Pagsulat Article: Lisa and Minrough chapter 3

posted by Flana_2

The forest was so beautiful. Even though it was raining, I thought of the sun peering through the trees. There were mga hayop all over. It was like Hapon only slightly less busy. Lots of unfamiliar mga hayop gave Minrough high-fives and hugs. After a moment, I scanned his mind. Patients? I thought he sinabi he was a soldier not a healer! After a minute, I demanded to know who they were.
“Patients”. Just like I thought.
“I thought you sinabi you were a soldier at the war”!
“Yeah, a war of diseases”.
“But you’re only a kid! How could you be a doctor”?
“Not a doctor, healer”.
“How does that even work”!
“I have like a magic touch sort a thing when all I have to do is touch where it hurts and it heals”. I began to protest, to say how unreal that is when I remembered my mindreading dilemma. I’m the one that’s unreal right now.

Moments passed when we came to a little puno near a lake.
“Lisa, Ive got a story I got to tell ya”. His eyes widened with fear.
“You don’t have to tell me anything you don’t want to” I said.
“No, I want you to know, it’s just that Ive never told anyone before”. I was realy carious now.
“What’s going on Minrough”? I didn’t want to read his mind now, I wanted him himself to tell me.
“I want you to know about my father and my past”. He began with a sigh. “My father was a real soldier at war. In 2002, the mga hayop went at war with the humans. Adults from all over the forest were taken away sa pamamagitan ng General Jaspy to fight. My mom begged Jaspy to let my father stay. He promised her that my dad would be fine, but he lied. All the mga hayop were killed besides Jaspy. He swore it just so happened he was last man standing. I say it wasn’t though. Something fishy is going on with him and I demanded to know what it was but he wouldn’t spill. Now that he is the forests new king, I can’t get to him.” He took a deep breath. “I have a deep desire to find out what he was up to and arrest him for it.” His eyes met my gaze. “Since he has been in power, my mother and I have been like slaves to him. “ I was to shocked to speak. Poor Minrough, a father killed in war. Wow just wow. Jaspy take the trono though? Minrough wasn’t telling me something I should know.
“Your dad was a prince”? I asked. Oops…
“How’d you know”? He asked shocked.
“um .. Lucky guess…” I said. Oh boy. He gave me an odd look, “okaaay..” Pheew! Close one.
“Yeah” he answered, “And his brother became king. But, his brother swore if he was to die, my dad could take the throne. That’s the fishy part. The araw after my uncle died, that’s when Jaspy came over to take my dad.” That did sound fish.
“Does Jaspy have any criminal records”?
“No, well... No one knows. He destroyed his record.” Sounded fishier now.
“I swear I’m going to bust him some araw but I... I can’t…” He got upset again.
“I would help you. Your right, it is fishy.” I said. He smiled, “I knew you would”. I thought about this. Maybe it was an accident but wouldn’t that mean Minrough would take the throne? Yes. I knew now this was no accident. Jaspy was up to something and we were going to find out.

How to Avoid Common Grammatical Errors

posted by IloveMyLord

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A Blood's Tale: Part 2

posted by DarkGirl23

The araw my sister died, was the araw I, myself, died as well.

She may not have knew it, but she was my hero.
I guess, however, all big sisters were kind of like that.

I remember seeing it, the body, the blood, the note she left in her own form of representation.
It was written, all across the wall, the note she left behind was in her own blood.

Hatred.
What a word, so different from hated; just a different form.
Which one am I? I should be described as both.
I hate you, and I know you hate me too. Everyone does.
Here are my final words to you:
Pain is welcoming
Crawling down my arm so slow
Blood that leaks...

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Suji No Shi (Death In Numbers)

posted by narlyvamp1234

Suji No Shi
A girl stands in her home; a hole has been ripped in the wall. She stares at her father in horror, he is covered in blood. At her father’s foot lays her mother, a huge hole ripped in her stomach, and she is dead. Blood drips from her father’s hands… she looked up at her father and, in an instant, he is gone. The girl falls to the ground and starts crying… that’s when she feels a tap on her shoulder. She turns around and sees another little girl, with kulay-rosas hair and green eyes. They stare at each other silently… not saying a word. The first girl whose mother had been...

The Sinners' Saint (a short story and contest entry)

posted by Aisuanime

Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, sa pamamagitan ng highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up sa pamamagitan ng now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...

Majestic Magic: Chapter 2

posted by StarWarsFan7

Rosella arrives at her high school and opens her coral locker. "Ugh. I hate hauling this stupid messenger bag!" she says as she tries to get the bag off of her shoulder. "Her? Are you sure?" A group of boys say just not far away from Rosella. "Yeah. I'm plannin' on askin' her out." The tallest one says out of all three. Rosella secretly had put a spell on her own wand to transform it into a beautiful ring. Anytime she needed it, all Rosella had to do was slip the ring off and chant the code words to unlock the enchantment. "Why do you want to ask Rosella Karst out? She's a total weirdo. Who...

Vanished- my progressing novel.

posted by ashleigh-jadee

It was a winter’s morning when Nicola realised something strange. It was a peculiar morning, yet she didn’t understand why.
    Nicola called her mum from her bedroom, but she got no reply. She tried a segundo time, and even third time lucky. Yet Nicola still got no reply.
    Finally, after a few minutos of what was an eerie silence, she jumped out of her kama and ran across to her mum’s bedroom. She flung the door open with such force that it made a loud bang, scaring herself at first for sure.
    Nicola took a glance at the bed....

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life Ch. 2

posted by tigerseye43

Once I was finally out of the hospital I was afraid to sleep in my own apartment. Kyle asked me if I would like to sleep at his house but then I remembered that last time spent the night at kyle's house. It involved no clothes and a lotnof dirty things I don't want to mention. But I sinabi yes anyways, I had nowhere to sleep.
When we got to kyle's house I remembered I had not bottom any clothes. So for pajamas I wore one of kyle's t-shirts and my unferware. For hapunan we ordered pizza, delicious. After hapunan I brushed my teeth and combed my hair.
I didn't knowtice when Kyle came in the bathroom....

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Boy of Soul chapter 1 part 3

posted by FURRY

Simba sat me down on the floor as he pulled a chew toy out of his amerikana pocket and started chewing it *squeak squeak squeak* I opened my eye's, I was hopeing it was all a dream "Mother...." I sinabi as I sat up slightly, as I looked around I knew I wasn't it wasn't a dream, I looked over at Simba "....Simba" I sinabi as I started cring, I grabed Simba and held him tightly, as my tears rolled down my face Simba put his arm's around "Max...." Simba replied crying a little as well, as we sat there crying over what had happen my chest started to glow again but this time it wasn't purple it was blue...

My Best Friend Is Trying To Set Me Up With My Enemy [01] (slash/boyxboy)

posted by Insight357

Hi, I’m Rayne White, and you just got a free pass to my inner thoughts, and things going on at the moment. I’m seventeen, hyper, and gay. I’m incredibly sexy with my ice blue eyes, and my long black hair. I’m around 5’9”.

I have a best friend, her name is Lilah Devins. She is like my fag hag. Lilah is a bitch, but I pag-ibig her anyway. She has long brown hair and brown eyes. Lilah is mga kaibigan with most of the gay guys at school, which is all good and well, but she was mga kaibigan with my nemesis, Remy Clarke.

Remy Clarke had tormented me since kindergarten. Lilah wouldn’t have me saying...

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Unforgivable Ch. 10

posted by para-scence

I didn't know which way to run. One foot went this way, the other went that way. My knees faltered and locked. I fell to the ground in a mess of tears. I wanted to keep myself open, but instead I cowered in fear. I whimpered when two strong hands grabbed the tops of my arms and lifted me up to my feet. My cries came out in staggered breaths; I hyperventilated. The strong arms pulled me into a hug.

"Oh my fucking...." the voice said, but didn't finish. "Kodi, I swear if I wasn't so happy to see you, I'd kill you right now." I peered up through my blinding tears at him. Even though I could barely...

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Unforgivable Ch. 3

posted by para-scence

It was when they handed me the motel room key that I realized I was way in over my head. The place was called Big Dan's Motel. It didn't sound great, but it was only thirty dollars a night. I went to the room they had for me, and contrary to the Motel's name, the room was not. The kitchen, living room, and bedroom were crammed into one room. Maybe this is usual for a motel, but I've never been to one. Ever. The carpet was a mossy green, and the tiles in the kusina were white squares with four black diamonds surrounding the center. The bathroom was a decent size, but it reeked. Mold was growing...

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pag-ibig is Wild: Chapter 5

posted by sawfan13

I began teaching him a little madami English. He knows madami words than I expected him to know, but I taught him a little more. He picks up very quickly! Howl is pretty smart for a person that has been in the wild parts of the jungle since infancy (my hypothesis, but he could have been here since a toddler or a wee bit older) and has had no human contact what so ever (another guess from how he reacted when he first saw me)and can pick up just like that! He's also very sweet. So much sweeter than my stupid fiance' Adam. Ugh, what a dope he is! Howl isn't one. He's a sweet gentle animal loving guy...

The Secret of Moordale Mansion Chapter One Part One

posted by stevie_fan98

We sat there, tears falling from our eyes. We, being me and my sister Friday.We were sixteen taon old triplets but our brother had left for boarding school, three weeks ago. We all had black hair. Friday's short and straight, Mitch's cropped and spikey, mine long and wavy. Friday's red face contrasted so much with her hair and I was sure that I looked almost exactly the same. Izzy the oldest of our younger siblings, age thirteen, just sat. Kate and Sammi, age eight, were twins. Kate rolled around restlessly and Sammi gripped her doll so tight that it almost seemed that it's one eye was popping...

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Dangerous Lve Chapter Four.

posted by M169

One date...One petsa will not hurt me Brian thought muttering to himself inside of his dimly lit room. His room was darkened sa pamamagitan ng picures of obscure creatures, that he hand drew, he is an outstanding aritist, all of his work is so detailed, if he drew a indow, with scenery behind it, you'd actually think it was one, you might make a fool out of yourself sa pamamagitan ng tring to open it or clean it....but thats how good he was. He can't get her off his mind. Luna and Brian were about to go on there first (planned) date. Suprising, Brian, being a Demon of the Dark,was nervous. Nervous? How can I be NERVOUS?...

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Isolation: PROUGLE

posted by Angelcatz11

Jaycee's POV

I lay there besides Liana, she is sleeping, I rest my hand on her soft delicate face, she stirrs in her sleep. Her eyes flutter open and she gaze's at me.
"Mmmmm, Mommy wh-where are we?" She asks. "Texas" I reply. She looks around, blood is spattered everywhere no is around except the dead boddies. She screams stands up and starts to panic. "Li, Li Calm down!" I say calmly. "Wha-What happened!!!" I sighed, I couldnt belive she cant remember. "Were isolated in a tiny town in texas remember?????" I asked. She paused thought for a minuto and shook her head.

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Dark Nites - The Beginning

posted by kateeuy

It was a warm night. The shadow of the full moon shone on Scarlet as she stood on the edge of the cliff, overlooking the sparkling water of the Atlantic Ocean. susunod to Scarlet stood a tall man with black hair and eyes that sparkled in the moonlight. She turned to her left “To you Clyde, always know that I pag-ibig you” she spoke gracefully. She turned slightly to the front, facing the light of the moon.

Scarlet held her locket tight in her hand, her purple dress swayed gracefully in the cool breeze. Her eyes closed as she began to walk closer to the cliffs edge. Clyde stood still, holding their...

I've Always Been Different Chapter Two An official Meeting

posted by M169

I had just become acquainted with a person very few people would ever meet. A transparent, hard to see character with dark hair and stunning eyes whom most little girls would be frightened of. He, however, was scared instead. He had an extended fear that I have never felt or seen before. I did not understand this situation at all. I was only five, so I thought since I was human, he shouldn't be afraid of me. But that is not what he was actually afraid of. After all, he used to be human himself. He would not be so terribly startled of me being human. But he was alarmed sa pamamagitan ng something about me....

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Nick & Grace: Chapter Three

posted by CullenProperty

I sit in my car, contemplating on whether or not I should go pick up Lola. I've driven her to school everyday since I've had my driver’s license, which has only been a few weeks, but still, would it be right to leave her to fend for a new ride?
So I drive sa pamamagitan ng her house and honk for five minutos straight until her dad finally comes out and tells me she rode the bus. We vowed that when the first one of us gets our drivers license, we'd never have to ride the bus ever again. I drive to school alone and think about how she could possibly deceive me like that and wonder if the best thing I could...

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 3

posted by jacob_lover5253

Heyy I'm back...if no one is going to comment I might not post anymore...so plz comment cuz I like this story a lot nd I Noe where I'm gonna head with it.
~Kayla

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As I turned I looked at Nick and he looked at me. She's gonna pay. Big time! "Leigha, it was not a date!" I sinabi through my teeth. Even though I wish Leigha was right she was wrong. We are not dating. "Yeah it wasn't a date!" Nick said. My puso broke right there. Ryan came from behind me.

"Karleigh, I didn't know you nd nick were dating." I was about to scream. "We are not dating!" I yelled. Out of the corner of my eye I thought...

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Try My Life (Chapter 4)

posted by mitchie19

4. A NIGHT TO REMEMBER

“Hey,” Riley greeted. I waved at him. I sighed. My eyes got locked on his outfit.
He was wearing a black, with a hint of white stripes and a long sleeved polo and jeans.
My puso pounded. I was sweating bullets. “So,” I shoved my hands in my back pockets. “What do you want to do?” I asked him. He was still composing himself.
Then he smiled at me. “How about I’ll ask you that question?” he didn’t sound serious. I did either, I don’t know what I had planned to do and it’s not happening right now. “What? Wait, I’m supposed to treat you, right?”...