In a small villge, deep inside the Green burol Zone...
"Just hang in there, dear...it will all be over soon..." one Echidna says. The one he is talking to is Rana the Echidna, a soon-to-be proud mother. As Thundros, Rana's wife, stands outside the door waiting, Rana is delivering her baby boy. The doctor comes outside to speak with Thundros. "You're son has arrived, sir." Thundros walks inside, seeing that his son, whom they had decided to name Cyber, is lying asleep in Rana's arms. "He's so beautiful..." Rana sighs. "Yeah...such a cute young boy..." Thundros adds. One doctor gasps loudly and eclaims, "He has a birthmark shaped like a tornado on his right arm!!!!" The oldest doctor walks over and examines the mark. "WE HAVE BEEN BLESSED!!!! THIS YOUNG BOY IS THE ELEMENTAL ECHIDNA OF OUR TIMELINE!!!" he exclaims happily. This is now. But our story begins back 10,000 years into the past, when Rioka, the 1st ever elemental Echidna, was still living...
"Well, now...this oughta be fun." Rioka sighed, mounting his horse, "a mission to the tuktok of Mt. Hurricolian...an adenture worth my time..." Rioka then had his horse run as fast as it could towards the deadly volcano. A black hedgehog on a horse ran towards Rioka. "Rioka, what's the rush? I always thought of you as the slow 'n' steady type!" he exclaimed. "Sorry, Char. Kind of in a hurry here. The bulkan erupts in about 10 minutes, and I have to stop Dr. Maliniko from collecting the lava and using it to destroy the town!" Rioka replied, making his horse run faster. When they arrived at the volcano...
"Ya did good, Hurricos..." Rioka explained to his horse, "Take a good rest." Rioka then looked up at the perilous peak of the mountain he was about to climb. "No big deal. Only the tallest mountain in Mobius. I can handle this." he then caught a gust of wind and used it to fly to the tuktok of Mt. Hurricolian. When he arrived...
Dr. Maliniko laughed maniacly in the face of the restricted Fox, Jasmine. "Try to stop me all on your own, eh? Nice try, but no luck!! Now I will collect the lava from the erupting bulkan and use it to destroy Hurricos Village!!!!" Dr. Maliniko chortled. "She had help, Maliniko!" Charcoal exclaimed as he and Rioka reached the tuktok of the mountain. "Let her go." Rioka commanded. Maliniko just laughed in their faces. "FOOLS!!!! The bulkan is about to erupt either way!!! I win this time!!!" he exclaimed as lava spewed up behind him. Maliniko used his machine to collect the lava spewing from the deeadly rock. Rioka used his powers to control wind in order to collect all the lava and knock Maliniko into the still boiling lava below. He then dropped all the lava back on tuktok of him. "Curse you, Team Hurricos!!!! I WILL GET MY REVENGE!!!!!" Maliniko exclaimed as he burned in the lava. Rioka was then treated as a grand hero sa pamamagitan ng all of his comrades and family members.
Back in current time...
"Wow...will my child be as famous as the Great Rioka, I wonder...?" Rana thinks to herself. "My boy will accomplish great things in his lifetime...maybe even destroy that o-good Eggman..." Thundros thinks to himself.
"Just hang in there, dear...it will all be over soon..." one Echidna says. The one he is talking to is Rana the Echidna, a soon-to-be proud mother. As Thundros, Rana's wife, stands outside the door waiting, Rana is delivering her baby boy. The doctor comes outside to speak with Thundros. "You're son has arrived, sir." Thundros walks inside, seeing that his son, whom they had decided to name Cyber, is lying asleep in Rana's arms. "He's so beautiful..." Rana sighs. "Yeah...such a cute young boy..." Thundros adds. One doctor gasps loudly and eclaims, "He has a birthmark shaped like a tornado on his right arm!!!!" The oldest doctor walks over and examines the mark. "WE HAVE BEEN BLESSED!!!! THIS YOUNG BOY IS THE ELEMENTAL ECHIDNA OF OUR TIMELINE!!!" he exclaims happily. This is now. But our story begins back 10,000 years into the past, when Rioka, the 1st ever elemental Echidna, was still living...
"Well, now...this oughta be fun." Rioka sighed, mounting his horse, "a mission to the tuktok of Mt. Hurricolian...an adenture worth my time..." Rioka then had his horse run as fast as it could towards the deadly volcano. A black hedgehog on a horse ran towards Rioka. "Rioka, what's the rush? I always thought of you as the slow 'n' steady type!" he exclaimed. "Sorry, Char. Kind of in a hurry here. The bulkan erupts in about 10 minutes, and I have to stop Dr. Maliniko from collecting the lava and using it to destroy the town!" Rioka replied, making his horse run faster. When they arrived at the volcano...
"Ya did good, Hurricos..." Rioka explained to his horse, "Take a good rest." Rioka then looked up at the perilous peak of the mountain he was about to climb. "No big deal. Only the tallest mountain in Mobius. I can handle this." he then caught a gust of wind and used it to fly to the tuktok of Mt. Hurricolian. When he arrived...
Dr. Maliniko laughed maniacly in the face of the restricted Fox, Jasmine. "Try to stop me all on your own, eh? Nice try, but no luck!! Now I will collect the lava from the erupting bulkan and use it to destroy Hurricos Village!!!!" Dr. Maliniko chortled. "She had help, Maliniko!" Charcoal exclaimed as he and Rioka reached the tuktok of the mountain. "Let her go." Rioka commanded. Maliniko just laughed in their faces. "FOOLS!!!! The bulkan is about to erupt either way!!! I win this time!!!" he exclaimed as lava spewed up behind him. Maliniko used his machine to collect the lava spewing from the deeadly rock. Rioka used his powers to control wind in order to collect all the lava and knock Maliniko into the still boiling lava below. He then dropped all the lava back on tuktok of him. "Curse you, Team Hurricos!!!! I WILL GET MY REVENGE!!!!!" Maliniko exclaimed as he burned in the lava. Rioka was then treated as a grand hero sa pamamagitan ng all of his comrades and family members.
Back in current time...
"Wow...will my child be as famous as the Great Rioka, I wonder...?" Rana thinks to herself. "My boy will accomplish great things in his lifetime...maybe even destroy that o-good Eggman..." Thundros thinks to himself.
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic tagahanga Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's disensyo fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Nawawala my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. mga kaibigan that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for pagbaba this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start susunod week. 1/12/12)