Pagsulat Article: Would you guys read this?

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posted by BURITOES

Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically Pagsulat this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)

So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 taon old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 taon old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 taon on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave tahanan and find help herself.

So yeah, if you liked this, please comment and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)

Kadaj and writer67 like this

writer67 not bad , the path to find enlightenment or help is always everlasting,groovy title, a place of our own;-]

awesome-ninja sounds good to me :)

BURITOES Thank you guys SO much, I really wanna write more, and I probably will. :)

2dolphn97 sounds pretty good tho its not my type of book i know tons of people who would read it

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The Last araw chapter 1

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So this is my first story that I made in quite a while. So enjoy! Feel free to give me any hints on how to make it better.

“Come on Alice! Wake up, you’re going to be late for school!” Mary, my older sister, yelled. She’s in charge of having to wake me up for school. I feel really sorry for her half the time but then again she gets to wake up earlier than me. I looked over to the door and there she still stood, her face red like a tomato. “I’m up! I’m up! Man, why do you always have to be so loud in the morning?” I whined, annoyed that she woke me up from...

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one among us

posted by fangs286

Jacob part 1

have you ever had a secret? the answer is probably yes. but have you ever had a secret that you could never tell anyone?that if you did, it would effect thousands,billions of people? no. you haven't. that is the weight i carry on my shoulders. it is the weight carried sa pamamagitan ng people. Many people. across the world. i am one of many that are different then other people but yet the same.i wish to be what is around me. only a few are like me. i want to have a friend in this world that is like me. Someone who understands the pain and constant despair, even when i feel happy. You are probably...

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SAMPLE: Before Darkness (Wanna know if it's good)

posted by IceyyHeart1525

Chapter 1
I was sitting in a prison. A prison where everyone here hates me, well almost anyone. I’m staring out the window when I should be focusing on the boring math page on my desk. Mother has been worried recently about my grades, like she cares anyways; it burned my puso when the thought settled. Leaving an empty feeling in its place. Ever since Dave, (my mother’s boyfriend) moved in things have gotten a lot worse. He still beats her, She still swears he loves her, and I still sneak out at night alone. Just to get away from the screaming and crying that they do. I began to forget what...

The long way tahanan

posted by ZekiYuro

A British couple went to France for the day-and they got tahanan seven days later.
Everything began well for Mr and Mrs.Long on their araw trip to France.They went sa pamamagitan ng train from London to Dover and got the ferry to Boulogne in France.
They went for a short walk around the town but they got completely lost.'We walked and walked,'said Mrs Long,'but we couldn't find our way back to the ferry port.'They walked all night and finally a motorist picked them up and drove them to a small village.Here they caught a train to Paris.Their plan was to travel from Paris to London.But they caught the wrong train...

a poem for a friend whos parents are divorced

posted by AuthorForPooh

I come tahanan and their fighting.
I hate it! I want to tell them to stop.
But I cant, because Im stuck in the middle.
They tug me, playing with me.
I cant handle the pain!

When I go to school no one can see my pain.
I fake my happiness.
I want to go hide in a corner and cry.
But I cant.
Because no one lends a shoulder to cry on.
My mga kaibigan dont understand!

I come tahanan again, and my parents pull me.
Ripping my puso like a angry raven.
My siblings, they... they... leave me there. Alone.

I feel alone.
Deserted.
No where I feel happy.
Because Im alone.
Why cant anyone see?
Why cant my parents stop fighting?
Why cant my mga kaibigan lend a hand?
Why cant my siblings pull me to my feet?
Why am I alone?

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Life's pag-ibig twist

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Sometimes you may have mga kaibigan that talk about being Lesbian or gay or bisexual is just nasty and plain gross,but It's not nasy at all.It's your personality and you control it no one else.There's no problem for being that.If you are then well i hope you have mga kaibigan who apprecite who you are and how your like. My best friend is a guy and yes I have a crush on him but Just today I found out that he was bisexual.At first I was shocked but the truth is that I don't really care.I pag-ibig him just they way he is and he will always be the best's friend i could I have ever had.He's special to me and...

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Juliets adventure...

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Far far away is a big beautiful forest with all kinds of trees and small, but sparkly cool water. There is a big white house with red bulaklak on the window shelf’s and a big garden and playfield on witch are two blue swings, sa pamamagitan ng them there is also a yellow slide and sa pamamagitan ng the garden there is a big pool. In that house lives a girl, her parents (Margaret and Bob) and her three years older brother Ben. The girl's name is Julia.
When Julia was young she was a normal girl. When she was 1 taon old she learned how to talk. sa pamamagitan ng two years she learned how to walk and after that she learned how to ride a...

"clean" sa pamamagitan ng amy reed, epilogue

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Clean- 20 years later-ish

Kelly

You probably would never guess that I was in a rehab centre at 17. But I was and I’ll never forget it. I’ll always remember the stupid things they thought would fix us like art therapy and addiction themed movie nights. I remember Shirley. I remember Jason, Olivia, Christopher and Eva. They were my cure. Even though they were as fucked up as I was, maybe more, they taught me everything I needed to know to change into this woman I am now. I am a business woman. I work long hours and the only stress I have now is from work. Not from needing a drink or a line...

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Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 19

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Chapter 19

Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...

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Novel Ideas - prologue

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Jordan was nervous. He was about to make the biggest announcement of his career – to him anyway. He sighed deeply, waiting for his latest understudy, Samantha White, to begin the report.
“Today, on his 70th birthday, world-renowned author, Forrest Reed, has announced in a statement from his agent, Philip Conrad, that he is releasing his final novel,” Ms. White read from the teleprompter with an appropriately despondent tone, which actually appeared to be fairly genuine. She was situated in front of a ‘breaking news’ logo which rotated slowly, while dozens of books...

Leah's rose (contest entry)

posted by HecateA

-You coming? He asked. I starred at the bulaklak he'd just tucked behind my ear and that I'd just pulled out. The petals were soft and lucious red, overlapping each other perfectly. Perfect they are. Roses. Gracious, colorful, romantic...
-Sure Dan. I said. I took his hand and let him lead me to his car. He oppened the door of the Ford's shotgun upuan for me and closed it behind me; the perfect gentleman. He turned the old engine on.
-Where do you want to go eat? He asked me.
-Doesn't matter. I said, stroking the petals.
-What about Chinese? He asked.
-Chinese works.
-The place with the good eggrolls...

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Learning to let go ch. one

posted by Funnygirl77

Leting go of the ones you pag-ibig is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Leting go of the ones you love is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Nothing is harder then losing the one you love. The One person who understands you the most, The one who give anything to keep you ligtas and happy even if that means losing their own life to save yours. I learned this the hard way, When a taon nakaraan today, I Nawawala my parents, my brother and my sister, in a house fire.

May 19 2010 Monday 12:01 am
It's been a taon since I Nawawala my family, and it hasn't been any easier. I have nightmares about what happen, ever nightmare is the same. It starts off with me being with my family, Everyone is laughing and having a good time, then out of no where, there faces...

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pag-ibig kills chapter 13

posted by hannah_vampire

I woke up and felt the cold hit me, it was a weird sensation and I felt light headed something was happening but I couldn’t work out what. It was around midday when I had decided to go and visit Blair, When I got out of my car I felt weird once again, there was a darkness around me or at least some where around here. When I got near the door, I had seen that someone had forced it
Open. I pushed the door open and run inside, ‘No no Blair’ I thought as I saw him on the ground not breathing.

I got to the tahanan phone but it was hard to dial the number in, I was shaking violently. Oni answered...

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Hate Your Smile, Hate Your Laugh. Hate The Way You Made Me Fall In pag-ibig With You(2)

posted by lollipopszx3

"Hello." I sinabi to a boy sitting susunod to me in English. I was hoping that they would be like Brett. This boy had purple eyes with gray flakes inside. His blonde hair was shoulder length and his bangs were covering his face.

He smiled at me. "Hey..." He sinabi and leaned over to me. "What's your name?" He seemed pretty nice right now.

"I'm Leighton. What's yours?" I asked.

"Chase. I like your shirt." I looked down. It did look pretty nice. But I noticed that his eyes stared at my chest area for a little too long. I used my hand to cover it up. I think susunod time I'll wear my sando that sinabi 'My face...