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What do you think of this poem?

Can you feel it in my heart?
Oh,i'm just a dust...
Can you help me now?
Oh,i'm alright...
Can you understand me now?
Oh,i guess that's too much...
Can you see me now,running from your mind,hiding behind those all good things you liked...
Can you feel the disillusion you've been giving to me for a while,so slow,but bright...
Your puso is so hollow.
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fabfamily99 said:
This is really good. I think if expand it though it could be a good song, or if you expand the plot, it could be a great story! I pag-ibig it!
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Thank you. <3
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3nala said:
It...Is...Awesome!!!
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Thanks. <3
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K5-HOWL said:
I loved it
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I loved it
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thanks... ;)
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chickencheese said:
Really great! I like the emotion you've put in it :D
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Thank you. :)
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JohnnyD said:
Wow you must be really inspired to make this kind of poem! I ♥ pag-ibig it!
Yeap it sound like a song!
AWESOME!!!!!
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Aw thank you so much. <3
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Vixie79 said:
Wow the ending was really relate able. I got the idea that it was explaining the endless lies someone has fed you through a relationship, something else I have received.
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Um i was disappointed so i decided not to expose my feelings. You can feel it in this poem.
irena83 posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
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I'm hiding from him so he could never hurt me again. And his puso is so empty,therefore he knows i deserve someone who can ipakita me love,someone who won't disappoint me.
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You're welcome hon. *hugs you back*
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Pikafan32 said:
Beautiful weave, dear! A dark masterpiece with true puso in it. Have you ever considered publishing a book of your poems. If so you could start sa pamamagitan ng ranking up the points to professional publication here >> link
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Oh honey,thank you so much. Um i haven't but i'll consider about that. Hugs and kisses
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Wow, I might check that out myself.
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I understand it says teen fiction and you're much older than that but maybe they'll allow you. If not maybe you should try may-akda House. But you have to pay to ilathala there...
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Um yes... Well,i'll write my blog,no rush. ;) Thanks anyway.
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