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I need help beginning my story! please

I have an idea for my story and i think a got a beginning sentence but it doesn't seem right. I don't think it is grabbing enough but this is it how does it sound?

On a mysterious, windy, fall day, four special girls, got a special gift. Then the whole world went wonky.

But after that sentence i have someone talk so do you think its good give me tips on how to fix it if it is bad. Thanks for pagbaba and helping me!
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FLUFFYMUFFIN said:
I will tell you the beginning of a book is the hardest to write. the best way you can lern to start a story is to read a story close to yours. oh and your story beginning sounds great but...you need to tell the readers who the 4 girls are, what they look like,how they met ect.
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