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What do you think of this storyline?

This is my storyline:
The main character is a teenage vampire. Her parents were killed sa pamamagitan ng werewolves. Now she lives in a "foster care" for mythical creatures. Her best friend is a human guy. She gets picked on sa pamamagitan ng the popular kids. She lives a fairly normal life until her foster mother adopts a werewolf. Then she bans together with a few other Bampira to try to destroy the werewolf. Then the werewolf calls in its family to do the same to the vampires. Then it turns out that her friend has fallen in pag-ibig with the werewolf.

I'm also thinking about the main vampire accidentally killing one of her friend's close relatives, making him lean closer to the werewolf.
What do you think? :/ I'd really like comments and suggestions, please.
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klarissa03 said:
It's good (:
You should Just change the friend liking the
Vampire to BEST friend liking the vampire..haha
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woofbark said:
I'm sorry, but this sounds....familiar...

Think:

-Vampires and mga asong lobo rival each other....
-The vampire is teenage.....
-There is a child, and an older werewolf falls in pag-ibig with it....
-A battle soon breaks out....
-Has a human friend.....

Sounds a little like Twilight.....maybe you could change things up a little? How about change 'vampire" to "fairy" and "werewolf" to "pegasus"?



I don't know. I may be wrong, and your story is terrific and original. Go ahead and write it! :D

I hope to read it.
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Yeah... I guess you're right... bob dammit lol idk im stuck with it anyways. I'll see what i can do to change it.
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Harrypotter148 said:
I agree with the person above me. Vampire/werewolf is being soo over done now a days and not to seem mean but all the book seem to be a bout the same. It make a good story and i'm sure people would read it but, Vampire and mga asong lobo is over done beyond infinity
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