I am write a book a lot like ellen hopkins. here go? do u like it or not please comment!

i would say some advice,but im not big on poatry.I say no.

Despite the spelling being painful to read... it just seems to lack the emotion that Ellen Hopkins can put in to her writing. This doesn't seem to be meaningful, it just looks like you tried to copy her style, not adapt it into your own. Can't get emotion from focusing on copying someone's style.