True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

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The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

posted by rory2011

chapter (1)

it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back tahanan
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to you in the kusina ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell you this ,but we should ilipat "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you Nawawala your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated you that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted sa pamamagitan ng ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in tahanan kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the kusina "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the kusina with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did you tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make madami money sa pamamagitan ng make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed you your husband can save madami money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so you have tow choice ,you can save your family and die or you can die with your kids ,your husband will watching you with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make madami money for us ,and you can't run away ,we have many men watching you "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary sinabi
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take you after two weeks "the man sinabi while he moving to the door

"are you out of you mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save you "david said"
"if you saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd you did your best "said mary sad
"so you guys will still here or what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to you inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's kama ,"how old are you kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want you to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are you telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of you ,I just want you to understand that I'll be with you even if I'm not beside you ,I just want you to remember this " mary sinabi wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary sinabi ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he Nawawala his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary sinabi crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with mga baril looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell you something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what you want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are you talking about do you think I'll do the same thing that your father did to you ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but you don't talk to her or play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are you kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with you in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think you should take some rest now "david sinabi
"ok "mary said

ITF, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Aww sad and very interesting. i have to say it really seems like a great book to read.

Zero_Delta Interesting that the father wants to eliminate Mary because of David not making any money...And I'm not trying to be rude, but I think you should go back and fix the capitalization. Otherwise I think it's good.

rory2011 no ,not just because of her husband can't make money ,cause mary's father can't take enough money from david because of the family expenditure ,and it's also a tradition ,fathers have to choose if they want their daughters to live more or not and george hate his daughter so of course he will choose her to die the money thing is just an excuse for goerge to kill mary

SweetHoneyBunny It's a good story so far and I hope to read more soon. To point out two things, remember to check your spelling and your capitalization. Other then that, it's really good. Keep up the good work.

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The Inevitable Fate 4

posted by rory2011

two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought pagkain and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...

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posted by Problematic129

*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read, review and don't copy*
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posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the comments and fans :) Please read and review and please don't copy!*
Chapter 14
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posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for fanning :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
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posted by alicia386

Chapter Five
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I studied myself I'm the bathroom mirror. I was pretty, no tanong about that. I had dark black hair and gorgeous brown eyes like my sister. I kept my hair shoulder-length while Zoe liked hers long and covering most of her face. She once told me that it gave her a mysterious vibe. I liked my hair short because it showed off my roundish face. It was odd. Zoe and I are twins but my face always seemed a little madami round and cutesy then Zoe's face. ...

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posted by alicia386

Chapter Four

WHEN I NEED YOU WILL BE THE SAME araw I DIE. -Erica

For the last two days, Sophie hasn't sinabi one word to me. She was either locked up in her room or going to the mall with her new friend, Madison. It seemed like she was never tahanan and when she was home, she would never come out or her room. I have literally heard her whispering and if I stood there too long, everything would get eerily silent. It was bizarre. Dad would probably notice if he wasn't too busy sucking face with Carrie.
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posted by sadiebugz00

The Yarn....

(Sequel to the A Cat Chasing Yarn (Yarn's Point of View) (This cat is going to be really perky and hyped up and energetic.))

OKAIZ, SO TODAY I SAW THE MOST AWESUME-Y THING EVER! A BASKET OF YARNZ!! I SAWZ MEH segundo paborito CULUR IN THERE, TOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEH paborito CULUR IZ GREEEEEEEEEEEN AND MEH SECUND paborito IZ PINNNNKK. SO I WUZ LIKE, POUNCE! SWIPEZ-Y! I'M SO AWESUMEZ! AND SO, I LIKE, CHASED IT DOWNZ DA STAIRZ, AND IT WUZ SO EXHILARATIN' AND STUFFZ. AND SO, LIKE, IT MADE IT TO THA HUMANZ AND DEY THREW IT SAID, "Go get it, Daisy!!" SOZ, I WENT AFTER IT AND yungib I SAW SOME GREEN YARN, SOZ I RANZ PAST THA kulay-rosas YARN TA GETZ DA GREEN..... I LURVVVVVVVVVV GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!

Me (right) and my brother (left).

Mom (left) and Dad (right).

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posted by alicia386

Chapter Seven

Since the death of Gwendolyn, Mr. Bulks cut the field trip short and gave everyone an A for the day. The Daltons were the most upset so they left a few minutos after Reese was arrested. Gwendolyn's body was not found. Police suspected that Reese had probably hid the body somewhere. She probably didn't want anyone to to find it. There was still an unsettling feeling in the air as everyone remembered what Reese last said. If she truly wasn't the one who killed Gwen and Abby then that meant that the killer was still loose and probably planning their susunod attack. If they were...

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posted by Sinna_Hime_chan

in dedication to Mina

The ocean may overtake me and lunok me- yet it will not bury me.
The whole of the mountain will crash down and roll over me - but it does not crush me.

Human physical strength has limitations and it weakens in time. 'Inner strength' knows no bounds!
The confines of this earthly realm have no bearing.

Let it be done!

Let the horns sound that shake the foundation.
Call forth the titans. Summon up the dread that lies buried deep within the puso and mind.
Let the godless fear when they face the charge.
The Nawawala will flee or loose heart.

'And in the darkening late hours when the ground rumbles like an oncoming train...I will draw from deep wells what cannot be poisoned or tainted or overturned. I will stand, though the tides rise and the clouds threaten...and there I will remain, even if I ipakita signs and cracks of care and hardship.
I will not be broken.

I may grow weary.

Though all the elements come against me
and tear at flesh and bone!-I WILL STAND!

KAKASHI

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posted by sawfan13

Why can't the world become a fairytale book?
It wouldn't be as mean
But it may be much madami green
Dragons that can be your pet
Princesses with hair for rope climbing
Pumpkins that can turn into horse carriages
And Pusa that wear boots and fight mice.
The people in reality aren't always very nice
But even the ogres and giants can say hello and give you nice things
Princesses aren't snobby reyna bees at school
Princes aren't egomaniacs
And money is in gold, silver, or copper or even magic beans!
Hens lay golden eggs
Poverty can end in five seconds
You can get your own fairy and wish for whatever you want
And have your any desires
But I guess this is all in the mind
But the world can be kind at times
It isn't always bad and cruel
But imagination makes it go around

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posted by sawfan13

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"Sure thing, dear! Ask away!" She and her mother sat down and Lily asked her,"Mom, is it alright if my friend and roommate Roxy can come with me on the trip?"

Her mother sighed and replied,"No." Lily's eyes widened, as her puso broke into a million...

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posted by Dhampires

"Katlen!" Eric stepped pasulong ready to rush to my aid.

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Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her sa pamamagitan ng the sando and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...

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posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
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    Let’s get started
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    The bangka smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this bangka must be careless.
    “This...

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posted by SweetHoneyBunny

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Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a minuto of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, you bastard! What the hell!”
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posted by Problematic129

*Thank for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
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    Let the games begin
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    Now right then, my puso did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who you are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean you didn’t send me that...

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posted by alicia386

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The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 taon old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved sa pamamagitan ng her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it or not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those comments may be true...