Chapter three: Messages Part two: Sender
Location: New Legion base
Date: Thursday, December 21st 4337
“…And you are sure that the project made these events occur?” A tall echidna, wearing a sort of uniform asked, a hooded echidna, as they both walked through a string of dark hallways.
“Ahm certain, sir.” A Tocktin (Cockney British) accented echidna under the hood, answered. “Not only that, but my guess’is, that she does remembah one bloomin thing. I mean, being from that past world and all.”
“Indeed.” The taller one replied. “Well at least we still have that back-up Phantis project.”
“Yeah, that reminds me sir…” The cloaked one stated, “why do we still have her?”
“I just sinabi she’s a back-up.” The taller one scolded. “The process could destroy this ‘Lizena’, or cause some giant wave of dark-element energy. If she fails to be usable, we shall use her sister for it. And I doubt it will be as hard, seeing how she has the more… stable abilities.”
“Shame she don’t know ‘bout those ‘Abilities’.” The cloaked echidna noted. “Otherwise, she’d break out of e-ah soonah than a black piece-a-toast in the…toastah.”
“Which is why we are visiting her cell.” The taller one added. “Daily blank-element shot. A shame we weren’t able to discover the true name for this power, but ‘Blank-element’ does have a nice ring to it.”
“’Ere i-tis.” The lesser one announced, opening a cell door. Inside the cell was a small metal seat. On it was what seemed to be some kind of cat-hybrid. No one would be able to tell for sure, for the prisoner was glowing with the blank-red-glow, which caused her to glow far too much to be detailed.
The prisoner scooted away from her visitors, muttering to herself “Not the thought. Not the thoughts.” The taller echidna raised his head to her, and she began to feel a great deal of pain, which caused her to fall to the ground. She could not move, for she was hurting far too much.
The lesser echidna handed the taller one a syringe; inside it, a fair amount of blank element. The uniformed one walked over to the female, then stuck the syringe through her shoulder. She gave a short gasp, as a tear rand down her burning face.
“It is too bad that you must be confined in such a way, my dear.” The villain teased. “so much potential, and you can’t even use it… well not unless we wish to use it to take down your sister.”
The girl turned her head to the uniformed echidna. “S-i…ster…?” She muttered, astonished sa pamamagitan ng the information.
“Oh, I’ve sinabi too much already.” The echidna chuckled, as he and his associate left the room; locking the door behind them. As they walked off the pain faded to an extent, as the prisoner let out loudly “MY SISTER!?!?!”
Location: New Legion base
Date: Thursday, December 21st 4337
“…And you are sure that the project made these events occur?” A tall echidna, wearing a sort of uniform asked, a hooded echidna, as they both walked through a string of dark hallways.
“Ahm certain, sir.” A Tocktin (Cockney British) accented echidna under the hood, answered. “Not only that, but my guess’is, that she does remembah one bloomin thing. I mean, being from that past world and all.”
“Indeed.” The taller one replied. “Well at least we still have that back-up Phantis project.”
“Yeah, that reminds me sir…” The cloaked one stated, “why do we still have her?”
“I just sinabi she’s a back-up.” The taller one scolded. “The process could destroy this ‘Lizena’, or cause some giant wave of dark-element energy. If she fails to be usable, we shall use her sister for it. And I doubt it will be as hard, seeing how she has the more… stable abilities.”
“Shame she don’t know ‘bout those ‘Abilities’.” The cloaked echidna noted. “Otherwise, she’d break out of e-ah soonah than a black piece-a-toast in the…toastah.”
“Which is why we are visiting her cell.” The taller one added. “Daily blank-element shot. A shame we weren’t able to discover the true name for this power, but ‘Blank-element’ does have a nice ring to it.”
“’Ere i-tis.” The lesser one announced, opening a cell door. Inside the cell was a small metal seat. On it was what seemed to be some kind of cat-hybrid. No one would be able to tell for sure, for the prisoner was glowing with the blank-red-glow, which caused her to glow far too much to be detailed.
The prisoner scooted away from her visitors, muttering to herself “Not the thought. Not the thoughts.” The taller echidna raised his head to her, and she began to feel a great deal of pain, which caused her to fall to the ground. She could not move, for she was hurting far too much.
The lesser echidna handed the taller one a syringe; inside it, a fair amount of blank element. The uniformed one walked over to the female, then stuck the syringe through her shoulder. She gave a short gasp, as a tear rand down her burning face.
“It is too bad that you must be confined in such a way, my dear.” The villain teased. “so much potential, and you can’t even use it… well not unless we wish to use it to take down your sister.”
The girl turned her head to the uniformed echidna. “S-i…ster…?” She muttered, astonished sa pamamagitan ng the information.
“Oh, I’ve sinabi too much already.” The echidna chuckled, as he and his associate left the room; locking the door behind them. As they walked off the pain faded to an extent, as the prisoner let out loudly “MY SISTER!?!?!”
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Nawawala my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. mga kaibigan that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
