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Kragfan1910 said:
There is something wrong with it, and I'm having a hard time placing it....


OH! Hes wearing a v neck. Absolutely disgusting.
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Whatever
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Stalag said:
What's wrong with his pants , I mean the place where sun do not rise looks very awkward.
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Tried to do wrinkles on the pants, but it didn't come out well
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CheetahGirl5147 said:
It's not bad, it just needs a little work.
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kay
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8theGreat said:
It's not awful but there's room for work. The anatomy is a bit off and his body is a bit lopsided. The clothing is a bit awkward as well as clothes don't hang on people quite like that. The pose is not very interesting either, but that's something that'll come better to you if you draw more.

It's not awful, though, and you could be really good if you were to practice some more.
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Can you tell me whats wrong with the anatomy? I'm aware that the clothing looks off. I tried to make wrinkles on them,but I failed. It looks lopsided because of the angle I took the picture in. As for the pose, I really couldn't think of any interesting pose and drawing hands is always a pain, but thanks for sharing your insight.
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^In terms of anatomy being wrong, it's mostly small things that are difficult for me to point out without physically being there to point them out. The forearm and the upperarm on the right side are dispropotionate to one another, for instance. I also think his waist is a wee bit too small in propotion to the rest of his body, and the two sides of his body don't seem symmetrical, partifularly his shoulders. I also think his hands may be on backards unless his palms are meant to be facing the viewer. Other than that, the anatomy and proportion mistakes are mostly minor things that you'll pick up on when practicing madami and using reference.
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If you think it could help, I, without any exceptions, have one or madami of these drawing bases when I do art. You don't have to use them, but they could help. link
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ChiliPepperLuv said:
I really like it.
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Thanks
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poulamikundu said:
The face is absolutely perfect but you should work madami on the body. :)
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shaneoohmac13 said:
uy IT IS NOT BAD AT ALL EH!
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zanhar1 said:
Your drawing style reminds me of my own. That said, the proportions are off lol. That's my huge issue as well. But the face and head look really great.
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Your drawing style reminds me of my own. That said, the proportions are off lol. That's my huge issue as well. But the face and head look really great.
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Nick3600 said:
2/10 not one human alupihan to be seen
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zutaradragon said:
I'm assuming you're here for constructive criticism...if not then you may wanna skip pagbaba this...

The arms are to thin and the waist is to feminine (unless that's what you were going for)
Also, that's not how pants work. I've noticed some people under-do the wrinkles and some people over-do them and this is definitely over-done.
The arms are jointed in the wrong place. The upper arm is about the same size as the lower arm.
The shoulders are also slightly to broad. As a general rule of scale the shoulders should be 3 heads wide, slightly less on females.
You've got no separation between clothes and skin or sando and pants. sa pamamagitan ng that I mean no height separation. Clothes are on tuktok of skin and yours look like they were painted on to him.
The shoulder bulge is to sudden, and thus doesn't look as smooth as it should.
And you need practice with hands...but if we're being honest most people need practice with hands...
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I'm assuming you're here for constructive criticism...if not then you may wanna skip pagbaba this... The arms are to thin and the waist is to feminine (unless that's what you were going for) Also, that's not how pants work. I've noticed some people under-do the wrinkles and some people over-do them and this is definitely over-done. The arms are jointed in the wrong place. The upper arm is about the same size as the lower arm. The shoulders are also slightly to broad. As a general rule of scale the shoulders should be 3 heads wide, slightly less on females. You've got no separation between clothes and skin or sando and pants. sa pamamagitan ng that I mean no height separation. Clothes are on tuktok of skin and yours look like they were painted on to him. The shoulder bulge is to sudden, and thus doesn't look as smooth as it should. And you need practice with hands...but if we're being honest most people need practice with hands...
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Thanks for your feedback! Yeah I really hate drawing hands and arms (which I need madami practice on). Yeah I was disappointed with how the wrinkles came out. As far the waist goes, I like V torsos, I might of gone too far though haha. Is there anything good about it?
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Sunflame said:
uh...
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