Under My World -chapter 2
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Gracie and Omega walked out of HQ and headed to the city. Omega described every place there was as Gracie asked questions. The two walked to the brook in the city. The water was icy cold and clearly beautiful. Omega considered to keep an area out. Omega looked around to spot Dr. Cledd. Gracie walked to Dr. Cledd with Omega a head. She wasn't ready to hear a lame discovery but knew she would need ear phones.
"E 123 Omega here,sent from Sarge. Here is Gracie,she is new. You must be Dr. Cledd." Omega suggested.
"Yes,pleasure to meet you two! " Dr. Cledd replied grinning.
"So what is the discovery?" Gracie asked.
"Oh,I discovered that Dr. Dred is at the base in Cleverage underground rode.Important,huh?" Dr. Cledd smiled.
"Who?" Gracie asked.
"Dr. Dred is an evil scientist doctor who seeks power. He is looking for the most power he can get." Omega replied.
"Oh,soooo can we go get Dr. Dred and pound since into him?" Gracie asked with pleasure.
Omega ignored Gracie as he called Sarge. Sarge yelled threw the call saying "HELL YA!" Omega hung up as Gracie and him headed to the Cleverage underground rode. The underground Cleverage was technicality bright with electricals and turns on. Gracie looked around amazed. A gaint lever swung and hit Gracie against the pader as Omega got ready to fight. A pale kahel hedgehog walked out.
"Gracie,say hello to Dr. Dred." Omega translated.
"Hey ugly!" Gracie smirked at the dizzy vision.
Gracie snuck out and turned invisable. Omega grabbed Dr. Dred and held tight. Gracie climbed up at the inside roof and jumped at the computers. She hacked and downloaded all of the files and ran to Omega at the end with a silver disk. Dr. Dred fell unconscious as Gracie pulled a pressure point. She stored the disk in Omega as they walked to HQ,thanking Dr. Cledd. Gracie and Omega became best pals for a little bit until a black male hedgehog stormed up at them as Dr. Dred was put in jail. The black hedgehog had red streaks and his eyes glowed an impatient red.
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GRACIE THE PRINCESS HEDGEHOG OF THE UNDERWORLD
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Gracie and Omega walked out of HQ and headed to the city. Omega described every place there was as Gracie asked questions. The two walked to the brook in the city. The water was icy cold and clearly beautiful. Omega considered to keep an area out. Omega looked around to spot Dr. Cledd. Gracie walked to Dr. Cledd with Omega a head. She wasn't ready to hear a lame discovery but knew she would need ear phones.
"E 123 Omega here,sent from Sarge. Here is Gracie,she is new. You must be Dr. Cledd." Omega suggested.
"Yes,pleasure to meet you two! " Dr. Cledd replied grinning.
"So what is the discovery?" Gracie asked.
"Oh,I discovered that Dr. Dred is at the base in Cleverage underground rode.Important,huh?" Dr. Cledd smiled.
"Who?" Gracie asked.
"Dr. Dred is an evil scientist doctor who seeks power. He is looking for the most power he can get." Omega replied.
"Oh,soooo can we go get Dr. Dred and pound since into him?" Gracie asked with pleasure.
Omega ignored Gracie as he called Sarge. Sarge yelled threw the call saying "HELL YA!" Omega hung up as Gracie and him headed to the Cleverage underground rode. The underground Cleverage was technicality bright with electricals and turns on. Gracie looked around amazed. A gaint lever swung and hit Gracie against the pader as Omega got ready to fight. A pale kahel hedgehog walked out.
"Gracie,say hello to Dr. Dred." Omega translated.
"Hey ugly!" Gracie smirked at the dizzy vision.
Gracie snuck out and turned invisable. Omega grabbed Dr. Dred and held tight. Gracie climbed up at the inside roof and jumped at the computers. She hacked and downloaded all of the files and ran to Omega at the end with a silver disk. Dr. Dred fell unconscious as Gracie pulled a pressure point. She stored the disk in Omega as they walked to HQ,thanking Dr. Cledd. Gracie and Omega became best pals for a little bit until a black male hedgehog stormed up at them as Dr. Dred was put in jail. The black hedgehog had red streaks and his eyes glowed an impatient red.
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GRACIE THE PRINCESS HEDGEHOG OF THE UNDERWORLD
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Tell me if you see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a pantasiya world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a pantasiya world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
slick's full attire
ginto desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his sando but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat kutsilyo just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front hood has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
apoy powers(only when 1 of his mga kaibigan r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)
ginto desert eagle(side arm)
commando assault rifle(primary)
intervention(sniper)
uzi(secondary)
wears(his sando but with longer sleeves and his pants have 2 ammo holds on each side 4 each gun.and a grey long scarf)
regular combat kutsilyo just the handle has his name on it
his military vehicle(a regular military humvee)
his regular person car(a red middle striped car with the left side black and the right side white.the middle of the front hood has his logo)
climbing boots
gloves(grey)
a special red edges sword
mystacal powers:
dark power
chaos shot,chaos blast(only when enraged)chaos control(only with a chaos emerald)
apoy powers(only when 1 of his mga kaibigan r hurt and the 1 that hurt the friend tries to burn him)