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Would you want to read this book?

Okay! The book is about a young boy named Danny. America's birthday has arrived and there is a dance. Danny and his mga kaibigan are only eleven, so they believe they are going to be the youngest ones at the dance. When they got there, they found out that there were many children their age there. Danny's mga kaibigan already found girls to dance with during a slow song, but Danny is all alone. Then he found Madison, but he calls her Red (because of her long, beautiful, red hair). When Danny wishes to meet her parents, she refuses and runs away. He finally figured out where she lived. A woman greeted him at her tahanan with a door slammed to the face. He sees a picture of Red on her pader and says, "May I please see Madison?" And she says, "Madison has been dead for 10 years." Tears begin to flow out of her eyes. Danny thinks shes mistaken. "Ma'am! I danced with her just a few nights ago!" She gives him a strange look and slams the door again.

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dalek22 said:
It sounds pretty interesting, but maybe make the characters a little older. The plot sounds really cool though, and I just might read it.
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Yes it would help if they were a bit older.
tears-to-t posted sa loob ng isang taon na ang nakalipas
tears-to-t said:
Sounds interesting to me!
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I-Luv-L said:
You should should make the characters older because it's madami believable when teenagers are at parties or solving mysteries because they can have jobs, have a madami understanding of things but still needs to learn, and they have madami time to be outside and madami transportation then an 11 taon would have.
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monkeemania said:
^^^ I agree. other then that, sounds great! :)
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ITF said:
Is the girl a ghost? If so, then no. I don't read stories with ghost in them. If they just think that she is dead, then yes, I would consider pagbaba it.
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