My song-writing "lyrics" ..please read and tell me what u think!

Steady steps and fast heartbeats
look around, there's nothing but empty seats
trying to hold on , to stand on my feet

it's getting dark, closer to the edge
broken hearts, on a broken bridge
where we are, is closer to the end

Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

New hope, with every prayer
From the ones who really care
to someone's fighting somewhere

The World Will BE Better Than Before
When We Create pag-ibig Not War
When We Realize What We're Fighting For


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

I Just Wanna Go Back To The Time
When Everything Was Fine
When There Was nothing Called Mine
It Was All Ours


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight