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    Many people think that I am a regular boy, but I know I’m not. I am an android, a robot that looks like a human. There’s lots of them out there, pagganap like real people. But I have something I know that they do not have, for my Professor had taught it to me and only me.

    It’s like a bond that is formed between friends. When they first meet, when they first interact with each other, that special bond is formed. It becomes stronger and stronger between them over time, connecting them together, making them unbreakable.

    Once you share that bond, you can experience negative and positive feelings—emotions. You can feel things like happiness, joy, love, even sadness, anger, and despair. The bond makes you feel things inside people, things like trust, maybe even disappointment.

    Each bond is different. It gives you your unique personality, making you shine from the rest. You express things in your own way, and you have your own style of doing things.

    That bond connects you with the rest of the world, lettng you experience good times [even bad times] with the ones around you, the ones you love. It lets you live life to its fullest, even through the dark times, because all the bad things in life make the happy ones even madami enjoyable.

To be able to be yourself regardless of what people think of you…
To be able to experience friendship…
To be able to share your happiness with those around you…
To be able to love…

That bond…

It’s called a heart, isn’t it?


I need your opinion on my [reaaaalllly] short story. Is it touching? Well-written? So-so?
Corny? <--- yeah, that's probably it. XD

 I need your opinion!
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electric pag-ibig is the pamagat
hikaru13 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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it wouldn't let me answer but i think it's cool it is short, and you probably could really make something out of it. its good
txter32 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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i think you have an incredible idea that you could really expand on, so all you need to do is continue that idea and devlop it into an interesting plot; you could focus on your style of Pagsulat and make it madami mature, but you have an obvious talent for Pagsulat so i'm sure in time that maturity will come. Hope this feedback helped, good luck :)
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iluvhikaru13 said:
Real cool! and.... to the person who nagkomento above, i dont know why you couldnt. i could.... did you miss the button?

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Twilightluv3r said:
i agree wit iluvhikaru13, it sounds real cool! and i pag-ibig tha title! :)
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