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Does this sound alright?????

Right, I have started Pagsulat a story about sibling rivalry. The lead girl feels like she is living in her sister's shadow, because her sister does all these clubs, and wins many awards, whereas all she does is get involved with a choir or two each year, and her parents don't come and see the performances. She feels like her family loves her sister madami than her.

I've called it, "A Shadow's Pleasure".

Does it sound ok so far???????
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HomosexualTaco said:
It needs another complication. Something to bring the protagonist and her sister together. Honestly, would you read a book just about some teenage girl's family dramas? It would become boring and depressing.

Make it unique, not a cliche. People want to see things they've never seen before. Use your imagination.
I'm not saying scrap the idea entirely, I'm just saying give it a twist.
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To be honest, I had no idea where to go from there. :)
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tsmith120 said:
It seems OK, but only as the first half of the synopsis... it feels like a good starting point, but there needs to be another element that actually takes the characters somewhere that needs to be introduced.
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