Pagsulat Article: Elaine and Cassie part 1

posted by alliXcobber

Cassie
I dragged my feet through the cold gray slush and shoved my hands deeper in my pockets. i hurried down the kalye with my head hung. Icy bits of hail pelted my back as they hurtled down from the dark, November sky above. As i entered the doors of the hospital, a strong balst of warm air hit me. i whipped the folded sheet of paper of out my cold pocket and warily walked up to the front desk. My dark brown hair hung like icicles.
"I'm Cassandra Little. I'm here to see Elaine Turner," i muttered.

Elaine
I coulnt move. i couldnt eat. i coulnt drink. i couldnt think. i coulnt even breathe right. The whitish curtain was pulled to either side and i saw a glimpse of the hospital hallway. In the middle there stood a girl. She looked beaten andshe was shivering. A small pool of water was formed around her feet as the snow melted off her tharshed out converse. Probably the only shoes she had. She had dark hair and eyes, with smudgey makeup. She didn't even try to smile. She wore a long black coat, but it didnt look very warm. The nurse abruptly sinabi "This is Cassandra. Shes here for..." she glanced at her clipboard, scowling"community service". She wore clean, kulay-rosas scrubs and had her hair pulled back in a neat blond bun, but the nurse still looked mean.
"Cassie" the girl interjected softly.
"Whatever" the nurse whispered coldly with an edge to her voice. She jerked away and whipped the curtains together as she strutted out.

Cassie
I walked toward the so called kama timidly. I was at loss for words. There didnt appear to be anything special about the room, ecept for a small bible that rested on a teeny bedside table. An elderly woman laid motionless underneath the pale covers. My shoes sqeuaked unnaturually loud as i stepped on the tile floor. A million tiny tubes extended from the womans body. Why did they put me here. i cant al with dying people! i just cant! I settled down in an uncomfortable chair, located near the bed.
"Hello," i managed to say.
A barely detectable smile appeared on the womans face.
"Nice to meet you". Her voice was rough, but surprisingly clear and loud. Loud for a dying person, that is.

Elaine
"How old are you, sweetie," I asked. She looked about 15, but ya never know.
"17" her voice was shaky and quiet. Ill bet you she was scared. Why was she scared? For goshs sake, she looked skinnier than I did! She had bags under her eyes. 17? 17 taon olds werent supposed to look like this! they were supposed to look happy and fresh! What on earth happened to that girl?!

writer67 sounds and feels like these words are out of an award winning prize. deep and describing, as if i was with closed eyes. with any crime comes a time for service. pity how others believe others need to pay more than once; or have to be rejudged. hope this writing from afore, is nearing the finish, it would be good to see it out in hard copy. to win the prize for literature. very heartfelt, 8 outa ten ;-]

txter32 absolutely love the describing words... it definately makes me want to read on... just one thing though. I'd try to make each readers POV a little longer. Right now its only about a paragraph... other than that... BRILLIANT!

alliXcobber thnx!

alliXcobber Im going to do a part 2.....

A Little Too Curious (part 10)

posted by noahnstar1616

-The susunod Day-
I woke up. The sun was shining in my eyes. I called my nurse and asked if she could close the blinds. She did. I grabbed my kama remote and pressed the button that allows new to sit up. Once that is done, I notice a mesa with a tray of eggs, baco, and kahel juice on it. I reach for the tray and put it on my lap. I begin to eat. Not bad, but not good either. I grab the telebisyon remote and turn on the television. I decide to watch Looney Tunes. Then my Grandma walked in.

"Good morning, sweetie." She was carrying a ziploc bag with a bagel inside. "Don't eat that stuff." Shm grabbed...

A Little Too Curious (part 9)

posted by noahnstar1616

My world was dark.

The only thing I could see was the events that just took place; me running into the road, me seeing the car, the car crashing into me. It was like someone put my mind on replay.

I opened my eyes. Everything was hazy. Something bright shined in my eyes. It stung. I turned my head. There are flashing lights everywhere. My eyes finally come back to focus.

Police cars. An ambulance. The car that hit me. My towns news station.

"She's waking up", I heard a man's voice say.

"Thank God", I heard Cameron say. I turned to look at him. Then it hit me. That was Cameron who hit me.

I tried...

Under the Moon Ch.1

posted by tbone_21

okay sooo this chapter is very long... I don't think the others will be quite this long but I wanted to get the descriptions of the characters out of the way, enjoy and comment!
The first thing I was aware of was the smell of a fire, I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, inhaling my new paborito smell. I was dancing, I could feel the cool grains of sand between my toes and could tell that the sun had long since sunk below the horizon. My mga kaibigan and I were pag-awit loudly to a fast paced song our feet pounding madly against the sand.
I didn’t pay attention to any of these things though I just...

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Death Targets Ch. 1

posted by problematic124

*******First of all before I start I would like to thank you for thanks for the comments. And I forgot to do this for the prologue but this belongs to me it’s my copyrights. Something I came up with. Enjoy!!!!!!!!
Present Time
Chapter 1
New beginnings
"I just don't understand why we didn't stay in Egypt...or England"
"Kyle your stepfather lives here"
"So"
"Were meant to live with him"
"So"
"Kyle"my mom sinabi in her warning voice
Exasperated I sighed and held up my hands in surrender.
"Kyle I know it's hard now but you'll get used to it"she sinabi gently
"Well will you at least let me check out that awesome...

Laughing heals the soul

posted by problematic124

Laughing heals the soul. What makes you laugh? Were all different. As a writer in training I'm experimenting on the"fun factor". Down the page are some funny stuff and I'd like to know which one makes you laugh the most. If you found a funny pic please post it and please comment on the pictures.
Now like I've sinabi we all have different tastes and it all is on you. Laughing is a very fun excersise.And these pictures are funny (or at least to me). Hold on to your socks lady and gentlemen it's time to get your laugh on.
Please comment!!!
Now let's have some laughs!

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The Prom

posted by OfficialKate

Humphrey sad :(

Kate: I remember this araw like it was yesterday when I was a young pup at lobo school there was a prom I made a huge mistake....

It was a warm spring evening the sunset was beautiful Humphrey looked at all the mga lobo dancing happily he frowned. He went over to his "date" Josephine. "Jossphine I need you to dance like you've never danced before I need to let Kate know I'm the one for her!" Josephine frowned and laughed. "Yeah well shes and alpha your an omega." "Well than why am I with you, your an alpha." Humphrey scolded. "We are a fake couple your impressing Kate I'm impressing Skeeter." Josephine...

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Sometimes its easier

posted by AshleyA-Brizzle

Sometimes its Easier to inore the truth

to forget about everything

to sit in a closet and hide forever

Sometimes its Easier, to blame yourself

To think its your falt

To ipakita no emotion

Sometimes It's easier to keep everything inside

to not let anyone know

to hide everything.

To me, Its easier to say something

To talk

to cry

Its easier to Feel Emotions

Anger, rage, Sadness,

but not fear

Fear is my enemey

He wants to take over my mind

Keep me locked up inside.

I'm tired of being scared

I'm tired of being locked in my own world

I'm tired of being a prisoner.

I will not be afraid,

I will not Let him Win

Getting sa pamamagitan ng Ch. 20

posted by para-scence

"Do you have asthma?" the gym teacher asked me. My thoughts flickered to Emery. He had asthma, right? Breathlessly, I nodded. "Go get your inhaler. Emery, go with her." Emery helped get me up, and we went inside, as I was taking my last breaths.

"Give me.." I rasped. "Your inhaler."

"What?" Emery asked, unbelieving.

"Get me your inhaler," I sinabi through my teeth. My head started to spin. Quickly, Emery ran into the boys' locker room. A couple moments later, he returned with his inhaler, and handed it to me. I pumped some of it into my mouth, and thankfully it helped a bit. I sat there on the floor...

Getting sa pamamagitan ng Ch. 18

posted by para-scence

"Shelby? Are you ok? Kirsten sinabi you've been pagganap weird lately..." Paige said, coming into my room. I laid back on my bed, closing my eyes so she couldn't see them.

"I'm fine," I sighed. "Just leave me alone." There was a long silence.

"...Has school gotten better?" I nodded, madami than necessary. "Make any new friends?"

"Yep..." I said, opening my eyes. I stared at the ceiling, then closed them again and sighed. A apoy started to burn in my chest. Why couldn't she just leave me alone? She was nosy and bossy.

"Have you done your chores yet?"

"No!" I whined. I pushed my palms against my eyes,...

Getting sa pamamagitan ng Ch. 17

posted by para-scence

"I think it's working," Carissa smiled at me. I sat between her and Rigby on the bench. Already, I felt great. My puso was racing, and I almost couldn't sit still. After a few moments though, my eyes started to hurt. "They're just dilating," Carissa told me. "Here." She took off her sunglasses and handed them to me. I noticed her eyes seemed sunken in, and there were gray circles underneath her eyes. She blew her cigarette smoke in my direction.

"Thanks," I sinabi energetically. My mind was racing, I could barely spit out the words.

"Just don't tell anyone," Jordan sinabi on the other side of...

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Stare [short story]

posted by RiverIce

I sit there in my seat
when the teacher sees me
I stare at her
"do your work,"
she says.
I look at her with anger
I look at my math page
The problems stare at me
the kampanilya rings
"Ahhh!" I yell in anger.
people stare at me
I stare at them back.
they run out of the class room
I sit there until the teacher finally sees me.
"you may be dismissed," she says.
I still sit there.
"go," she says.
I stare at her.
She stares at me.
We stare.
"go... don't make me send you to detention,"
I stare at her
she looks at me.
"Ok, you asked for it, Richard, Detention,"
I get up.
Still staring.
I leave and walk to the office.
I stare at the...

We Were Dared [slash]

posted by Insight357

“Hey, bitches!” Espen laughed throwing open the door. His blonde hair fell into his eyes. “Come on in,” he stepped aside and let us all pass. One sa pamamagitan ng one, we all trailed into the crowded, alcohol smelling living room.
Music was softly playing behind everyone’s chatter. Boys and girls danced with and groped one another. In a corner, some students I recognized sat in a group smoking. A few boys stood in the kitchen, cups of liquor in their hands.
“Tatum, Nia, and I are going with Shayde and Lear to pick a game, you coming?” Celeste asked...

THE Exiled; prologue

posted by nick_cross

The Exiled
Story setting:
Era: future
Character setting: witch and wizards, vampires, werewolves, phoenix man, humans
Setting: earth, United States
World setting: future, world war??, nations combine to make 3 empires: wizard empire, empire of man, world empire.
PROLOGUE:
For centuries we lived harmoniously; we had two different worlds. Two very different worlds. Their world was lived freely and without secrecy. In our world, that’s what it was all about, secrecy. Don’t make too much noise, don’t seem so noticeable, and most important, under no circumstances, don’t ever get caught. For a while...

Abandoned chapter 2

posted by Seastar4374

I don't know what to think of waking up practicially every oras except for this: 'Why the hell does this happen?!' I was seariously exhausted and I hardly slept. Apperiently the twins are hourly alarm clocks or something because thats what it feels like. Once they fell asleep once again I got my chance. I layed down on the sopa and yawned. I only had 12 hours of sleep,oh an hourly basis one oras per every two. I finally fell asleep yet again. They were quiet for two hours this time up until the boy started crying. I groaned and stood up exuhausted. I walk to him. "Whtas wrong baby? Huh?"...

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My Crazy Bounty Hunter Life

posted by tigerseye43

I got up to the sound of glass crashing to the floor. I ran to my little kusina to see a man in a black ski mask and overalls standing in my kitchen. I ran at him to throw a manuntok or two but when I extended my arm to hit him, he grabbed my arm and stabbed my with a knife.As the kutsilyo cut through my skin I screamed in pain, with a few cuss words to go along with it. Then as I fell to the floor in pain, the thief ran out my door and fled from my house. What was going on, I thought. Why was that man in my house. Then I looked around to see what he had broken. When I saw what he had broken, I...

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Dear Alex...

posted by WildCherryWolf

Dear You Know Who You Are,

Love is a deep feeling, and what I felt for you was never love. It was...... I'm not sure, but not love. pag-ibig is deep. This only scratched the surface.

Your long blonde hair made you irresistible. Your ice blue eyes were enchanting, made me feel like I was walking on heaven. Your pale skin made me feel like I was in fake pag-ibig with a monster, though. My mga kaibigan teased me and you because of it.

Those arguments we had over the phone, I wish I could've spat the words at you. It would've been madami satisfying. Seeing your reaction. Hearing you overreact to everything.

You...

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Short story

posted by liissaaxx

I can’t even remember why I chose to marry you!” She yelled. Her beautiful face filled with anger, those sparkling brown eyes that I have loved since araw one, bore into me with no affection. She had sinabi them, the words I never wanted to hear.
The fight had been going on for an oras now and I started to yell back, I could no longer control myself. Our first real fight in five years. I knew she would be over it soon and that big bright smile will light up her face, but I was overwhelmed too. I was hurt. But I stopped myself.
There were no lights on in our house; the outside light had faded...

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Faceless Angel

posted by WildCherryWolf

I was the only one in this world, this blank space. It was obviously a dream, no other place would only contain a 13 taon old girl with an overactive imagination. I heard small cries, and I wondered if I truly was the only thing on this world. Then, I ran.

I ran the lengths and widths of the blank world, and kept running until I found a rock. A small, grey rock. Colorless. What was a little kore interesting was the figure on tuktok of the rocks. She had black hair, as black as a rook's wing, and it made a curtain around her face. She wore grey, a simple grey dress. On her feet were rags. But her...

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BAD MEMORIES (POEM)

posted by r260897

Memories and grief of my heart
Are still buried somewhere
I can’t cry neither I can freely laugh
What if they don’t know my past
I have not forget it yet
I still remember the same Zean with the same Zeal
But not in flashes neither in cars
In backstage of life with trembling hunger
Hunger in eyes and lips dry
No money in pocket but Zeal on shoulder
With memories of ‘Love’ and burning heart
Now my clothes are branded
And my shoes are best, pocket heavy with dollars
But with this all my puso is all heavy
With secrets of past
Pleasures can bury them but cannot vanish
I still look pasulong to death
When all my secrets will disappear, my pain will end
Also with my life..end will come to my BAD MEMORIES. 

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A Short story

posted by coolie

“Pump! Pump!” went my pounding puso as I trembled across the deserted hallway of school. As I looked around in this hall of nothingness, I realized that I was the fist person here. However, I had the feeling that I was being watched, and followed. It was not a good feeling
I didn’t mind getting to school early because I always liked watching the other kids scatter out on the playground one sa pamamagitan ng one, and watching them sumali different games. I was too afraid to play the games that the other boys played. Football and their aggressive chasing games just seemed dangerous, and I couldn’t stand...