i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
you were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house or fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
you did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
you sinabi your chance at pag-ibig had past you sa pamamagitan ng
i told i'm here so dont you cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
you were like my juliet and i your romeo
you pag-ibig me i pag-ibig you thats all i need to know
no longer will you dream of pag-ibig thats true
no longer will i wander my paghahanap has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd pag-ibig some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
You are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as you lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are puso at name.
You may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to ipakita the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
You are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as you lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are puso at name.
You may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to ipakita the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.