Would anyone be willing to read an excerpt from my story?

If you want to I mean. I'll send it to you.

Its a part from the end of the story, but one of the better developed parts.

Its only from the end because the beginning of the story is still rough, and sort of void.

If you're interested I'll tell you madami before I send it, I don't want to say to much.

It is between Severus and My OC Clara.

Im just looking for opinions, maybe help me improve gramatically.