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Is this a good poem and do you think madami could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke or saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
You had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
Or your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
You sinabi it was akward
And that you still pag-ibig me
But I think I pushed you too far
What did I do
To make you push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want you in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for you even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if you want me back
Prove you won't hurt me again
Never again you will you hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
You fucked up









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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think you have to add anything else its perfect :)
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Thank you. Im glad you liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
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Glad you liked it
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