Penguins of Madagascar Article: when shadows enter light-chapter 1: two is sometimes better than one :D

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when shadows enter light-chapter 1: two is sometimes better than one :D

posted by penguin014

*0200 hours ibong dagat HQ*
Kowalski: here's the coffee you requested skipper, brewed to perfection with a fresh fish.
Skipper: greatly appreciated kowalski, besides the fact you woke me up at 2:00 in the morning...anyways,what is the important "explosion" you wanted to ipakita me?
K: well,actually,if in the time of need, an explosion would be quite well for this, you see when you syntheticly-
S: just tell me what it does, I Nawawala you at well.
K: -_- ok,their biomachanicle androids,somewhat similar to Francis's,but they can change into any animal you want them to be,and they NEVER disobey a ibong dagat when told...
*another kowalski enters from the lab with glowing blue eyes and with another skipper*
Android kowalski:...thus helping in situations when the team is unavailable...
K: this will be the greatest-
P: what's going on? I'm seeing double! What's-GAH!
Android private: why so confused? :)
*A.S whispers to private*
P: ohh...*gasp!* can I have an extra?!?!
K: *sigh* in the back...
P: yay!
*private rushes out and brings back a small grey robot past the now 4 androids of the whole team and rushes to the t.v. playing lunacorns*
A.K: what's going on?
A.R: I dunno.
S: confused...
Private & Rico: WHOOO HOOOO!!
*both of them burst through the HQ on a purple lunacorn with glowing blue eyes*
P: THIS IS AMAZING!
S: well...atta' boy kowalski! This is the beginning of a wonderful future!
*kowalski stared in amazement watching his inventions turn the night into joy...in the backround Android Rico showed all was not well,that in moments...the rue of the worst fate unimagined can ipakita up in any moment...

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penguin014 *may contain type-os!* R=Rico P=private S=skipper K=kowalski A.R=Android Rico A.K=android kowalski A.S=android skipper A.P=android private

Penguinangel I think that the best kind of pie is pumpkin, but I like apple, too. Especially when it's still warm and you put a scoop of vanilla ice cream on it... X3 Well, you said to leave a comment about pie. Be careful what you wish for. XD I like the the story, but I will say it's a bit confusing with the abbreviations. Kinda mind-racking trying to keep track of who's saying what.

penguin014 ^I know I sped typed >.< btw my favs Apple XD

Penguinangel Hm, well here's a bit of advice then. People appreciate when you put time into fanfics. You don't need to be on a super rush to post it as soon as possible. It's better to take the time to look over your work first. Just little things like format and spelling/grammar can make a story look a lot better.

ImAnEasel Indeed. Also, if anybody cares, my favourite type of pie is rhubarb. :) By the way,love the story! Good humour! I didn't quite get what you were on about, at the end, though...

penguin014 ^That's the whole point XD Basicly there's a good chance something is not right.

ImAnEasel ^ OHHHHHHHH! XD Wow, I feel dumb, now! Lol.