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How does my story sound so far? Should i continue it? If I continue it what should i add?
My story (so far):
I woke up, shivering in the cold night air. Not remembering how I got there, I looked up and noticed a big, bright and brown door in front of me. Freezing to death, I walked inside. The room was bright, with a long hallway and near the entrance was a woman. She had brown hair, like mine and was looking for something. “Excuse me” I sinabi slowly. She spun around and smiled at me. “Hello deary, welcome to the “Brighter days orphanage” how may I help you?” She said. “Um… hi, how do I explain this, I just woke up, on the doorstep of this place” I sinabi stuttering. “And I don’t remember how I got here, actually I don’t remember anything.” I added.
“Well, I’m Mrs. Anderson, and do you remember your name?” She sinabi still smiling brightly. “Caroline, I think my name is Caroline it just sound familiar”. “Well if you’d like you can sleep here!” Mrs. Anderson said. “Yes, please” I said. The woman gestured me to follow her, so I did and she led me into a room. The room had 2 bunk beds; one had a girl sleeping on the top. The other had one girl and one boy. Without a word and jumped in the empty kama and curled up into the blankets.
I fell asleep easily. But before you know it I was awake. It was morning and the room was bright, just like almost everything else.No wonder it was called brighter days orphanage. My eyes closed drowsily, still tired. Then I woke and saw three faces appear above me. “Who are you” the oldest, Jessica said. “Yea when did you get here” sinabi the only boy. “Ooh shiny necklace” sinabi the youngest with a voice as sweet as honey. “I’m Caroline” I sinabi then I noticed lying on my neck was a necklace. It was ginto and it had a small red puso on it and a shining golden key.
“Oh no we’re going to be late!” sinabi “for what?” I asked.
I woke up, shivering in the cold night air. Not remembering how I got there, I looked up and noticed a big, bright and brown door in front of me. Freezing to death, I walked inside. The room was bright, with a long hallway and near the entrance was a woman. She had brown hair, like mine and was looking for something. “Excuse me” I sinabi slowly. She spun around and smiled at me. “Hello deary, welcome to the “Brighter days orphanage” how may I help you?” She said. “Um… hi, how do I explain this, I just woke up, on the doorstep of this place” I sinabi stuttering. “And I don’t remember how I got here, actually I don’t remember anything.” I added.
“Well, I’m Mrs. Anderson, and do you remember your name?” She sinabi still smiling brightly. “Caroline, I think my name is Caroline it just sound familiar”. “Well if you’d like you can sleep here!” Mrs. Anderson said. “Yes, please” I said. The woman gestured me to follow her, so I did and she led me into a room. The room had 2 bunk beds; one had a girl sleeping on the top. The other had one girl and one boy. Without a word and jumped in the empty kama and curled up into the blankets.
I fell asleep easily. But before you know it I was awake. It was morning and the room was bright, just like almost everything else.No wonder it was called brighter days orphanage. My eyes closed drowsily, still tired. Then I woke and saw three faces appear above me. “Who are you” the oldest, Jessica said. “Yea when did you get here” sinabi the only boy. “Ooh shiny necklace” sinabi the youngest with a voice as sweet as honey. “I’m Caroline” I sinabi then I noticed lying on my neck was a necklace. It was ginto and it had a small red puso on it and a shining golden key.
“Oh no we’re going to be late!” sinabi “for what?” I asked.
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