The RowdyRuff Boys Article: powerpuff girls z pag-ibig

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(In school)

ms.kean:Class we have 3 new student
(ppgz dont know rrbz)
(rrbz walk in)

brick: Im brick
butch:sup im butch
boomer:yo im bommer
ms kean:brick sit next to momoko butch sit next to kaoru boomer behind miyako
rrbz:wateves

boomer; hi miyako
miyako;hey whats up
boomer;so will u go out with me
miyako;fine wateves

butch;hey pretty girl
kaoru;dont call me that
butch;k wat about babe
kaoru;never call me that in hell
butch; fine but you have to go out with me
kaoru;no just leave me alone pervent
{lunch time ]
[the boys go to the girls table]
boomer;hey miyako
miyako;hey
brick;hey red
momoko;WHAT
brick;so will u go out with me
momoko;no have a bf
brick;who is it red
momoko;none of your bussnies
brick;ok red

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rrbXppg awsome but you have to make it longer

EpicOruUlterra I see an interesting story going on here, but it feels a bit rushed. If you add a little bit of build, then it would be more appealing. Example: Boomer- So, will you go out with me? Miyako- Fine, whateves. I feel as though they would need to build a relationship first. Also, there wasn't enough detail either. But it was still good. I know what's going on, and I understand what's being said. Even though there are some grammar mistakes. Don't stop, keep writing more. Just take in some of my advice. Also, I would love your opinion on my articles. http://www.fanpop.com/spots/the-powerpuff-girls/articles/177174/title/ppgs-rrbs-together-team-part-one-ppkgs-attack Again, I see great potential in you as a writer! Keep on writing!

cuteppgzxrrbz thank