So while the first full fanfiction I wrote was Lizzy: Eternal, the first idea and series I had was the Seven Server Saga; the thing that literally started EVERYTHING I ever made.
This was the origin for…
~Virus
~Tak
~Daricha
~Tons of other characters you haven’t heard of
~Phantis
~And basically every plot that started in other series, or almost all of them.
This was my first, and to this araw only, series that involved kanyon characters, but it had quite a few changes along the way.
So let’s go to the beginning involving my first ever tagahanga Character, Starcher Saraduct. I made this guy when I was seven I believe, and back then he was just a “true form” for Tails, called “Saraduct” or “Starduct” and later “Starcher Nova”, and now “Starcher Saraduct”.
The plot started out with (my memory is foggy on this) Tails, Sonic, Knuckles, maybe Shadow, going to stop Eggman, Eggman releases a villain I made that isn’t that important at the moment named Nazoc (NOT stolen from Nazo. I just took Zonac and respelled the name. He has nothing to do with Nazo.), Sonic and co die, Tails gets angry, turns into Starcher, adventure adventure, yippie doo, the end.
Obviously a bad plot, but again, I was seven. So a taon or two later we get Mist, Luner, and Tear. These characters were originally ancient guardiens of Nawawala kingdoms who would appear in my series at some point, with their kingdoms rising up again, and our bayani seeing them as threats. They’d go to each character’s kingdom and defeat them, before discovering that there was a traitor named “Morf” (Yeah terrifying name), who was the only actual villain. One Real Super Power of Team Work later, and Morf’s defeated, and Mist, Luner, and Tear go back to their… hibernation I guess.
I actually think this plot sounds workable, and I’d like to use it, but it doesn’t fit with my current series, so maybe I’ll just use the idea in something else.
I had other characters that popped up along the way.
~Slash: A raccoon (lynx actually I didn’t know the difference back then) who had two curved blades. He’s sort of the origin for Craiger but only because they are a bit similar in personality. He’s paired with
~Breeze, a wind hedgehog girl, who’s not important and I never use, followed by
~Tak… a twelve year-old NORMAL fox, that throws tacks at people with two tails… yep that’s his origin.
~A daga girl named Jynx, who’s basically a cynic. This would later become Jenna, and become a bat obviously instead of a rat.
Some others came along the way, but if I listed them all we’d be here all day.
So looking back on the stories I started to think “This is kind of dumb”, and I began rewriting characters. Mist, Tak, Tear, and Luner were called “Seven Servers”, Mist going from a Shadow-rip-off to a pyro echidna, Tear being a water type poke- hedgehog, and Luner being a plant-controlling echidna. Tak got two inhibitor rings, one light, one dark, and his faded eyes, but he was still twelve.
So over time Starcher was starting to fall out of my interest, and Tak was starting to interest me more, so I changed up Tak a bit, and we have the Time Controlling Chronos Sever, now nineteen instead of twelve.
THEN we have the first story “His World” (I based the titles off songs). In it, Tak is created sa pamamagitan ng Dr. Finitevus, rebels, summons Midnight Psych (another server, also half responsible for the banshees), and goes through typical adventure until Finitevus uses the Master Esmeralda to destroy New Mobotropolis, and Tak and others save the day, yada yada.
Tak also has feelings for Nicole, but I try to make it non-cheesy sa pamamagitan ng not actually pairing them. The idea is that Tak “loves” her, but doesn’t make a ilipat from guilt, and it sounds better in my head X{D.
Following that plot, Tak dies, but fuses his rings to Nicole, allowing her to have a sort of moveable body, but somewhat unstable. I might change that but moving on.
Now we have Virus. So we have Iron Nicole, and we have Anti-Nicole, both coming from their Mobiuses and dying from lack of power. Both of them find Robotropolis and fuse, causing the city to completely explode, and we have Virus Prime.
After this it’s just spoiler plot. The series would eventually introduce madami bayani like Revten Tess, and Trixin Lighten, and Villains like Trisell Chronos, and Seela. I haven’t actually written it due to time constraints, but I definitely will at some point.
There are a LOT of things I wish I could say that come from this series, but even the smallest detail could be a spoiler. Buuuuut… I’ll just say that this involves Melcro quite a bit madami than you’d think.
This was the origin for…
~Virus
~Tak
~Daricha
~Tons of other characters you haven’t heard of
~Phantis
~And basically every plot that started in other series, or almost all of them.
This was my first, and to this araw only, series that involved kanyon characters, but it had quite a few changes along the way.
So let’s go to the beginning involving my first ever tagahanga Character, Starcher Saraduct. I made this guy when I was seven I believe, and back then he was just a “true form” for Tails, called “Saraduct” or “Starduct” and later “Starcher Nova”, and now “Starcher Saraduct”.
The plot started out with (my memory is foggy on this) Tails, Sonic, Knuckles, maybe Shadow, going to stop Eggman, Eggman releases a villain I made that isn’t that important at the moment named Nazoc (NOT stolen from Nazo. I just took Zonac and respelled the name. He has nothing to do with Nazo.), Sonic and co die, Tails gets angry, turns into Starcher, adventure adventure, yippie doo, the end.
Obviously a bad plot, but again, I was seven. So a taon or two later we get Mist, Luner, and Tear. These characters were originally ancient guardiens of Nawawala kingdoms who would appear in my series at some point, with their kingdoms rising up again, and our bayani seeing them as threats. They’d go to each character’s kingdom and defeat them, before discovering that there was a traitor named “Morf” (Yeah terrifying name), who was the only actual villain. One Real Super Power of Team Work later, and Morf’s defeated, and Mist, Luner, and Tear go back to their… hibernation I guess.
I actually think this plot sounds workable, and I’d like to use it, but it doesn’t fit with my current series, so maybe I’ll just use the idea in something else.
I had other characters that popped up along the way.
~Slash: A raccoon (lynx actually I didn’t know the difference back then) who had two curved blades. He’s sort of the origin for Craiger but only because they are a bit similar in personality. He’s paired with
~Breeze, a wind hedgehog girl, who’s not important and I never use, followed by
~Tak… a twelve year-old NORMAL fox, that throws tacks at people with two tails… yep that’s his origin.
~A daga girl named Jynx, who’s basically a cynic. This would later become Jenna, and become a bat obviously instead of a rat.
Some others came along the way, but if I listed them all we’d be here all day.
So looking back on the stories I started to think “This is kind of dumb”, and I began rewriting characters. Mist, Tak, Tear, and Luner were called “Seven Servers”, Mist going from a Shadow-rip-off to a pyro echidna, Tear being a water type poke- hedgehog, and Luner being a plant-controlling echidna. Tak got two inhibitor rings, one light, one dark, and his faded eyes, but he was still twelve.
So over time Starcher was starting to fall out of my interest, and Tak was starting to interest me more, so I changed up Tak a bit, and we have the Time Controlling Chronos Sever, now nineteen instead of twelve.
THEN we have the first story “His World” (I based the titles off songs). In it, Tak is created sa pamamagitan ng Dr. Finitevus, rebels, summons Midnight Psych (another server, also half responsible for the banshees), and goes through typical adventure until Finitevus uses the Master Esmeralda to destroy New Mobotropolis, and Tak and others save the day, yada yada.
Tak also has feelings for Nicole, but I try to make it non-cheesy sa pamamagitan ng not actually pairing them. The idea is that Tak “loves” her, but doesn’t make a ilipat from guilt, and it sounds better in my head X{D.
Following that plot, Tak dies, but fuses his rings to Nicole, allowing her to have a sort of moveable body, but somewhat unstable. I might change that but moving on.
Now we have Virus. So we have Iron Nicole, and we have Anti-Nicole, both coming from their Mobiuses and dying from lack of power. Both of them find Robotropolis and fuse, causing the city to completely explode, and we have Virus Prime.
After this it’s just spoiler plot. The series would eventually introduce madami bayani like Revten Tess, and Trixin Lighten, and Villains like Trisell Chronos, and Seela. I haven’t actually written it due to time constraints, but I definitely will at some point.
There are a LOT of things I wish I could say that come from this series, but even the smallest detail could be a spoiler. Buuuuut… I’ll just say that this involves Melcro quite a bit madami than you’d think.
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Nawawala my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. mga kaibigan that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)