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Is this good for a tweve taon old? Its a song called " i miss you" written sa pamamagitan ng a twelve taon old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if you do the same, while you look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked you out of all the guys. now will you do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of you araw and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do you miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss you and your gentle touch. i wish that you were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that you could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till you reach me... and wait for you to halik me.
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 taon old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine sa pamamagitan ng the time she is 17 or so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This Pagsulat isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good Pagsulat wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve taon old. :)
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