Please help me describe my house in high quality works....white 4 bedroom house , white fence , the smell of backed goods, laughing children running in the yard ..beautiful flower. Just a wonderful,loving home.

3rd Person:

The first thing you notice is the sweet, crisp smell of baked goods wafting from the kusina and the sound precious of laughter from the children playing in the yard surrounded sa pamamagitan ng a white picket fence. The warmth of the sun beaming off of the white exterior offers a hearty welcoming and draws you closer like a paruparo to the sweet fragrance of a daffodil. pag-ibig is the very essence of the home, seeping from every corner, every crevice, and every open window and embraces your very soul. Instantly, you experience peace and the prosperity of amore.

1st Person:

The first thing I always notice is the sweet, crisp smell of baked goods wafting from the kusina and the sound of precious laughter from the children playing in the yard surrounded sa pamamagitan ng a white picket fence. The warmth of the sun beaming off of the white exterior offers a hearty welcoming and draws me closer like a paruparo to the sweet fragrance of a daffodil. pag-ibig is the very essence of the home, seeping from every corner, every crevice, and every open window and embraces my very soul. Instantly, I experienced peace and the prosperity of amore.

How is that?