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back yard world part 2 finding sintareea

posted by fly210

The araw Liz steped foot in her grandma's old house there was a strang feeling in the air. When Liz stoped unpacking she went out to the little town that she and her mga kaibigan had made. The town was in a crest of bushes and trees. Liz got some of her toys and went out side to the town. She had started playing with her mga manika when she saw a kulay-rosas paruparo flying around her. Liz got up and tryed to get it but it went through a palumpong on the right side susunod to the house. Liz looked at the buch but she saw a brown thing. Liz crawled under the palumpong and saw the brown thing covered with vines. Liz cleared it off and saw a door with carvings all over it. Liz did not get to see because she was looking at the kulay-rosas paruparo fly right in to the key hole. Liz sighed. She did not have the key. She looked at her lucky charm. It was a rock her grandma gave her when she was 5. Liz looked back at the key hole. It looked just like her charm! she put it in and turned. the door opened and Liz walked in. madami carvings were inside. Liz did not know what they ment but she liked them. the floor was made of stone but soon the stone turned in to grass. Liz walked till she saw light. When she got there she saw a half girl half horse. "Hello." It said. "I am dalpha and welcome to sintareea my queen!" "QUEEN?!?!?!"

I_DONT-KNOW i like these lol. But u start almost every sentence with "Liz" try using she or somthing once in a while. But i like these.

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 4 An Honest Tale Speeds Best Being Plainly Told Part 3

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Marley was bleeding from his wound, he was fighting the same sort of creature as the others, it was small but it was fast plus its forearms are used like clubs. The creature had marks all over its body, due to Marley’s elbows and knees. It swung its arm again, hitting Marley straight in the shin, Marley was quick to react and slash up the creatures face. It left four claw like marks on its face; Marley looked at his hand and notice that his nails had pointed, as the creature wiped it’s eye he looked at Marley and saw that his eyes had become yellow. Marley quickly struck the creature in...

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Fight to Freedom Chapter 3: Searching for a ghost.

posted by ganondorfslayer

Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good or not. And if you don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.

The last of the hapunan guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have hapunan parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people or parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries or not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

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black moon chapter 12

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 12
6 buwan later
School was boring as always everyone in the school looked at us like they did with the Cullen's and as for me and matt we got closer! I really liked him ,almost loved him but not the kind of pag-ibig my puso held for edward it was different like he can complete me we went to are medow every araw after school and talked and other stuff as you know but I never slept with him not know I wasn’t ready I just have this stupid stupid idea like I'm cheating on him but that isnt true he leaft me and got over me and started dating another vamp that I'm sure was Tanya.i hate him I...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 3 New Nemeses Part 4

posted by H-A-T-R-M

“Train us? For what?” Opal Asked. Grito didn’t say anything; he started pointing, first at himself then to Marley, Alec, Mia then Opal. “Train us to fight of creatures” sinabi Mia. Grito nodded, and then he looked at the fairy on his shoulder. The fairy nodded and flew up into the air and created a square in the air, like a movie screen. On it pictures of demons and humans being attack appeared, much to the four friends’ disgust. “What the hell is going on here?” Alec Asked. “This is why I was sent to train you, so this stops happening to innocent humans” sinabi Grito. “When...

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Untitled Chapter 3 Sam's Perspective

posted by dragonrider

Okay I should very careful. If I mess up I could get very hurt I think.
I sigh and I raise my hands. A sand storm starts forming. So far so good My hands control the speed of the sand. When I wiggle my fingers it controls where it will go. It starts going to my right.
It sounds like a horrible hurricane. I wiggle my left fingers and it moves towards my house.
Oh crap! That's not good. ilipat your fingers Sam! MOVE!
My sandstorm picks up my house and it starts spinning around.
I hear screaming coming from my house. It's probably my mother.
I raise my hand. To stop it which is impossible because I'm...

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Alex's Hunter Chapter 3

posted by dragonrider

Alex froze up as his hunter came near him with his bag. Alex started crying again but silently. His thoughts were raging out of control Should I tell him? Nah then he'll just kill me and my family Alex looked up in time to get slapped again.
"Tell me where your family is Alex! or else," Alex's hunter roared raising his hand again
Alex started to shake bad.
"N..No I will not Dude just kill me now so at least I can be in a happy place," he sinabi looking down his tears dripping onto the hard wooden floor
The hunter laughed a big belly laugh. Alex looked up in time to get slapped again. Alex glared...

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Gods: Chapter 12: 2 birds with 1 stone

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

We both stood there in awe. I closed my eyes and then opened them again to check if he was real. He looked just as shocked as I was. He moved closer but I moved back. “Sadie, please” he begged, I shook my head. “You’re not dead” I stated, he nodded. I know it was a stupid thing to say, but at this moment it was the first thing that went through my mind. “Please, let me explain” he pleaded. I didn’t answer, I just stood there. “But, Dawn” I said, he nodded. “Dawn saw what I wanted her to” he simply said. I looked up at him with disgust. “What do you mean?” I asked...

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Underworld: Chapter 4: Fallen Angel

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Dawn’s p.o.v

“What?’ I asked, closing my mouth. He smiled, sending a shiver down my spine. “I need to speak to my new slayer to be” he told us. Rebecca eyed him. “Why, we have taught her the basic and the rules” she said, he now looked annoyed. Why was he doing this? I thought to myself. “Now, young ladies I would like to talk to her in private” he said, but before we could go Billy had walked in. “Derek” he simply said. My father turned to him. “Billy, how have you been?” he asked. Billy snickered. “Just great, now what do you want with Lilly?” he asked, my father...

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Gods: Chapter 9: Til death do us part

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing toga and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years nakaraan she was the outcast, her...

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Barely Noticed (Metaphor)

posted by funnyshawna

Life is an iPod. The different melodies, the ups and the downs, the changes in tempo, every song, and every experience differs a little from the next. Start with the tinkling bells, meaningless lyrics, and soothing sounds of early childhood. Everything is simple; repetition, a song meant for young ears, nothing to think about, nothing to ponder, just to breathe and to live. One song flows into the next, changing subtly, barely noticed. Then the words begin to gather madami depth; the beat becomes a little faster, a little louder. The music plays, slow and monotonous during the school day, dragging...

I've Always Been Different. Chapter One. The Beginning

posted by M169

Everyone knows no one is normal. Everyone knows everyone is the same too. But do you know what it's like to have nothing normal about you? From the way you dress from the way you talk? I do. My name is Elizabeth Mills. This is the story of my life. It all started when I was five. Thats the araw I became the opposite of normal.

I was just a little girl. I was in my own world. Thats a lie. Every little girl is in a world of her own. I acted as if I was five years older than I should be. I'm not normal, remember? Well I was at my Grandmothers house to spend the weekend. My cousin always prefered...

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Mary Sue 101: How to Spot Her and How to STAY AWAY

posted by Dearheart

Who is Mary Sue, you ask?

She is a pest, a scourge, a CURSE upon the world of fiction; a dull, cliche character who mostly invades the tagahanga fiction universe (especially in fandoms like Lord of the Rings or Harry Potter), but can also be found in original work, TV shows, books, movies, etc. In tagahanga fiction, she's usually the fangirl's way of inserting herself in the story and pairing herself up with the cutest/hottest character. This infamous evil can be identified sa pamamagitan ng the following traits:

1: She is stunningly/unusually beautiful. Oh she may deny it, claiming to be a "plain Jane" and modestly deflecting...

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Scottney or Duncney? Total drama chapter 1

posted by _bella__

Scott is my paborito boy character in total drama revenge of the island and Courtney is my paborito character in all total drama, so I like this couple better but I was once a Duncney tagahanga so... enjoy!

Scott: I wasn't scared to jump off the cliff into the water with sharks! I was just thinking that I would scare the pee out of the sharks, and make the challenge easier. Well, that's not my plan! Hehehe

Challenge ended elimination time

The villainous vultures won so the heroic hamsters had to vote and Courtney and Lindsay were at risk, but Lindsay got the boot

After 3 challenges Courtney got switched...

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Prologue for my first erotic story. Would you want to read on after pagbaba this?

posted by Annik

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Slowly consciousness came back to me. My head was pounding, it felt like it was going to explode. Especially at the back of my head something was wrong. I knew it, I felt it, yet I couldn’t get my head around how I got it exactly. I tried to get my hand up to touch my head and make out what was going on exactly, but soon found out I couldn’t get it up. It was strapped onto something. Slowly I took a deep breath, held it and let it go. The pounding didn’t stop, but it did help me to be able to start make out some stuff around me. I couldn’t open my eyes yet, but my ears gave...

How she loved her TV

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Lisa Tyler was weary after a long,hard araw at the pottery factory where she works.But as she approached her tahanan in the English city of Stoke-on-Trent,her puso lightened:soon she would be having a nice cup of tea,putting her feet up and watching Friends,her favourite TV series.But first,she needed to change out of her work clothes and pick up her 3-year-old son from his grandmother's house nearby.

As Lisa walked up her garden path,she noticed a light flashing on and off in an upstairs bedroom.A shiver went down her back.What if it was a burglar?Quietly,she crept round to the back of the house...