this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good or not before I ibigay it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear pag-ibig you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your pag-ibig is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our pag-ibig is coming to its new close.
mga kulay were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would pag-ibig to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our pag-ibig has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our pag-ibig left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying pag-ibig was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me pag-ibig would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear pag-ibig you once were a shining ray.
In my eyes you meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about you is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your pag-ibig is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our pag-ibig is coming to its new close.
mga kulay were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would pag-ibig to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our pag-ibig has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our pag-ibig left it took you along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying pag-ibig was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me pag-ibig would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
He didn’t want money or fancy cars; all he wanted was to be loved sa pamamagitan ng someone, any one at all. He needed someone to care about him, not his wealth, not his ties to the rich and famous, someone that actually cared about him, the boy with bright blue eyes that sparkled in the sunlight, curly raven black hair and a boyish grin permanently plastered on his face hiding the pain of being alone. Yet no one did, all they saw was the heir to the Jeffrey Empire, the boy that was going to inherited it all. The boy, who was the prefect son living up to the Jeffrey name. They never saw the boy’s who’s arms were covered in cuts, the kutsilyo against his skin, the blood dripping down staining the carpet, his eyes closing never to open again. No one read the note tucked into his pocket cause no one cared.
I’m finished
I’m done
I can’t do this anymore
I’m through
I can’t last another second
It’s all I’ve ever seen
Surrounded sa pamamagitan ng chaos
Filled with fear
Its’ all I can think about
All the Nawawala love
All the broken hearts
All the destroyed dreams
All the hopeless children
And devastated parents
Everyone who turned their cheek
Who ignored the cries
Of help and distress
No madami kindness
Only monsters and demons
Who always kill
You took her from me
And now you’ll pay
‘Cause I have one final thing to say
—Good-bye World
—Hello Death and eternity
I’m done
I can’t do this anymore
I’m through
I can’t last another second
It’s all I’ve ever seen
Surrounded sa pamamagitan ng chaos
Filled with fear
Its’ all I can think about
All the Nawawala love
All the broken hearts
All the destroyed dreams
All the hopeless children
And devastated parents
Everyone who turned their cheek
Who ignored the cries
Of help and distress
No madami kindness
Only monsters and demons
Who always kill
You took her from me
And now you’ll pay
‘Cause I have one final thing to say
—Good-bye World
—Hello Death and eternity
There is strength in my heart.
I have looked for it
For decades now.
Yet I have not found it before.
Now I have.
It will get me over every obstacle,
Every region,
Every country.
It makes me proud
To see this.
To see my strength
Laying there,
Waiting for me.
And me only.
This type of strength
Is called courage.
Perseverance.
Perseverance is the best type
Of strength possible.
And I have it.
Yes, me.
Never before,
Will you see me cower within the shadows
Again, like before.
I have changed.
And I am sure you will see that.
I have strength in my heart.
I have looked for it
For decades now.
Yet I have not found it before.
Now I have.
It will get me over every obstacle,
Every region,
Every country.
It makes me proud
To see this.
To see my strength
Laying there,
Waiting for me.
And me only.
This type of strength
Is called courage.
Perseverance.
Perseverance is the best type
Of strength possible.
And I have it.
Yes, me.
Never before,
Will you see me cower within the shadows
Again, like before.
I have changed.
And I am sure you will see that.
I have strength in my heart.
I looked into the window
to see the girl before me.
she was gorgeous, and beautiful
She looked strong,
she looked independent.
Her Mask was no longer there,
but what was on the outside was visible.
You can see the scars on her heart,
you can see the hurt in her eyes,
and the pain on her face.
But you can also see how it made her stronger.
She has sinabi "Enough is Enough, Today is the Day, and today i will be victorious"
she strikes the match,
and drops the flame, to burn her past
She smiles at me, and touches her face,
and she sinabi the words "Today is the Day"
Today I finally discovered, The girl looking back at her,
was me. :)
to see the girl before me.
she was gorgeous, and beautiful
She looked strong,
she looked independent.
Her Mask was no longer there,
but what was on the outside was visible.
You can see the scars on her heart,
you can see the hurt in her eyes,
and the pain on her face.
But you can also see how it made her stronger.
She has sinabi "Enough is Enough, Today is the Day, and today i will be victorious"
she strikes the match,
and drops the flame, to burn her past
She smiles at me, and touches her face,
and she sinabi the words "Today is the Day"
Today I finally discovered, The girl looking back at her,
was me. :)