysis community? Where is that? I'm never on devART, anymore, because the only time I'm online is when I'm at work. What is it and where can I find it?